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Reviewer: Inwen (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:27 AM · On: Patience
Spiders and most other bugs in general.
And with all the progress made, there is always a step back isn't there?
Great chapter, loved Bella's POV, I felt as nervous as she did.
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Patience
oh no. oh. NO! aaahh! love it! cant wait for more Oxo
Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Patience
I'm afraid of heights but I am glad that Bella took the leap of faith.
Reviewer: Chalice Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Patience
ooooo Nice Twist.. I didn't see that one coming.Poor girl is gonna be competing against herself. Crazy.
So Edward kept her to himself all night and almost all day and we get nothing? No lemon, no kissing, nothing? I feel cheap and used.. banged hard, rode rough, and hung up wet..
No more of that!
Luh ya
Reviewer: Mirabel (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Aisle C
I love how Edward notices Bella trying to literally cool herself down so she doesn´t cry. He´s so perceptive, and it reminded me of one of the former chapters in which Bella ached to be the kind of muse that inspires D88. She literally has no idea that Edward has that kind of caring and observant eye that´s drawn to her every move, every breath. I think in a way that´s what we all want, no? For someone to notice us that way.
Anyway, on to the weather, it´s been hot all day in Madrid, but finally cool enough at night. Just so you know how good this story is, I paid one euro for an hour in order to currently sit in an internet cafe and read your story while on vacation in Spain. Pretty pathetic to some, but totally worthwhile to me. Thanks for another great chapter!
Reviewer: Char (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:04 PM · On: Aisle C
Ah, you asking us about the weather. Lol.
Here it's just unseasonably gloomy and overcast. Compared to the sunny days we had last week, it's very depressing. But, hey, it's England. What do you expect? It seems to be lightening up a little, though (touch wood). I'm already craving my Vitamin D. I really don't want to become one of those crazy deficients, shying away from all things 'sun'.
Brilliant chapter, and I hope you write more soon. Edward and Bella are so sweet, and I'm absolutely in love with their little poem blog/ online friendship thing. They are probably a pair of the most oblivious people I've ever seen, though. Do they not see ANY of the parallels in their lives? They're FREAKILY similar, though, in the US it probably isn't so rare that you meet people with such similar lives. Here... well, being the cynical people we are, we'd probably assume we had a stalker after us, or a paedophile, or something of the sorts.
Reviewer: yeuxdor (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 10:28 AM · On: Aisle C
I can't believe I forgot to put this on alert! I think this story is fucking brilliant. Oops. Not exactly good literary criticism. But accurate!
Reviewer: Bemused_Banana (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Aisle C
Cloudy.
Love your story. it's just what I needed.
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Aisle C
Hot and humid!!! I realized now why you have a ribbon on this story. It is really good. I wonder though, how long it is going to take them show their feelings for each other and discover they have been communicating this whole time. I love the angst and the happy times.
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 06:05 PM · On: House Cullen
Closer - NIN
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Mindless
Fuji Apple Chicken Salad from Panera..... YUM!!!!!
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Unconfessional
Another State of Mind - Social Distortion. I know it's not really angry sounding but I like to blare it when I've had a bad day at work. It soothes me. Angry songs soothe me.
Reviewer: Emily Belle (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Aisle C
thunderstorms
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Lost Angeles
Love Song by The Cure. My all time favorite band. I was pleased to see you used that song for this chapter, it was perfect!!!!!!
Reviewer: Okkervil (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Aisle C
What a great chapter! I love how they're both finally getting the nerve to show their feelings. I love how you portrayed the performance. Your imagery is vivid and your characters are vibrant. Love it!
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Type set
CUNT!!!! I think it's funny.
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Aisle C
It's raining here...ugh!
Great chapter! Yippee she sang!! Can't wait for more....
Reviewer: progressiveprincess (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 02:51 PM · On: Invited and Confused
I dream, and I almost always remember what I dream. However, I've yet to have a dream where Robert and I are involved. Damn it!!!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Aisle C
First, a question: what MoFtiV stands for??
The weather here is very hot on summers, like 33°C doesn't rain much either, even the nights are hot. Winters are cold but not that much cos it rarely snows. It rains a lot, though. Fall and spring are pretty much the same, temps 20-25°, it rains somewhat, we get also some electrical storms and the nights are tepid. I love these times, but they don't last much cos summer and winters are starting to fuse themselves, we don't get the nice transition as before. Global warming is really starting to affect the weather here.
On to the story!! What's wrong with these two!! They can't have a decent verbal communication even if it kills them!! LOL They really do need to start texting their dialogues cos otherwise they'll be in an eternal loop of misconceptions. Talking about loops, so glad Bella found a loophole to her stage freight ;).
Love your story!! Hope you update soon!! Thanx!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Aisle C
Weather's warm and sunny here!
Yes, Bella, why won't you let Edward take you out for icecream!? Loved the chapter.
Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Aisle C
Oh what a cliffhanger. Wonderful story. I can't wait for an update. Great, Great, Great story.
Reviewer: Angie Baby (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Aisle C
it's dark gray, a thick, heavy blanket that envelopes you as soon as you walk outside into the heat of summer...weighted with rain that hasn't fallen yet...
makes me feel melancholy & contemplative & lonely...
I completely adore the way you are still having them dance around each other...relationships aren't easy & I love the insecurity because it makes them that much more real.
Reviewer: SecretlySeverus (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 03:39 AM · On: Aisle C
I love the 'your mood swings are giving me whiplash!' line and the last one as well-- way to be direct Edward! Talk about misunderstandings!
The weather where I am is cloudy... and in the mid/upper 70's, but at least it's not raining... yet.
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Aisle C
“So?” I said, defensive. “Do you want some?” -- That has to be my favorite line. I have no idea why, but it sounded hilarious and I loved it! She's so pissed off, but she still asks him if he wants some, in her pissed off tone LOL love it. But hell, I'd be effing pissed if my own Edward was schizo too!
LMAO I love the last line too. WTF. It's so fucking weird and sweet and strange and cute. And when the fuck are they gonna find out that they're each other?! Gaw. It's killin' me more and more. Torture! Please!
I live in Vancouver, WA, so the weather is pretty fucking close to Forks.
Reviewer: Tasty (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Mindless
This was one of my favorite chapters. Bella tough and fighting for herself with Edward letting her until the very end when he rescues them both--lovely.
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