Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Can't wait for more, hope you hurry yo update!!!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
haha, bet Edward isn't going to forget that rofl!
Reviewer: agemenu (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Tutors & 31's.
I'm from the Bay (and I even got into SFSU) so I'm loving how you're incorporating the city (:
Author's Response: I'm insanely jealous of you right now. I miss it! I hope--when I finally friggin finish 60 units--that they'll accept me back!
Reviewer: anna123 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons
This is a really good story:D I don't like that Adrian person at all though! lol
Author's Response: Lol that seems to be a common occurrence. ;) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
lol.. Rosalie's in some deep bella doodoo..... I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
I adore your chapters, honestly I do. I love the way you write Bella, she's snarky and I love it. Of course it HAD to be Edward who found her Victoria's Secret shopping bag, that's just hilarious. It was interesting to see the two of them interact without them constantly insulting each other. I look forward to your next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate it so much, and I appreciate that you review every chapter! You're awesome. :)
Yeah, I figured I'd give them a break...for a little while. heh.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Seriously loved reading every word of this. Loved getting an insight to her freindships with Rose and Angela. So cute how she and Emmett interacted and I feel Edward is going to get a n earful on how cool Bella really is!Is our rose trying to work her matchmaking on Edward and bella? mm. I think she totally is! Loved how Bella interacted with edward and cannot wait to see what he was actually thinking when rose said that the thong was indeed Bella's!! HAHA!! Totally looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
LOL. You're very perceptive to foreshadowing. ;) Thanks for the review!!!
Author's Response: LOL. You're very perceptive to foreshadowing. ;) Thanks for the review!!!
Reviewer: lily_zen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Holyjeebus, this is funny. I really hope you update soon.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
oooh....nice set up Rosalie! Can't wait to read what's going to happen at the club!! Update soon please!
Reviewer: cindy75 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
that was funny as shit.more please..
Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Funny!!! Love Angry Bella and Bitchy Rosalie!!!
Also loved San Francisco description...
Waiting for "Club Night"!! Guessing Edward and Bella will have a competitive "dance off"???!!
Author's Response: Hahaha nooooot quite. ;)
Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
I seriously laughed the entire time I read this chapter. Pure gold from Eric to Emmett to Rosalie! And I completely caught on to Rosalie's little scheme the second she grabbed the Victoria's Secret bag :-). Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I laughed a lot while writing this chapter; partly because in my head I knew exactly what all three of them were thinking at every point, and it was overwhelming! haha :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
Haha Rosalie is one sneaky bitch.
I'd be interested to see how Edward found that little episode!
Author's Response: Oh, you will. Haha. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
"Technicalities"
Hehe, Oh I love Rosalie! So devious, so fabulous, and in soo much trouble! I hope there's an EPOV coming up, can't wait to hear what he thinks of the thong!
Author's Response: I love writing Rosalie! She's pretty damn awesome. Thanks!
Reviewer: BRANDY_D (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
ahhhh.....it was nice to see Edward and Bella talking to each other without getting all pissy and rude....
Reviewer: Hidden_Forces (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
This was an awesome chpt!! And OH.MY.GAWD!! That second to the last line had me laughing so hard that I had to cross my legs and wipe tears from my eyes! Priceless. Bring on more sweetie!
Hugs,
Kristi
Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
DAMN STRAIGHT !
what a hoe-bag !
a white-hot , sly , manipulative hoe-bag !
UPDATE .
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs
I get so excited every time I see that you have updated even though I've already read the chapter lmao
And we can still text all day, we did before - I'll just be on a computer instead of a phone :)
In 48 hours I'll be on a plane home.
Author's Response: Haha, you silly, silly girl :)
Noooo, don't go home. lol
Reviewer: Doomed Youth (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
really awesome chapter.
love the myspace pictures thing..
:D:D:D
Reviewer: 3daygirl (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
I just have to comment and tell you how much I LOVE the relationship your Bella has with Jake. Their first phone conversation had me cracking up, hell, I'm still laughing about it!!!!!
Author's Response: Haha good! I love making people laugh. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
OMG!! LOVED this chapter! Bella trying to figure out why Edward gets under her skinn so much!!!!! I see that Bella and Edward will be home in Forks at the same time! Is this when his feeling for her will change? I wonder what is going to happen when he sees her with Jake? Will he get jealous? OMG!! Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: Maximista (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
I love the banter between the characters. It's realistic...and funny. You know when you act completely heinous towards someone because you like them, but won't admit it to yourself because you don't really want to like them? You've really got that down in Bella's irrational judginess when it comes to Edward. I'm really hoping they'll all be on the same plane together because that would be awkward. And I'm also really hoping that Edward does, in fact, feed Jasper goldfish crackers at some point. Maybe it'll help them bond and bring them closer together? They don't seem to connect as roommates yet...you know, it could be the necessary push ;)
I'm sure you'll prob get a lot of complaints about her, so I hope you are pleasantly surprised by this, because I kinda love Adrien. She's sassy. And I'm all about seeing E and B jealous over each other...so I'm glad you didn't make the other woman into someone tasteless or an annoying airhead of sorts.
Author's Response: I kinda love you for getting absolutely every intention of mine within the story! And trust me, E + J + GF = DATE <3
Reviewer: The_Reader (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
Nice touch with the myspace comments!
Totally reminded me of "He's Just Not That Into You" & how myspace is the new booty call with the whole Adrian/dirty talk thanggg.
Caaaaan't wait to see what goes downnn in Forks :D
Author's Response: LOL @ HJNTIY. I enjoyed Justin Long's character in that movie! Okay, off topic proclamation, but just the same, haha. Thank you for reviewing! :D
Reviewer: infektion (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
This chapter was really fun to read. I really enjoyed the little Myspace screenshots you included. I hope you get chapter 7 done soon. I'm really looking forward to that chapter. ;)
Author's Response: Haha yeah, I thought it made it ten times funnier seeing the screen shots.
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac
hehe, awesome! cant wait for more!
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