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Reviews For Breaking Bella
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Poor Tanya. Maybe she should just leave if she can't take the heat. Kudos to Rosalie for controlling herself. I luv her loyalty.

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Freaking Awesome!!! I am so excited for the next update!!!! Holy crap! Loved getting an insight as to what happened in the bathroom between the 3 girls!!

Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

I seriously LOL'ed throughout this chapter. I can't get enough of this wonderful tale!! 

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:11 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Loved this!!

So glad you were inspired!  All the different POVs were interesting. 

Poor Emmett though (not really).  Somehow I think he's going to get what he wants at some point.

Eager for next chapter...

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

that was hilarious! can't wait till the next chaoter.

Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Whoa...I was a little scared there cuz a muderous Rose is not someone you wanna eff wit!

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

i love it. update soon please. and please come with some jealousward ??

Reviewer: Ljchurch21 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:40 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

I can't wait to read whats coming next

Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:38 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Great outtake!

Favorite line: I was still in love with him, and he was already hers.

Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Outtake 3: The Throwdown

Wow, this was a super fast validation!!!

I already reviewed over on ff.net but I wanted to review over here too.

Your story is awesome!!

H xx

Reviewer: kkmay (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

awesome awesome awesome! please update soon!!!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8: Sex Changes & Eiffel 65

LMAO! i love how she does a complete 180 and has no memory of the night before! Priceless.

Oh, and I'm onto you. You made Hayley like Hayley Williams from Paramore, didn't you? I like it. Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hahaha, maybe just a little bit. ;)  I actually just really enjoy that particular way of spelling the name. :)  THanks for all the reviews!!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Outtake 1: The Mission

That is freaking awesome! I love how everyone's in on it! Haha. I didn't know there was a whole plan! I love it! Great outtake!

Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

looove this chapter, love you much! b and e should have a date, lol. they'll be hillarious!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 7: Stink Bombs & Fishnet Thongs

What's this? They were actually nice to each other?! Hold the phone! Haha, great chapter. I like how Rosalie is conniving. Sneaky little bitch. Haha

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 6: Vagina's & 2Pac

Hahaha! I love that you actually put in the comment boxes, that's amazing! Great chapter! i wonder how they're gonna handle being in Forks together.

Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

I have been hooked on this story for the past two days and now I am desperate.. you have been great at building up the sexual tension between these two!  LOVE IT!!!!  Can't wait for the new update!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 5: Sexy poses & Sexless eons

Hehe, I love how you took the words directly from the movie. That was cute. That and the way that he gave Angela Ben's number. That's so sweet.

And dude, okay, who hasn't had a wet dream about Megan Fox. I'm a girl, and she's pretty damn hott. Haha. Great chapter!

Reviewer: MinisculeRaindropOfSilence (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

I read this entire story today, and I must say that I love it! :) This chapter was definitely my favorite so far; the hilarious banter between Edward and Bella kept me thoroughly entertained.

I'm hoping you update soon, cause as soon as I saw that this was the last chapter, a little part of my Twilight-Crazed heart died. :(

-Mros

 

Reviewer: EmmaLynn (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

This is like my favorite story. I'm like obsessed with it. I wasn't so freakin pissed that I had a doctor's appointment yesterday because i was dying to get home and read some more! I couldn't wait to get out of classes today to come and read the rest! I'm so curious to know what Rosalie and Alice said to Tanya in the bathroom to make her cut the shit, but I'm guessing that would be in an outtake. Love Edward and Bella's moments, and I want Adrian to go away lol. But she does add a twist to the story =P I am so happy Edward is finally starting to realize his feeling for Bella! I like how he is figuring it out first, and I can't wait to see how he tries to convince her later in the story! So yes, I am adding you as my first favorite here on Twilighted, so feel special =P and please update soon because I'm gonna go thorugh Breaking Bella deprivation!!



Author's Response:

I do feel special!  I'm glad you like my story so much; that's all I want, is for people to enjoy reading it as much as I love writing it. :)  Yeah, lots of people want to know what was going on with the Alice/Rose/Tanya discussion, including my mom haha, so I may write a triple POV outtake once I get back.  I'm itching to write, and I can't wait to get started on chapter 14!

Reviewer: broken_fate (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

I loved this chapter.  I was hoping for a little Edward/Bella interaction and you totally came through.  I am so curious about the Alice/Rosalie/Tanya discussion though!    Seriously, cannot wait for more.

Also, I adore you version of Edward.  One of my absolute favorites. 

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

Great chapter! Loved all the interactions...specially E and B flirting!

Reviewer: nmommy02 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

awesome chapter!!! I love how long it is! And I am also very happy as to where Bella and Edward are going!

You are a very good writter, and if you aren't planning on being one, you should think about it! Very nice!

Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

aww..that was kind of cute.  Even if they didn't realize it at the time.   Hopefully, know that Edward sees that maybe something may, might go on between him and Bella, he'll drop Adrian.  haha.

Btw, they should all have a fastpass instead of paying for bus fare everytime.  hehe



Author's Response:

Too expensive! haha :)

Reviewer: lynnarro (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 13: Fairy dust & Bubble butts

loved it loved it loved it...I think this is one of my favorite chapters so far...I really thought shit was going to hit the fan when Alice AND Rosalie got up from the table to go talk to Tanya...I dont like her lol...great job!!!!!

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