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Reviewer: twilightlover96 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Not Even Past

Poor alice and jasper, oh weel. I am just waiting for the chance when they will really talk.

Author's Response:

They will soon!  The next chapter is just waiting to be submitted!

Reviewer: lady_lucks (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:32 PM · On: Not Even Past

oh god.


this is amazing... especially the 'alice in wonderland' bit.


and the ending. it's heartbreaking and beautiful all the same. alpha/omega, in a way, to me. the beginning and the end. i hope she does remember more, and soon!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  Alpha/omega is a great way to describe the AXJ relationship--not just in this story, but everywhere.  I love how right they are for each other!

Reviewer: Jaina 12 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Not Even Past

I love how she figured out her name.  And Alice and Jasper's silent communication, the tapping and the turning down of the TV.

Author's Response:

Jaina, I love you for reviewing both sets of my stories.  You're unbelievable.  Thank you!

Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Keeping Silence

Tapping makes her feel normal? It is Alice, I suppose...

Author's Response:

Hey!  I'm sorry I didn't respond before: I'm new to this whole Twilighted thing, so I didn't even know I'd gotten a review until a few days ago.  But thank you so much for being my first reviewer!  In response to your question--it's not the tapping that makes her feel normal, it's the act of saying goodnight to someone, of feeling a connection with someone.  I think this gets revealed more clearly in the next chapter.  Again, thank you for your reviews!

Reviewer: gnotar (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2009 06:27 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

i am so happy to see this story made its way over here too , i have been reading it on fanfic and absolutely love it. so intriguing and well written and so emotional.  one of the best stories i have read and it is about alice and jasper which is awesome.  there are rarely any great fics about them. 

Reviewer: Valla (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Keeping Silence

This is...emotionally powerful. I can't wait to see how this goes.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the sentiment.  I hope you like how the rest of the chapters play out!

Reviewer: Jaina 12 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Keeping Silence

Awww the tapping is so cute!  I wonder what will happen next?! 

I will try and pretend to be surprised since I'm also following this same story on :P

Author's Response:

Ha, I was gonna say, you sure look familiar!  You really don't have to read this story twice, but thanks for reviewing anyway!

Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

Hmm, interesting. A unique start, to be sure. I'm curious to see how it turns out. =D

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