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Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Keeping Silence

Ooh, I really liked this chapter. Alice is our little mouse :) I'm so curious if Jasper started the fire or if it was an accident... did anyone die? So sad - my friend told me nurses aren't allowed to work in the burn unit more than a certain amount of time because it's pretty traumatizing ... ek :(

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

Good first chapter :) I'm intrigued and ready to read on - I love Alice and Jasper!

Reviewer: shmommy88 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Seamless

I am sooo happy they are finally together! This chapter was beautiful! Thanks!!!

Reviewer: smed11 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Seamless

Please write more!!! Quickly!!! I LOVE this story :)

Reviewer: Jaina 12 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Seamless

How do you get so much feeling to shine through your writing?!  You are simply amazing.  I love this story so much, from each heart break to this ending where their feelings are soaring.  I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Jaina, I need to make you something special for reviewing this whole story twice.  You're fantastic!

Reviewer: Ashmerlin (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:22 PM · On: Seamless

Aww that was wonderful.  I loved it.  I loved the emotions it evoked.

So I end with the standard heartfelt plee; feed my addiction and post again soon!

OXOXOXOXO

 

Ashmerlin

Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Seamless

It's nice seeing these two come together to support each other again. I think living together will be very good for them.

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 02:24 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

Lovely.  Srsly.

I just love the parallels to canon.  Philly, the diner, waiting for you, he's scarred, she predicts the weather.  It's just great.  I find myself smiling whenever you subtlely slip another one in there. 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Soila (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

Stunning! I just read all eleven chapters, and I must say, incredible! It is unbelievable how you capture the feelings as well as the actions in the story. It is very nice to forget the world and simply just read. I hope Jasper will understand that he is good for Alice, that Alice needs him too. I wish that Alice would speak more in his presence, there were awfully little conversation between them at the diner. She has not become shy, has she? : Silly question, I hope they meet again, soon!

Reviewer: WinniePony (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

A diner in Philadelphia... of course. It's perfect. The waiter guy was funny though... and Alice with the tip. An excellent chapter, as usual. =D

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

After reading Twilighted (nearly every free minute) for a couple of monthis, this is only the 2nd human story I've read.

I really love these characters and the endless potential you have created for their future.

There's so much sadness -yet hope- in each one that its painfull and exhilerating to read each chapter. I've decided that's what makes a book or story hard to put down.

You've captured that so well in this story and made me long for more. Good Job!!!

Chris.

Reviewer: twilightbloom (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:26 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

Thank you!!!

I feel like I can breathe again; I was feeling so sad for both of them-living in an imperfect world, missing each other.  This chapter is sweet, hopeful and so full of possibilities.  You always manage to capture how hard it is for someone living with disfigurement and/or disability and you are a Goddess for that....

BTW, love the way you worked the rain and the diner into this!!

Reviewer: Valla (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

Words cannot describe how much I love this chapter.

Reviewer: shmommy88 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

Awesome chapter! It was killing me waiting for them to get back together. And in a diner too! That's great.

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 03:31 PM · On: Six Impossible Things

YES... GO CUTE WAITER!! haha i was jumping up and down in my chair while reading this chapter. Yesss they finally find eachother again! whooot

great chapter..can't wait for the next one!

-riddiculusvampire

Reviewer: ImCuteLoveMe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

Absolutely love how you incorporated the diner in!

Another amazing chapter. Thank you!

Reviewer: Jaina 12 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

Ahhh the meeting! :)  I love their reconnection!  And it's cute how Alice can still predict the weather.  Can't wait for another update!

Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

YAY!!!! They are together again! *coo*

Reviewer: emma austin (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

aaaw! I love how you worked the diner into your story. brilliant. Please let Jasper let Alice back in. pleeeeeze!

Reviewer: Tighe (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 12:51 AM · On: Six Impossible Things

Good god I love this story. Only one on here that's made me cry!!! Please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh and I've never reviewed a story before either.

Reviewer: riddiculusvampire (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 02:54 PM · On: ... by Such

OH WOW. I absolutely love this story...its amazing. It has so much emotion and creativity in it. This has to be one of the best stories I have ever read...I love how you display the characters. Ugh it's like i experience everything along with them! I can't wait for the next chapter!!! great job so far

-riddiculusvampire

Reviewer: duckyd16 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

guh my parents think im nuts. crying out in the open. gosh. XD lovein it. please update soon

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:18 AM · On: ... by Such

Wow - i can't imagine relearning all those minute little things and then find them so completely overwhelming.

I'm love how strong she was in the trial.  So brave.

So can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:02 AM · On: And by Such...

I really enjoyed the formatting - very cool concept. 

 

To not even remember July - crap, this is just tearing my heart out. 

 

Of course you love her you big dummy!

Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 11:00 AM · On: And Yet Afraid

The touching and the tears and the lies - guh.  This angst fest is awesome. 

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