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Reviewer: RavenFlyer (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 12:16 PM · On: Grotesques

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 05:59 PM · On: Trying to Say

Dang you, cliffhangers!! *shakes fist at sky*

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 03:25 PM · On: Not Even Past

Yay for Alice! More wonderland quotes: I'm late, I'm late! For a very important date!

Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2012 02:12 PM · On: Keeping Silence


Reviewer: dali603573 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2012 07:14 PM · On: Grotesques

OHH HOW I MIS THIS FIC!! I LOVE the way its written and I always come back to it in hopes that it will be updated. lol I guess it will just have to be "the one that got away"! I remember reading this while it was still being updated! XD I hope one day I can finish reading this amazing story and be able to fit the puzzle pieces of this mystery!

Reviewer: Louis (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2012 06:09 AM · On: Seamless

I just absolutely had to review this, not only because I have been reading it addictively for the past day (its 3am now and I'm still reading), but I think that this story is one of the most beautiful adaptations of the original characters' lives I have read. It's encompassed so much emotion and humanity already, and the flaws of them are so wonderfully expressed.

I also have to mention how much I laughed when that one-liner from Jasper came up: "Pack your shit." It was so typical of his character in this story, and yet so unexpected, I loved it!

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Grotesques

This is such a good story.. I hope you finish it one day soon! :)

Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 11:18 PM · On: Grotesques

i just found this story and have been really enjouying it. i would love to read more!

Reviewer: kayariley (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Grotesques

i just found this story and have been really enjouying it. i would love to read more!

Reviewer: Karlica (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2011 04:58 AM · On: Grotesques

I really like the story.
would be a shame to leave this story unfinished
Please update soon

Reviewer: Christine-Elizabeth07 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 05:11 PM · On: Grotesques

Absolutely brilliant, the entire story. I actually started reading it when you first began writing it and lost touch with this website and came back to specifically find this story to finish it. I do hope you plan on finishing it!!!

Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

I miss this story dearly!!! Have you forgotten this story? Or do you plan to continue, eventually? Please respond one way or another. Thanks <3

Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 06:05 PM · On: Grotesques

No, No, No - there has to be more soon. Just amazing - I want to hug both of them!

Reviewer: timide (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Lessons in Longing

This is an absolutely amazing story.  The characters are so well written.  I feel everything when I read this.  Just....WOW! Thank you.

Reviewer: NinaQ (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Grotesques

I've read this twice now.  It is by far the best Alice/Jasper fic out there.  You have a tremendous gift for storytelling.  

I hope your RL situation has resolved itself enough to allow you to give them the HEA they deserve.



Reviewer: silvaneous (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2011 11:32 PM · On: Prologue: Nature's Second Course

so i really really like this story.  i read it all yesterday, never realizing that its been over a year since u updated.  so do plan on finishing it?  i want to tell u that this really is the best AU j/a story that i have read, its so beautiful.  and i absolutely love how made the families - and how jaspers family is linked to bella who is of course the best friend about to be proposed to.  i really hope i can read the end one day, can't wait to see the reunion =) u write very beautifully

Reviewer: VampiraM (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2010 01:08 PM · On: Grotesques

such a good story hope you update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: purplefrangipani (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 05:38 PM · On: Grotesques

This story has me hooked - dying to know why Edward hasn't found Alice yet (because I can't believe he isn't looking). Keep up the great writing!

Reviewer: lizzy (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 10:05 AM · On: For You Today Yes

Wow...this is the most touching and ...delicate love scene i have ever read.  

Reviewer: lizzy (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 08:47 AM · On: Synonymous

I have been doing a marathon read of this and I just want to tell you that this is one of the best fics I have ever read.  This chapter moved me to tears.  By the time I got to how Jasper filled out the application for Alice, I was bawling...


I love this fic and cant wait to finish!

Reviewer: You know i love you (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2010 04:31 AM · On: Grotesques

It's been a long time since you last updated!!

hope you will update.

Reviewer: fearlessfroggie (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2010 07:41 AM · On: Keeping Silence

I always look for new Jasper/ Alice stories.  I like this so far....

Reviewer: FrozenSoldier (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2010 05:44 AM · On: For You Today Yes

I just re-read this chapter again. Hell, I keep re-reading the story. But I really like this chapter. Not because of what happens in it, but because of how it is written. Especially this part:

And every time my lips touch his skin, I think to myself, this is when he will stop me; this is when he will take my hands in his and say, ‘enough, now.  Enough.' 

I'm sure I've asked you before how you write like.. like this. I could read this story over and over again, and I do. I wish I had it as a book or something.. hmm.. *looks at printer sitting next to me* Hahah.

Shortest review I've left you? Possibly.

Reviewer: stephex (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Lessons in Longing

This is the best story i've read in ages. <3 Jasper!!

Reviewer: InsaneJediGirl (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Grotesques

Wow! Just found this story and read through the chapters in two days. Amazing! I couldn't tear myself away from this, and thats saying a lot, I normally dislike all-human stories.


Keep up the amazing work!

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