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Reviewer: Havensummers (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

 I cant wait, it its anything like the well written S & S its gonna rock, do me a favor though, Make Bella one bad ass MF and let her kick ass and take names last. I so wanna see her  badass martial arts chick with tons of weapons training or some shit. HUGS and good luck

 

Oh I forgot if you need any type of military help my husband is a former Marine, and can offer info. Hugs

Reviewer: AnnieJupka (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really love the story line. I read your other story as well and liked it. Just a note though, at times there is some confusion in the point of view. I noticed it in the first story as well. Just make sure the point of view is consistent throughout the sections, but the story is great.

Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is a liiiitle bit different than Sugar and Spice... but I love it!! Ah its so different and so amazing!! Thank you for dreaming about this, its just so so amazing! :)

 

Reviewer: MrsPattinsonheart2 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1

I can't believe you started writing another story!!! ahh thank god I found it! :)

Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 5

im glad shes awake wow this is getting good



Author's Response:

thank you. things are going to heat up in the comming chapters.

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 5

Hey loved the chap i love how alice is so i dunno fluffy when she was like bella was a bit fuzzy it just makes me laugh how happy go lucky she is =]



Author's Response:

thank you. they each talk to me who they want to be LOL thank you for loving it.

Reviewer: missielynn (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 5

where the hell is edward



Author's Response:

the cullens are comming. you will see a hint of them in the next chapter. once they get there all hell will break loose. thank you agian for reading.

Reviewer: juggalettels (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 5

Damn I get so excited when I see a new chapter they are never long enough haha great job glad to see Bella kinda back. Cant wait for the next one



Author's Response:

ahhh thank you. i meant this chapter to be alot longer but this is what it was.  thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Telly21182 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Thank you for updating!  So, when are the Cullens coming in to the story?  Are they the friends of Charlie's?



Author's Response:

you are most welcome. i hope that things are getting easier more chapters will be put in more often.  esme was a brief blip in the begining and they are comming.  all i can say is they know charlie but not in the way you think they do LOL muwahahahahaha

Reviewer: alice022 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 4

hi this is great so is sugar and spice is there anyway u can get something like that tells me when another chapter up or something

xx



Author's Response:

hi and thank you for loving both of them. you need to add me to your favorites. it is at the bottom of the chapter. click on that and it will take you to the que of the story. scroll down and hit submit.  the next chapter is in and awaiting validation. the first chapter for the sequel of sugar and spice is almost ready and will be put in soon. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 4

Poor Bella!  I'm waiting in anticipation for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thank you. it is almost done! i hope you enjoy it

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 4

hey hope she gets better =] its a cool story =]



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

Reviewer: twilighted007 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2

lauren, huh? Why not angela?



Author's Response:

thank you for reading.  the reason i chose lauren is i think she was made out to be a bad guy.  she deserves to be a happy character for once.

Reviewer: purehazel (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 4

awwwww i hope bella is gonna be ok!

wen do the guys come into the mix? who is gonna be laurens guy?



Author's Response:

the cullens are comming soon. as for laurens he will be working for the cullens. i am glad you are enjoying this and thank you for reading.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 3

don't crack up bout it. unless ur a vap or a shapeshifter, youre human, and make mistakes. god know my beta is having a lot of things to correct on the first chap of my fic.im different than the other reader, im AWESOME. lol. kidding. waiting for the update. and oh. btw love the banner!



Author's Response:

thank you. i think my beta missed it too.  we had to go through that chapter quite a few times.  you let me know when yours is up i would love to read it.

Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 3

Oh no! You can't leave me hanging like that. lol.  I hope Bella is alright, but maybe this will knock her out of her depression.



Author's Response:

the next chapter is into my beta now. thank you for reading.

Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 3

see, there was some mistake here. you put it on LPOV, but you mentioned her in third person. but i love it. im dying to see the next cahpter, so get your ass working now!LOL. kidding. but you should really update soon :)



Author's Response:

thank you for pointing that out i knew i had made the mistake LOL i am so sorry...the next chapter is in to my beta so it will be out soon. thank you for reading and calling me on it. I am cracking up over it.  most readers would have been pains in the asses but you were nice about it. thank you for doing that.

Reviewer: Hawkins (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 1

This story is really intriging.  Can't wait to see what else you have in store.  I like how you used Lauren since she's rarely in fanfics.  Is she going to take on the characteristics SM wrote her as?

Reviewer: Anya (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

soooo when does Charlie's angels will meet the Cullens boys? ooh just want to make sure does the V in VDA stands for volturri or vampire?



Author's Response:

They are going to meet them in a couple of chapters. Esme comes in first though.  the v stands for volturri...how they came about it naming that will come out i promise.  thank you for reading.

Reviewer: Soccermom (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

Another awesome story. Keep up the good work and please post again soon

Author's Response:

thank you for reading. the next chapter is in to my beta i hope to have it posted soon. thank you agian for reading.

Reviewer: Vi0lentSerenity (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 2

My reviews on twilighted are rare but i just wanted to say that you are off to a great start with this story. I love the idea of Charlie taking them all in and being that hardcore kind of dad. The involvment of Lauren really threw me off at first but i'm glad that someone is giving her character a second chance, not just leaving her to be a dumb slut or rude bitch. Can't wait to see where this goes



Author's Response:

thank you for review. i am truly honored that you chose me.  the next chapter is being worked on. it has some problems i am working on. it should be up in a few days and i hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: sizone (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 2

I think you're of to a really good start with the story, and I can't wait to read the next chapters to see where this is going.

Keep up the good work, and update soon :)

 

~Sizone



Author's Response:

thank you for reading. i am working on the next update!

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 2

Wow, lots of weird details.  Sounds like Charlie was a super-something.  I can't imagine Bella not wanting to find his killer though, that seems like the first thing she'd want is to find justice for his murder.

 



Author's Response:

there is a reason behind it and it will come out. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Kdb9mm (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1

Things are heating up a little, I can't wait to find out what the heck charlie had been doing!!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

Reviewer: skg910 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

Very surprised to see that Lauren is actually a good person for once. Very OOC in a good way! What was Charlie up to? Credit cards with no limits? Please he was doing something highly illegal I'm sure of it! Can't wait to see where this goes - great start!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!!

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