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Reviewer: stpatrickbaby (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

This was awesome. I just found this site and your story was the first one i read. I just wanted to tell you that ALICE IS A FRICKIN' GENIUS!!! This was a hilarious prank. It's an awesome story!

Reviewer: RuthCullen (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2009 12:00 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

i like it.. no wait..


I love it..


please continue you're one of the best writers on this site..


Reviewer: emilynicolecullen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

absolutley love it. one of the best chapters,

you have NOT lost your touch :D

Reviewer: Natzxx (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:42 AM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

update soon please this is really good!!

Reviewer: nowayjose (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

I LOVE THIS STORY. i hope she tells him, shes getting too moody for me, i like that edward gets mad though and yells at her, its refreshing..maybe it should happen again? haha. well written- keep posting! 

Reviewer: amhatfie (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

This is an awesome story. Plz update soon. I hve been checking back to see what happens next.


Reviewer: phillimom (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Eight. Oil and Water [Unknown]

This is getting really good.  Great Chapter.

Reviewer: JW11 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]


Please let Bella finally tell Edward now.


Reviewer: mandy52799 (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2009 02:06 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

This story is hysterical. I hope very much that you finish it cuz its gonna be great!

Reviewer: scrider (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2009 07:23 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

So glad Bella is going to tell him! I know it's your story, but pleeeeeaaaasssse don't make us wait any longer for them to make up. And please update soon!


Great writing!!!!

Reviewer: JayEddie1008 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 10:31 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

Nice chapter. Very clever prank. I'll be looking out for the next update.

Reviewer: phillimom (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Four. Agoraphobia [Edward]

Good story so far.  I can't wait to see what happens.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

Gah!  That was almost painful to see Emmett emasculated like that!  I'm glad that Bella is going to be honest with Edward, she REALLY needs to make it up to him!

Reviewer: phoenixsoul (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

lol. Poor Emmett. Even I would dislike driving that car(and I was a mega Barbie fan back in the day).

Reviewer: AnotherCullen (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 03:50 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

This was an amazing chapter. Alice did go overboard with her prank, poor Em. I really hope Bella confess to Edward about James next chapter, but that would mean that the story is coming to an end. I don't know how you plan on taking this, but i can't wait for more.

Reviewer: soofine11 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]


Reviewer: asookraj (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

that is the funniest thing in the world!!!! that should be made into a banner for u. emmett setting in the pink hummer.

cant wait for more!!!

Reviewer: jazzylover314 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

OMFJ! this chapter was absolutely amazingly hysterical!

edward and bella REALLY NEED TO WORK OUT EVERYTHING but... they also really need to have sex..

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:39 AM · On: Four. Agoraphobia [Edward]

Ok...Not Victoria's James. but a human with a similar scent. Nice...i like...suspense. More reviews to come.  

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Three. I was a Kaleidoscope [Bella]

James???? How in the hell??? Well, I guess I'll just have to keep reading.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

lol omg u had me rolling on this chapter it was hilerous great job lOL

Reviewer: MsShayB (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Two. Popular Mechanics for Lovers [Bella]

I'm really enjoying your writing! On to the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kandykanegirl34566 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:51 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

this chapter is so funny


Reviewer: onyx8514 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Nineteen. Bugaboo [Bella]

dying for the next chap when bella comes clean

Reviewer: ClumsyHippy (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 07:27 AM · On: One. As Thick as Thieves [Edward]

Lmao. Sex hair. *longing sigh* Soooo true....

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