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Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Five

 "To know him was to love him.  You didn’t get a choice in the matter." Truer words were never written! I'd gladly be sexy librarian to Nurse Jake any time!! <><3



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you agree.  And, I think you're going to have to get in line behind the rest of us as far as being the Sexy Librarian to Jacob.  ;)  Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Mkystich (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Ok so it's been about two weeks and I'm wondering one of two things. 1. Your beta is taking forever and he/she is about to get some hate mail or 2. You forgot about us. We who check twice a day to see if a new chapter is up yet. (I *blush* check mare than that) but only because I love this story and will seriouly cry when it's over.

Chain smokingly waiting.

Kris



Author's Response:

Hi Kris,

(LOL)  First of all, let me clarify a few things.  The only reason you got such speedy updates before, was because I had already finished those chapters and posted them on another site.  Unfortunately, now I'm caught up on both sites.  Trust me, my beta is absolutely awesome, so don't blame her.  I only gave her the rough draft of my next chapter yesterday!  And don't you worry.  I have not forgotten about you and I totally get what you're saying about constantly checking on a favorite story.  So, I apologize for the delay.  But, assuming I post something tomorrow night, it'll take a few days for validation...and you should have a new chapter by Tues or Weds.  Sorry again for keeping you waiting, but I thank you so much for reviewing and keeping me on my toes!

Erin :)

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Four

GO CHARLIE! Gotta love him!

Guh! making out with Jacob in the rain...*thump* <><3



Author's Response:

Yeah, I figured Charlie deserved a special moment to get his own feelings across for once.  And, NOTHING beats making out with Jacob in the rain.  :)

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Three

*heart pounds* THANK HEAVENS! Maybe they'll get everything straightened out... (they will, won't they?) <><3



Author's Response:

Well, you already know by now. :)  Thank you for taking the time to review every chapter.  It means so much to me. :)

Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two

OOOOooohh, the agony is killing me! I can't stop thinking about J's broken heart (I bet I could fix it for him!) what a horrible sitch for both of them! Gotta read the next chap! <><3



Author's Response:

Well, if you find it so heartbreaking, then at least I know I was doing my job right.:)  Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

The big bad wolf...I am laughing hysterically!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.  I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  Seeing as how it was Halloween, the Big Bad Wolf just seemed like the logical choice. :)  Thanks again. :)

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 01:03 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter Twenty

That was hilarious...the almost car-sex!  Brings back memories...

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter Fifteen

Oops! Poor Seth! LOL!  :-)

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Chapter Thirteen

Edward, get a clue!  You have lost...he is such a big dork, and he is looking pretty foolish.  Yay Jacob!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the late reply...I swear, some of these reviews hide from me.  (I'm totally not kidding either.)  Anyway, thank you so much for taking the time to review.  Yeah, Edward's pretty hardheaded.  But aren't we all when we're in love?  Anyway, thanks again.

 

Reviewer: karebear762 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter Twelve

Woo-hoo!

Reviewer: jake1121 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

Im having withdrawls now, I know you cant be expected to write at a speed that has a new chapter every 3 days, but you really spoilt us there for a while, and now i need my B&J fix.

 

just letting you know that your loved. 

 

Have i sucked up enough to get a hint whats around the corner for our two lovebirds, edward and the volturi???



Author's Response:

Thanks as always for reviewing.  I wish I could tell you that I'll be posting at the same speed, but honestly, that was a fluke.  I had already finished those chapters and posted them on a different site.  Now that I'm caught up, I'll be posting as I write, which sometimes takes a while. 

I do feel loved when you leave such awesome reviews.  They're the best.  Unfortunately, I can't really give you many details about what's happening with Edward/the Volturi.  I'm still working on a few things myself.  But, I really think it'll be interesting.  So, bear with me. 

Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: RarelyPureNeverSimple (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:35 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

*sigh*

damn i love this, i chaeck everyday just incase you've added another chapter. you really know how to keep us hooked!

especially loved your comments about paul! seriously, good job on wroking him into the story - i can tell you aren't finished with paul yet!

Van helsing - classic!!

all my love,

lexi



Author's Response:

Hi Lexi,

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you liked this chapter, becaue it really was fun to write.  And, no, I'm not quite done with Paul yet.  I think poor Jacob is going to get an unpleasant wake-up call when it comes to him.  I'm also really glad you liked my costume choices.  I figured you can't have Dracula without Van Helsing, right?  Anyway, thanks again.  You should be getting an update pretty soon.

Erin

Reviewer: aussie (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

It's official ... I'm obsessed by this story.  I found it a few days ago and haven't stopped till chapter 26, 10 minutes ago.  I contemplated taking a day off work to read it straight though.  I'm enjoying this more than Eclipse and Breaking Dawn (seriously).  Please, please .... can we have some more ... and soon.  Oh, I totally voted for you in all the categories at http://wolfpackawards.webs.com/vote.htm.  Good luck, you deserve all the awards you get.



Author's Response:

Hi Keryn,

Thank you so much for such an awesome review.  I can't tell you how much I appreciate it.  I'm so honored, (and Impressed) that you got through the whole story so quickly.  There are definitely a few 20 page chapters in there. :)  It is such a compliment that you have enjoyed my little old story more than Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.  I just hope my future chapters live up to your expectations.  And, thank you so much for voting for me.  I'll know the results by the end of next week.  Thank you again.

Erin

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

As I mentioned in my previous review on the other site, I am in LOVE with your story. You write Bella and Jake so perfectly.

More please :)

Author's Response:

Thank you sooooo much for your review.  I can promise you that you should be getting another update within the week.  It's kind of a filler chapter, so I can't promise you that it will meet your expectations...but I'm crossing my fingers that it will.  Thank you again. :)

Reviewer: irishekl (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:29 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

As I mentioned in my previous review on the other site, I am in LOVE with your story. You write Bella and Jake so perfectly.

More please :)

Reviewer: bloodofbeckie (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

I am dead from reading that. Holy crap, woman. You really know how to make me lust after Jacob. Lucky Bella.



Author's Response:

Dead, but loving it, right?  Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter because it really was fun to write.  And, thank you for your compliment...but, honestly, I think Jacob does most of the work himself just by being  AWESOME! ;)

Reviewer: nemesisstar (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Wow, that was so hot!!!  I love "Jacob the Cowboy."  Awesome imagery and some really hot action...  I wonder if I can get my hubby to dress up as a cowboy this Halloween??  ;o)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your awesome review.  I've mentioned before that I don't even like cowboys.  But, if the cowboy happens to be a six foot seven, gorgeous, native boy, then I think I can make an exception.  Oh, and good luck with the Halloween costume.  I hope you get your wish. :)

Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:57 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

hahaha I only now saw somebody was saying the same I just did! I usually review first and then read the other reviews. And that reminded me that I forgot to tell that I voted for you too :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for voting for me.  That is so awesome, I can't even tell you. :)

Reviewer: Lily83 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Loved. It.

I can't form any more coherent words right now.. I need a cold shower......

 

And even if I would love to have new chapters as often as you've put them up before, this story is SOOOO worth waiting a little bit more. So take your time creating more of your master piece chapters :)



Author's Response:

Thank you sooooooo much.  What a wonderful review.  I can tell you that you should be getting a new chapter before the end of this month.  Sorry you had to wait so long, but I'm glad you appreciate that it takes time to get out 20 page chapters. :)  Oh, and I hope you enjoyed your cold shower. :)

Reviewer: JennB21 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Amazing as usaual! I know it might be more of a wait for the next chapter, but they are SOOO worth it.  Have fun writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm writing the next chapter now.  I'm really crossing my fingers that I'll have something to post next week.  Wish me luck, and thank you for your review. :)

Reviewer: Griffs_Shu (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:20 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

OMG....I love love love cowboy hats lol. This was awesme!!!! It reminded me of this photo I have of my husband from like 6 years ago and he's in a white wife beater and a cowboy hat...omg so sexy LOL. This was such a great chapter! Can not wait for your next update!!!



Author's Response:

I'm sooooooo glad you liked Jake the Cowboy.  Personally, the whole cowboy thing isn't my scene.  But, when it's Jake, I'll make the exception.  I'm just glad it brought some good memories back for you.;)  I'm writing furiously as we speak.  Thank you, as always for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: shelbielyncullen (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

OH MY GOD. New favorite story. Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you soooooo much.  What a great compliment.  I hope to update sometime next week.  Wish me luck.  Oh, and thank you for your review. :)

Reviewer: twifan14 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Haha... great chapter. I totally voted for you by the wayyy! Keep up the wonderful work. Watching the VMA's last night, I got really depressed when they showed the new moon trailer because I know that Bella doesn't choose Jacob and reading Bella/Jacob stories like yours makes that a reallly sad thing. In other words, you've made me a die hard team jacober, so good job. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review, and most especially for your vote!  That's awesome.  I feel you, by the way.  I'm soooooooo excited about New Moon, but every time I think that after every thing they go through, she STILL picks Edward...I get sad and depressed too.  I've been joking with my friends that I'm just going to walk out of the theater once she takes off for Italy and say, Hey, great movie.  Like the ending.  That way, she'll still be with Jacob.  But, alas, it is not to be.  I'm so glad you're a die hard Team Jacob gal.  We can use all the "Wolf Girls" we can get.  Thank you again, soooo much. :)

Reviewer: TJB (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Once again I love it.  I also like the foreshadowing with Paul and Rachel - super funny!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Poor Jacob...he just doesn't know what he's in for with Paul. :)

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