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Reviews For Coming Full Circle
Reviewer: cullenvamp_no10 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

AWESOME story....I like this version better than the original...Bella shoulda chose JAKE and I love your explanation for why she didnt at first and also for the whole imprinting thing.  GREAT JOB AND KEEP IT UP!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review AND for giving my J/B story a chance.  I'm so glad you like it.  I'm working hard already on the next chapter so hopefully you'll get an update soon.  Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: leelator (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 09:35 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Oooooohhhh! Well, I knew the first part was too good to be true. It was so sweet to have a loving and fun few months with B&J! The incidents with Billy coming into the house unexpectedly and the leg cramp were hysterical! Loved them! The hot sex was wonderfully erotic and fun. I was so happy and in such a good mood. I should have know it wouldn't last, Meany!

It is very cruel of you to toss those damned Volturi back at us, gf! I can't believe we've got to worry about them all over again! But, does this mean a trip to Italy is in the pack's future?? Are they heading over to confront them? Are the Cullens going to help if they do? What the hell is going to happen next? Are you going to leave us hanging like this for weeks?? Damn it, I can't take it!



Author's Response:

Hello My Darling Crazy!  Thank you so much for your review.  Of course the first part was too good to be true.  That's how I roll!  Yeah, it was finally time to bring the Volturi back into the picture.  Now, I can't say that they're going to appear in the next chapter, or even the one after that, but they will be in the picture soon.  I can't say if the wolves will be heading over to Italy or not.  Seems like that would be a pain trying to get all those passports in order. ;)  Anyway, I've already written about 4 pages of the next chapter and I'm really on a roll.  So, hopefully I won't keep you waiting too long for the next chapter.  Of course, I'll be anxiously awaiting YOUR next chapter in the meantime.  Thanks again Crazy!

Meany

Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 06:15 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Holy Hell, a lot happened in this chapter - wow I can't wait to see what you are going to do next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I've already started the next chapter...so hopefully you'll find out what comes next soon. :)  Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Now that's my Alpha man talking!!!.... Awesome...awesome...awesome chapter...I was so excited when I saw the update....and I was just about ready to email you and ask when u were going to update...Although u put time between ur updates...they are always well worth the wait... I love the growth in Bella..she is totally maturing....and I see Edward is still not quite there yet....sometimes is acts like the 100+ vamp he is and then other times...he is oh so 17...LOL...It's clear that Jake is the Alpha... his abilities are growing and like u said its only a matter of time...I'm so curious to see how you continue to develop Mr. Alpha Black... And just an all out Thank You....for the Bella u have created.... she has a definate strength that makes her equal to Jacob... I love it...update soon....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter so much.  Yeah, I'm looking forward to Alpha Jake too.  BTW, feel free to email me whenever if you want status info on my chapters.  It's always nice to know that I have readers out there who look forward to my udpates.  I'm especially pleased that you like how I've written Bella.  I couldn't deal with her if she was as whiny and pathetic as she was in the series.  So, thank you again, so much.

Erin

Reviewer: KristinHazzard (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 09:03 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Sooooo good! Plz update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I've already started writing the next chapter!  I'm so excited about it.  I may even get it done quickly.  No promises though.  Anyway, thanks again.  I look forward to hearing more from you in the future.

Erin

Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Gah, you have been thoroughly miss, my dearie!!  This story was my second Jake and Bella adventures(Just breathe started my love for them and this one just added more fuel!!!)  Even though there are a few more that are in my high standards of these chronicles I look at this one with misty eyes every time it updates.  I get so excited I can hardly breathe. The storyline is really "coming full circle" in a way now because we are getting into the war with the volturi but with Jake as her lover instead of Edward.  I don't know if I truly comprehend what Jake is saying at the end but I hope that when all of this is over we still see a happy Jake and Bella with a very happy future together.  (get my drift?  no dying in this story, PLLLEEESSEE!  My heart cant take it.)

Anyway, glad to see you back!  Loved the chp and cant wait for more! 

Hugs, stephanie

 



Author's Response:

Hi Stephanie,

I live for your reviews as much as you live for my updates!  Thank you so much.  I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  I'm on a roll now so I hope that I can get the next chapter out in a timely fashion.  We'll see though.

I can't really reassure you about J/B and the end...I don't want to give too much away.  All I can say is that I love J/B and I don't want to see anyone die either.  Was that vague enough for you? ;)

Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 05:09 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Holy crap!  You go Jake, you can sure tell his Alpha Power is getting stronger!  He's right though, they have to take the lead away from the Volturi....and I think Jake is right Tanya isn't going to stay neutral and I don't think she will be helping the Cullens.

Just when Bella and jake get back on track, now this....I loved this chapter there were so many funny and touching moments.  I died laughing when she got a cramp, lord those hurt!  lol  I love how Jake is bring out such a confident, strong Bella, and she does the same for him.  He really is as good for her as she is him.

I can't wait to see how all this turns out!  Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Hi Dixie!

Thank you so much for your review.  Jake's role as Alpha is definitely important to me.  And since I'm following some of the storyline of BD (with my own twist) it's inevitable.

I'm glad you think that my Bella is as good for Jake as he is for her.  That's a real compliment and I reallly do appreciate it. 

Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

So glad they got past this...the distance thing.  I was happy to see her finally confront him.

Left a another review on FF. With some questions.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for both reviews!  I really do appreciate them.  I can't remember what questions you asked me in the other review.  I hope I answered them for you.  If not, send me a PM or email.  Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 04:06 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

wow, major stuff! Great job:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.  I'm glad you liked it.  Once it all came together (last week) it was actually a lot of fun to write.  Thanks for reviewing.

Erin

Reviewer: danimcket (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:36 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Looks like a rumble is coming up in their futre.



Author's Response:

Hell yeah!  I can't say when...but it is coming.  Thank you so much for your review.

Erin

Reviewer: Lou Lou (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:19 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

Wow, that was fast, unlike Jacob who seems to have the stamina of a bull, or should i say wolf. lol

Another stunning chapter as always and again you have left us on the edge, wondering what will be coming at Bella and Jacob this time. You are one evil women but I wouldn't have it any other way. 

I have to say I'm liking this aggressive Jacob, tells it like it is and how it's going to be, H.O.T! Mmmmm Jacob, you never cease to amaze me. 

Will be waiting patiently for the next update.

Louise.



Author's Response:

Hi Louise!

I'm so glad you liked this chapter.  Hell yeah Jacob benefits from his "wolf" stamina. ;)  All the better to love us with, right?

Of course I'm evil...that's just how I roll.  If I didn't leave you guys with these kind of cliffies, how would I know you'd keep reading?

Agressive Jake is always fun to write.  I'm glad you liked it.

Now, I'm going to pick up my notebook and get writing on the next chapter tomorrow!  Hopefully I'll have the speediest update ever!  (Don't quote me on that though)  Thanks again.  Much love!

Erin

Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

I loved it. Jacob was in total Alpha at the end.

I can't wait to read more.

Rox



Author's Response:

Hi Rox!

Thank you so much for your review.  Jake definitely is on the road to be the Alpha he's supposed to be.  I can't wait for it either.  Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: loreley25 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Six (shabbyapple)

ahhhhh i really loved this chapter... i loved it all... i'm going to wait every minute fpr you tu update your story... is bella going to have her gift even when she is human?...that would be awsome



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review.  I'm glad you liked the chapter.  Bella keeping her powers while still human?  Now that's an interesting idea. ;)  Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2010 02:40 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Five (shabbyapple)

Wow! Great Chapter! Update soon! Love this story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review each and every chapter.  I know what a pain it is, but I really do appreciate it.  I can't wait to hear what you have to say about my next chapter, which you WILL be reading soon.  Thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 08:57 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Four (shabbyapple)

Nice! Love assertive Bella!  PLease update soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Assertive Bella is a hell of a lot more interesting than whiny, pathetic Bella, don't you think?  Anyway, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 07:51 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Three (shabbyapple)

Nice! Finally? Maybe? 



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 05:17 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-One

That was close!  Very funny!  Where can I finf boxers with mistletoe?  LOL!



Author's Response:

I just made those boxers up...but I'm sure if you looked for them, you'd be able to find them. ;)  Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 03:43 PM · On: Chapter Thirty

comical  and intense. Loved it!`



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I thought it was an important experience for J/B to have.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Eight

Great chapter!  Love that Bella can be the voice of reason for Jake!



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Seven

Brillant!  I totally cried when Leah told her story to Bella! Glad it workede out.



Author's Response:

I'm glad this chapter resonated so well with you.  Thanks again.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Chapter Twenty-Six

Yes ma'ma! That was a good Chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you...it also happens to be one of my favorites.  I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2010 06:25 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One

That was heart breaking!



Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for taking the time to review all of these chapters.  I really do work hard on them and I love getting reviews where people show how much they appreciate my work.  This chapter was one of my favorites to write, even though it ends really sad.  I love Jacob even more when he's heartbroken.  I guess I'm kind of sick that way.  Anyway, thanks again.

Erin

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2010 04:24 PM · On: Chapter Twenty

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed this one.  It was really fun for me to write.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2010 01:09 PM · On: Chapter Eighteen

Wow!

Confussing for Bella but should she really be surprized!  She really need to pick a side and draw the line.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I agree.  Bella should have to make some tough decisions.  She can't have it all.  Thanks again for the review.

Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: August 26, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter Seventeen

Beautiful night!

Crapy wake up call! Hope it's not serious.



Author's Response:

Yeah, that was definitely my kind of date!  Minus the vampires, of course. ;)

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