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Reviewer: AriKnight (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 06:02 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-Two
OMG!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: AriKnight (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Chapter Twenty-One
Hahahhahah...Hundred Year Old Virgin...funny! Sooo sad, but nessessary. I hope he can forgive her...oh who am I kidding it's Jacob, he would forgive Bella if she killed his own mother right??? Anyway, I liked this chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next. I just Love all the tension!!
Author's Response: Sorry for the late reply. I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. I can't seem to have a drama-filled chapter w/out adding some humor. So, I'm glad you liked it. Thanks again for reviewing.
Erin
Reviewer: twirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2010 06:27 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Go Leah!!! Go Leah!!!!.. That's right put Sam in his place too... I hoping with everything that she is able to fight the imprint... But, yes there is a but... Patrick has me all kinds of curious... to knw what would happen between them.... (outtake worthy I say)... Awesome chapter!!!! I so love this story..
Author's Response: LOL! Thank you for the review. Yeah, I figured Leah deserved a little spotlight. Trust me, I'm soooooooo tempted to write an outtake...I just don't know if I have the time for it. Anyway, thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: rengisol (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
nice job
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Erin
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:48 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
*squEEEeeee* Guess waiting to enjoy was the right move: I just realized that I was your 1200th review ! How cool is that! <><3
Author's Response: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1200th review on Twilighted!!!!!!!!!!!!! Now that's impressive. I wish there was some kind of theme song I could give to you. Just imagine I'm humming a fun diddy right now! Thanks!
Reviewer: diamondheart (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2010 07:43 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Sorry to be so long on the R&R, Erin my dear, but my fic time is not what it once was and I had to kind of schedule a good block of time to truly savor this long, lovely update...
This whole read-through was accompanied by a sound track of gasps and hisses, moans of dismay and exclamations, "aaaawww" over Jake's speech to Bella and then, er, well never mind...Anyway, the VERY highest praise!! May have to re-read certain elements, tho' ;>
"... if things got hairy." *snort*
Very glad that Leah is getting her due as the strong, resolute woman she truely is. Another good one, sweetie <><3
btw-so glad you know the difference between 'peaked' and 'peeked', something that bugs me in soooo many fics!
Author's Response: EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's so nice to hear from you Carmen! I can imagine you would HAVE to block out some time on your schedule to read this monster of a chapter. But I appreciate that you took the time to read and review. I'm so glad you liked it.
I'm thrilled you liked my "hairy" joke. I thought it was funny...but I'm biased.
Now, I don't claim to be an expert on the grammar issue...I have and will make mistakes. But there are just somethings that need to be done right the first time around, you know? LOL! Anyway, thanks for all your kind words and support.
Until next time...
Erin
Reviewer: AriKnight (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 01:03 PM · On: Chapter Five
hahahhahahhahaha! Oh man this is the great story...Edward's such a stalker...and Jake is so sweet and perfect (yeah I know I'm bias!). What the hell is Edward doing there anyway, he's had his chance now it's the suns turn to shine....someone needs to tell that glittery bastard to piss off-hopefully that will be sweet sexy Jake... Can't wait to find out...pada pa pa paaaaa!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I appreciate your opinions...even if they are biased. ;) Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: Piper2010 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 08:56 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
OMG ! awesome chapter !.......please keep going ! I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter........it will simply be torture.........=(
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Sorry to torture you...but it might take me a while to get the next chapter up and running. I did start it...so at least that's a plus. I just haven't gotten very far with it AND I have a lot planned. So, it might take a while. Hopefully the wait won't be too long though. You never know when the muse may strike! Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: KristinHazzard (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 08:00 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Keep going! I hope Leah gets her happiness. I like how she is going to fight the imprint and she is strong enough to do so. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I definitely have more Leah drama planned in the upcoming chapters. Hopefully you'll like the outcome! Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: AriKnight (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Chapter Four
I'm Lovin it pada pa pa paaaaa! Good job so far honey, this is just what I have been looking for. I'm excited to see exactly what Bella has "Done"!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. You're right at the beginning...I can't even tell you all the stuff that's happened since this chapter! Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: liljules (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 09:07 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Holy cow bells! Great stuff! I love this fic and hope it continues forever!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Trust me...with how long it takes me to write these chapters, and all the ideas I still have left...you just may get your wish of forever! I'm just sayin. :) Thanks again.
Erin
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Wow, what a roller coaster of a chapter, I cried at one point...the ending to this chapter was so beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad this chapter resonated with you. I put a lot of work into it, and without realizing it, set up some drama for future chapters. Anyway, thanks for always sticking with me.
Erin
Reviewer: roxnroll (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Poor Leah. I'm glad that she's going to try and fight it though. I really liked Jack.
The Bella/Jake parts were so sweet and beautiful. I look foward to more.
Rox
Author's Response: Hi Rox!
Thanks for the review. It feels nice to know that so many people like Jack. Of course, now I'm putting Leah & Jack through the wringer. Oh well...:(
I have a lot planned for the next chapter. It might take a while to post though, considering I have a lot of ground to cover.
Thanks again,
Erin
Reviewer: LCB (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Poor Leah. Bella kinda drove me crazy way to much thinking. She's still so selfish. Love that Jake punched Sam!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I agree...poor Leah. I'm really putting her through the ringer. I'm trying my best to make Bella a better person...but sometimes, Stephenie Meyer's depiction just sneaks in and takes over. But, B is going to be growing a lot more soon. Hopefully you'll find her stronger and less annoying. Oh, and Sam soooooooo needed a punch to the face! Thanks again,
Erin
Reviewer: realitysucks (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2010 11:31 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Ah. LOL major user error/reader fail!!!! sorry for the confusion. Thats what i get for reading late at night and first thing in the morn when i'm not really awake. i have now found the up to date chap. funny how i don't remember the chap i clicked on by mistake!!. Anyway great chap. forgot how intense this all was!!
Author's Response: Thank you again for the review! :)
Erin
Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:06 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Did you get my review? It didn't tell me it was posted. I can type it again. Well the just is... Your story continue to surprize me... I didn't think it could get better but this chapter is it. My fav. I love the raw emotion from Leah and how you wrote this imprinting issue. It exactly what I would have hoped for and what I would have expected from Jake... had things gone differently. I love how J&B affirmed their gravitation towards eachother was more them the imprint pull. Wonderfull written! YOur writting always is!
Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:05 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Did you get my review? It didn't tell me it was posted. I can type it again. Well the just is... Your story continue to surprize me... I didn't think it could get better but this chapter is it. My fav. I love the raw emotion from Leah and how you wrote this imprinting issue. It exactly what I would have hoped for and what I would have expected from Jake... had things gone differently. I love how J&B affirmed their gravitation towards eachother was more them the imprint pull. Wonderfull written! YOur writting always is!
Reviewer: jakejunkie (Anonymous) · Date: October 26, 2010 01:03 AM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Did you get my review? It didn't tell me it was posted. I can type it again. Well the just is... Your story continue to surprize me... I didn't think it could get better but this chapter is it. My fav. I love the raw emotion from Leah and how you wrote this imprinting issue. It exactly what I would have hoped for and what I would have expected from Jake... had things gone differently. I love how J&B affirmed their gravitation towards eachother was more them the imprint pull. Wonderfull written! YOur writting always is!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review. I'm so glad that my story continues to surprise you. That's a great compliment, really. This chapter took so much work and effort. I'm so happy that it's now your favorite. I have a lot planned for the next chapter, so it's probably going to take me a while to write it. But, I look forward to hearing from you again.
Thanks,
Erin
Reviewer: realitysucks (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 10:36 PM · On: Chapter Thirty
have i entered a time warp???thanksgiving? christmas???its 26th of october!!!!!wtf??? i,m refering to your note. i was so confused i haven't read the chap yet. Did u write this in 2009? has it taken a year to get through the twilighted system?
Author's Response: LOL! I know you figured the mystery out already...but FYI, this story has been in the works for 2 years now! Even though, so far, we haven't even gone through one full year in the story. But, time will be going by a little faster from now on.
Thank you so much for leaving a review. I really appreciate it.
Erin
Reviewer: Lou Lou (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Erin, you are a genius! Although Jacob is still a teenager, you have created a man, a warm, loving, compassionate, sensitive, smart man. I didn't think it possible but you have made me fall in love with Jacob all over again. Well done from a long time Jacob lover.
Author's Response: Hi Louise!!!!!!!!
So, I finally got around to your review. :) Thanks as always for your wonderful review. I can't help but make Jake a man, you know? He may be a teenager, but he's wise beyond his years. And he's dealing w/a lot of manly stuff...so it just made sense to make him more mature in my story. I'm glad you continue to fall in love with him. I do too...every chapter. :)
Talk to you later,
Erin
Reviewer: Luvtwilight14 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 07:18 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
WOW!! Just......WOW! I don't know what has happened but I didn't get the last chapter update so I had two long, fabulous updates to read tonight. Talk about excited. Ever since I found this fic I have loved it. It was one of my first Jacob and Bella fics when I started reading fanfic that got me hooked on the pairing. I have read many since then, but this fic has held such a warm fuzzy place in my heart, mind, soul and whatever else these is and I love anything you put out there for us. I know that there is going to be a Volturi involvement soon in this fic and truthfully when I read your updates I am soooooo glad they don't have that in them because I figure that will be when it starts to head towards completion and I truthfully don't want that any time soon. I am curious about the Cullens and what is going on with them while waiting. This is just a heart to heart ramble of adoration of sorts I guess. I could go on and one about the aspects of this chapter but that would take of most of this page and more. Just know I couldnt stop reading and I'm glad how you did both the last 2 chapters. Ill only say I kinda feel sorry for Patrick but I understand why you wrote what you did. We all know that Jake would have done the same in Leah's shoes and I can't wait to see if you elaborate more on the council's meeting and if they try forcing Jake's ability to order her or not. Gah, that's so deep. Oh, the drama that will intel! Bravo, again!!!!!!
Hugs, Stephanie
Author's Response: Hi Stephanie! Wow, 2 chapters for the price of 1? That's pretty cool. I think what happend was that I posted Chapter 37 about 2 weeks after posting Chapter 36. You probably weren't expecting an update so soon, so you didn't look for it. ;) Anyway, thank you for always leaving such wonderful reviews. I'm so glad that my story got you into the whole J/B pairing. You're soooooooo right about the Volturi. I've tried to come up w/milestones and various episodes to fill the time because I know once the Volturi show up, it'll signal the beginning of the end for this story. And frankly, it's taken 2 years of my life to write this...I don't know what I'd do w/out it. :( Luckily, considering it sometimes takes me weeks and weeks to write one chapter, it'll still take a long while before this story is finished. Anyway, I have an outline for the next chapter and I've already started writing it. Though, I have a feeling it's going to take me a while to get through it all...especially since I have a lot more drama planned. Stay tuned!
Thanks and hugs right back at you!
Erin
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Um, so I was so wrapped up in the story I forgot to thank you for the lovely, juicy lemon! You ROCK!
Author's Response: LOL! You're very welcome. You know, I had no intention of putting a lemon in that chapter...but w/all the drama, I figured it was necessary...plus it made sense what with Bella and her typical anxiety. ;)
Reviewer: mittap (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:22 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Holly Crow!!! This chapter is packed with so much..... Imprint drama, alpha drama, relationship drama, lust, love and of course a small dose of Bella anxiety (couldn't be a Twilight fan fic without it?). Great Job, it's almost a story in and of it's self. So on another sight your 'End Notes' say the DRAMA is right around the corner. Do I see hovering Volturi in the future--- Yikes. As always, you are amazing and this is my all time favorite BXJ story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Yeah, I added so much drama that I kind of made it impossible to stick with my current outline. Oh well, I guess that just means more chapters for both of us! :) Yes, I do plan on involving the Volturi soon, so stand by on that front. Thanks again for always leaving such wonderful reviews. They mean a lot to me.
Erin
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
Good lord what a chapter. I don't know were to begin......I don't know what to think about the Leah situation, on one hand I'm glad she is fighting it, if anyone can she can, but then when she was describing how when she went to see Patrick and she felt happier than she ever had, that she felt complete...... well, that just make me think no matter how hard she tries she and Jack will never be as happy as they should be, something will always be off, they wont be complete......... man this is a tough one...
As for the end of the chapter? whew, that was really mind blowing. Jake and Bella coming together, showing each other how much they loved each other was perfect, dang good lemons! lol
Take care, Dixie
Author's Response: Hi Dixie!
I always love hearing from you...especially when you show so much love for my chapters. ;) So, I realize that I've really written myself into a hole with the imprinting thing. I'm tweaking my current outline to add some more drama to the story. Hopefully once I get that fixed I can start working on the next chapter. Of course, I've definitely added at least another chapter to the overall story...so there goes my self-imposed 50 chapter requirement.
Anyway, thank you for your lovely review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter. Until next time...
Erin
Reviewer: amberj5 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2010 04:08 PM · On: Chapter Thirty-Eight (shabbyapple)
I loved It!!! like always
im curious about how this all turns out...are you going to make leah fight it to only concluded defeat and in return finally except everything between her and sam? Or is jack and her going to work it out? I hate to say this but im really looking foward to more patrick and i wish him luck. About time someone else fights over another girl...bella shouldn't have all the fun.
keep doing a wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review. You definitely have a point. I don't see why Bella should be the only girl people fight over. ;) I can't tell you what I have planned for Leah's ultimate outcome. But, I can say that based on reviews and suggestions...I am thinking of adding a bit more drama to the scenario. Anyway, thanks again for your kind words.
Erin
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