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Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 02:34 AM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Very Funny, original and still loving the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! We've reached 500 reviews! I have your name down for the drawing! Thanks again!

Val

Reviewer: inlove22 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

hehehehe



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! We've reached 500 reviews, so I'm putting your name down for the drawing!

Val

Reviewer: musiclover0620 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:38 AM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Aw, too bad Nessie had to give up Mr. Jingles, lol. I've always been a cat person (currently have black female) but since i was introduced to the twilight saga I've become more of a "dog" person too, LOL. You keep amazing me with the things you come up with. Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah, too bad. I've always been more of a cat person, too (I'm kind-of like the crazy cat lady in the neighborhood. I currently have five, but there's always new ones stopping by to visit.). But, I'm with you ... I've found myself much more of a dog person, too. I'm really glad you're enjoying it! We've reached 500 reviews!  I'm putting your name in for the drawing! Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: sistergrimm (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 12:43 AM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

nice story! how many more chapters?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it! This is still a work in progress and I'm not the most organized writer in the world. So, I think there will be about four more chapters, but it depends on whether or not I get very many more insane ideas in my head. We've made it to 500 reviews! I have your name down for the drawing. Thanks again!

Val

Reviewer: aleene35 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

That was so cute!!! They should get a pet dog instead.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! LOL! Maybe a dog would be better! We've reached 500 reviews! Yay! I have you on my list for the drawing. Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: Msvan (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Really!!!  How do you come up with these ideas!!??  I loved "the little hairballs needle like claws" "freaky feline" and seriously Mr. Jingles is a girl!!!  Love it!!  What a riot!! We just fostered 5 orphan kittens and my husband was not so excited so it was extra funny to me!!  In addition to the entertainment...  so well written!  Your updates make my day!  Hope you get all the reviews you want! (and deserve)



Author's Response:

LOL! Honestly, I have no idea where most of these ideas come from. The whole idea for Mr. Jingles came from wondering what would happen if Nessie wanted a pet. At first, I wondered how Edward and Bella would react - but then I thought about cats and how Jacob would respond to a cat. It just all fell into place after that. Oh, gosh, after your husband's reaction to the kittens I bet this was funny for you! Thank you so much! I'm really glad you're enjoying it! We've reached 500 reviews! Yay! I have you on my list! Thanks again!

Val

Reviewer: MrsGale (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Hahaha, Mr. Jingles!  Qouting Mr. Wolf King "Why would you name a female cat ‘Mr.' anything (Jingles)?" I forgot to ask last time, and I've been curious ;)

"And stop calling me Eddie!" hahaha, love that! I don't think we can stop anymore. *sigh* This one is going in my favorite chapters, I like its dialogue between Jacob and Nessie, and how she'll sleep when he sleeps, part and that she'll wait for him all night. Great job Val aka Queen of Nicknames!

Hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Caro! Thank you so much!

I'm kind-of like the crazy cat lady in our neighborhood. Any and all stray cats at some point wind up on my back porch - some of them just stay for one meal, some stay for a few days, and a few adopt us as their permanent family. I told my daughter a couple of months ago that I wanted to name the next cat that joined us Mr. Jingles. I said that I didn't care if it was male or female, it would be Mr. Jingles. Of course, that didn't happen - our most recent cat is beautiful, mysterious, and tends to shy away from humans - therefore, we named him Jasper. :) That's probably a lot more than you ever wanted to know, huh? So, in answer to your question, she called her Mr. Jingles because I was transferring my craziness onto Nessie!

LOL! I can't stop calling him Eddie! This is one of your favorite chapters? Cool! I'm so glad you liked all of those parts! You picked out some of my favorite parts, too!

We're all caught up with TA now. This is kind of scary. But I'm almost done with my next one. Hopefully it will be ready soon. We've reached 500 reviews! I've got you on my list for the drawing! Thank you so much for your review and for the rating! You totally rock Caro!

Val

Reviewer: AFitzwater (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Prologue, Chapter 1: Renesmee

Poor Edward.  The lust must be killing him.  Very funny though!



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Edward. He has all kinds of thoughts and images he hoped he'd never have to deal with. I'm glad you liked it! We've reached 500 reviews! I have your name down. Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: Sleepingbella (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

That was a really cute chapter! It made me smile. The whole story makes me smile. I love Jake and Nessie!



Author's Response:

That just makes my day to hear that! I love making people smile! I love Jake and Nessie, too! I hope SM decides to continue the story at some point and focus on them! We've reached 500 reviews! I have you on my list! Thank you so much! I love to hear what people think of it!

Val

Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Oh meh goodness!! What was Ness thinking getting a cat?? LOL!!

 

Well at least she came to her senses and gave Princess Jingles to Claire.

Great chapter! Can't wait for next friday!!



Author's Response:

LOL! She wasn't really thinking. Plus, Bella encouraged her to get it because she knew it would drive Jacob crazy and she thought it would be funny. Yeah, at least she gave it away ... now poor Quil has to deal with it. We've reached 500 reviews! I have you on my list! Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: mellyfrisco6 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Being jealous of a cat is something that only Jacob is capable of! Sometimes it feels weird to read your story because I'm such a Jacob person for me he has to end up with Bella so I can like a story. But your writing is so great and funny that I can't help but like your story!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! When I started this chapter, I didn't plan for Jacob to be jealous, just tortured by the little thing. But, that's what it turned into. Even though he doesn't end up with Bella, I'm glad you gave this story a chance. I'm really glad you're enjoying it! We've reached 500 reviews! I have your name down. Thank you!

Val

Reviewer: hchambersmomx3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

Oh I am so glad Nessie gave up the cat. It was funny how the cat reacted. I just don't like seeing Jacob upset.



Author's Response:

LOL! I am too! I just sat and thought, how would a tiny cat respond to a werewolf? And then I thought about how a cat I used to have would repond: she was a ballsy little thing and she attacked anything that she viewed as a threat. The cat in this chapter was based on how she would have acted. I don't like seeing Jacob upset, either, but they have to have some issues to work out. I'd rather see it happen with little, inconsequential things like cats than something huge. Thank you so much for your review! We have reached 500! I have your name down on my list! :)

Val

Reviewer: St0pSmackinMe07 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:15 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

aww so cute.

and poor Edward. He's probably going nuts with the two almost-newlyweds haha.



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! Yeah, Edward's going totally nuts! The poor thing. We've reached 500 reviews! Thanks for your help! I have you on my list!

Val

Reviewer: jacobishot (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Have You Ever Heard the Phrase: Fighting Like Cats and Dogs? (v)

ha! a cat! i love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review! We have reached 500! I have your name down ... Thanks again!

Val

Reviewer: perincess101 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 01:03 PM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

hey, this is good, but it has been awhile since you have replied.

i am dieing for the next installment.

i love the way you potray Nessie & Jacob's romance!



Author's Response:

Thanks. The next one will be up soon.

Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 05:16 AM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

oh i can't wait for the next chapter!! update soon!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far! I'll be submitting the next chapter tonight or tomorrow morning. Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 02:20 AM · On: All I Wanted Was to Rip His Head Off. Is That Too Much To Ask? (v)

Man...I know exactly how Ness feels. 'Cept i didn't have Jake afterwards to hold me and make me feel better...Poo. Why can't fictional characters be real??!!!

 

God that pig Nahuel!! I wanted to rip his throat out when i read what he did. arg.



Author's Response:

I know how she felt, too. This is based on something that actually happened to me ... except I'm not a half-vampire and I didn't have a hot werewolf boyfriend to take care of me. I totally agree about the fictional characters - if only. Nahuel deserved a lot worse than what he got, but I didn't want the story to turn into that. Writing this chapter was somewhat therapeutic for me. Thank you for your review!

Val

Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 4: Separations & Temper Tantrums (v)

OMG!!! HOW HILARIOUS!!! LMAO!! That's what edward gets trying to take Ness away from Jake... pshhh.. But oh man this chapter was sooooo funny!!!



Author's Response:

LOL! I'm so glad you liked it! Edward should have known better! Thank you so much!

Val

Reviewer: andreavera (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 05:46 AM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

Awwwwwwwww!!!!!! So cute and fun!!!

MORE!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review AND rating!!! I really appreciate it! I'll be submitting the next chapter in just a couple of days. :)

Val

Reviewer: up_late_and_bored (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:02 PM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

gosh!!!!!!!!!!! i love this story. i rele want to here more.



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you so much! I'm glad you're loving it so far! I'll be submitting the next chapter very soon. Thanks for your review AND rating!!!

Val

Reviewer: _19_Team Sseth_19_ (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:25 PM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

i love this!!! its amazing!!! when r u gunna finish?



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far! It's still a work-in-progress, so I can't say for sure when it will be finished. I have one more chapter completely finished and ready to submit and one that's about halfway done. If I'm thinking correctly, there will be about 4 or 5 more chapters. But, the way it's been going, there might be more than that. It just depends on what kinds of crazy things pop into my head. Thanks again!

Val

Reviewer: juggalettels (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:19 PM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

Hahaha Man-makeover.  I love it.  I cant wait for the next chapter I love it!



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you loved it! Thank you so much for your review AND rating!!!

Val

Reviewer: Fatima (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 10:02 AM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

lol...

"I'm not touching his feet!"



Author's Response:

lol! I'm glad you liked that line! Thank you so much for your review AND rating!!!

Val

Reviewer: sweetblood17 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 09:59 AM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

you know that if jake were able to get his hands on you, he would have ripped you to pieces when he foudn out that you were making him get his eyebrows waxed! but it was really funny, thanks.

Author's Response:

lol! Yep, I think you're right! He knows it's all in good fun, though ;) Thanks!

Val

Reviewer: Candi_ass (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2009 01:00 AM · On: You Mean People Actually Pay For This Torture? (v)

Hey i really enjoyed that! GREAT JOB!! =)



Author's Response:

I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Thank you so much for your review AND rating!!!

Val

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