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Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

can't wait for more! :D



Author's Response:

I won't let you wait too long!

Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I know I keep telling you how I love this story, but I really do love it and look forward to the updates.



Author's Response:

Oh that's so so sweet of you. i'm going to update later today or tomorrow morning!

Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

This was a very good and emotional chapter... PLEASEPLEASEPLEASE make Bella and Jacob break up soon.

I'm so glad that Bella came to the realization on her own instead of breaking up with him over a mistake he made like sleeping with another girl. That just makes her decision so much more powerful!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

Reviewer: yesyov (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Come on Bella - get it over with already!!!!!

Dump jake....

 

by the way, does anyone think that there will be another accident?  Grace will die and Bella will be incapacitated to the extent that she won't be able to break up with Jacob as planned and that Edward and jacob will face off in the hospital???? just an idea.....



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

FINALLY!  She's made her decision.  Now, screw all that stuff about "no time to break up".  Just do it.  Like the next time he's being an ass!

And I'm worried about Grace...are we about to lose her??



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry that I killed Grace...

Reviewer: BeSafe1223 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

She has to go home now and find him in bed with another woman.  I cant wait anymore for them to be together!!!!



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: jEnNn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

HES GONNA COOK HER BAMI GORING!!!

YAAYYYYYYY

N BELLAS GOING TO BREAK UP WITH JACOBB

WOOO HOOO

YAY YAY YAY YAY :D :D :D

loved ittttt

-jen



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: wandering-home (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

ugggggggggg i want to hit her in the face.

i'm sorry.

i'm a terrible person but i don't want her to get edward now.

she's been absolutely horrible!

*growls*



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS And I agree with you, bella doesn't deserve Edward like this!

Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I'm so happy that Alice has made an appearance... and Jasper, too (squeee!!) They'll be good friends for our couple. Buuuut, please don't make Grace leave us!! Evil foreshadowing... evil!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry for killing Grace...

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Its about time that she realized she needed to kick Jacob out.  I wanted to take her by the shoulders and shake her.  I cant wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: dreampills (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

How many reviews do you need for a breakup?!?!  Break up nowww.  Glad to see that Bella finally realizes Jacob isn't the one. =)

I love Grace's old wise wisdom.  Hope it isn't foreshadowing anything too bad in the future...



Author's Response:

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PS Sorry for killing Grace...

Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

hey cool chap its really sweet lol edward looks sexy all the time if hes in a tux or not XP



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS He definitely looks hot in a tux. But he looks hot in everything I think *g*

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

btw loved the chapter and please don't kill Grace! She's the sweetest human being on earth!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry for killing Grace...

Reviewer: ashtreeha (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I'll review  500 times if it makes Bella break up with Jacob in the next chapter!!! :P

Can't wait!!!! But I can't read previews...they make me wanna read the entire think immeaditly!

waiting for chapter 13 (which will hopefully be my lucky one...)



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry, number 13 wasn't exactly a lucky number...

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

OH my God! i listened to Hallelujah during THAT part and i swear i felf a massive lump in my throat! it really suited it. his song 'lover you should have come over' really reminds me of edward in this story actually! listen if you don't know it!

Jacob is so heartless! i'm so glad bella came to her senses!

great chapter! i CANNOT wait for more!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Hallelujah is definitely a very sad and moving, touching and heartbreaking song. Everytime I listen to it, I have this lump in my throat as well. Going to check out that song you mentioned!

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Dump Jacob.  Dump Jacob.  Dump Jacob.

If I keep chanting, it might really happen.

Dump Jacob.  Dump Jacob.  Dump Jacob...



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: Nessie_Bella_Edward (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I no i red this on Fanfiction before but I still love it and i cant wait until Bella breaks up with Jacob. I was very touched wen i heard about Edwards parents. Update soon! Love it! BEST STORY EVER



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Girl, you're awesome. Thanks for reviewing twice!

Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

 Well, you had me crying. Good one.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Do you still need a handerkerchief?

Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I agree, its time to get rid of Jacob. He seems to be a cheat anyway. I hope its soon, the suspense is killin me!



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Finally she is seeing the light of day. I still think she needs to find out that he has been cheating. God he is an ass. She just needs to throw all of his shit out and change the locks. I mean you know she has to be paying for everything.



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS She finally saw the light, Hallelujah!

Reviewer: goldeneyedgirl (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Break up with Jacob, break up with Jacob, break up with Jacob...I am hoping this mantra filters through to Bella!!!!

Please don't kill off Grace, I would be so sad!!!! I love her! Of course Alice and Jasper!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry for killing Grace... hope you can forgive me...

Reviewer: cb2brown (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Oh -- I love this!  I felt like I was there --  I imagine that Edward sounds like Andrea Bocelli!



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

great chapter.  cant wait to see what Edward has planned for bella on Monday.

Update soon

 



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: lovedforeternity (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

I loved that... I could almost hear him singing. Great Job!



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

Reviewer: Tweetiebird86 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 12: The Glue for a Shattered Heart

Its about time, Jacob is an ass! Lol, can't wait to see what happens when she breaks up with him. I have a feeling Grace knows she is dying, that is why she said those things to Edward...



Author's Response:

Sorry for the extremely late reply but now that I appreciate every word of feedback! Thanks!

PS Sorry for killing Grace...

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