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Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:30 PM · On: Edward

Edward to the rescue......*sigh* 

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:00 PM · On: Blow Up in the Little Big City

Can Mike be a bigger ass??  Please tell me Edward is monitoring the sitch and will be there to drive her home?  It may be a race to see if it's Edward or Jake who kicks the shit out of Mike....providing Bella doesn't do it herself!!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:49 PM · On: Pyromania and Other Fun Topics of Conversation

"I just want you to get in the car"....GAW!!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:39 PM · On: Questions, Anger, and Answers

Good to know that Jake can still make an ass of himself with his jealousy....not very endearing.  If only he knew this helps push Bella towards Edward.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:22 PM · On: Playboy Bunnies and the Dichotomy of Apples

Ride to school, now he's providing her with his bio notes....nice little tete a' tete with Mike----now they are bickering over her.  Alice also wants to get some Bella time.  Like the snarky humour b/t E&B....clearly he is getting more comfortable with her....this is kind of like a slow burn.



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Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:01 PM · On: Kitchen Supervision, Stubborn Decisions, and the Dread Beep

Can't wait for 8:30 Monday morning!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:50 AM · On: Bright like the Sun

Edward will drive her to school when he can.....how awful for Bella. lol  And it sounds like the truck, Steve lmfao, is out of commission for a bit.  Hope Jessica doesn't bust a vein over these new events....or maybe I hope she does!

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:39 AM · On: Cold Snaps and Bone Cracks

Edward speaks!!!  Enjoyed the little exchange with Bella and Charlie in the store...seemed very natural and sweet, a little father/daughter moment.  

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:30 AM · On: Stare Down at La Bella Italia

Having a staring contest with Edward....that is hot and tantalizing.  Hope they do more than stare at each other before too long....the tension is ramping up a bit each chapter.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:19 AM · On: SWCIFD

Kind of hoping Edward would have talked a little bit more with Bella....but you sense there is tension there already so I'm looking forward to how this develops.  And Jessica's interest....wrong.  Sorry, just not a Jessica fan but I'm interested to see how this goes.  Thanks for writing this story.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:09 AM · On: New Bella

Chuck the iPod??  lol  I guess Bella got Jacob's attention there with the pj issue....love it. And what is this with Jessica all over Edward's business....can't have that going on, please.  Hope there's some EPOV coming up.  Enjoying your story, good dialogue, snark and humour.  Onto next chapter.



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I may do some EPOV outtakes when the story is done.

Reviewer: spunkaroo (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:58 AM · On: New Town, New School

Nice start to this story.  Like Edward's dramatic departure from bio, he always knows how to make an exit.



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:46 AM · On: Chastity Belts and Blackmail

OMG this was EPIC! I know Charlie is being protective but dear lord that man had me in tears from laughing so hard. Ohhh I am so excited by their upcoming date....

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Invitations and Bathroom Visitations

OMG! Bella's tyraid in the bathroom was hilarious but hey she got some damn fine results from Edward...happy dance...they kissed!

So excited...



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 11:49 PM · On: Cupcake Cannibalism and Cooking Lessons

LMAO...oh dear lord what I wouldn't give to have seen Mike's face when he saw Charlie and his gun...

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 11:11 PM · On: Abby Normal and the Cupcake Pants

Ok what the hell is up with the cupcakes?

Whohoo hello Dr. Cullen! That was definatly an eyeopener.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 10:35 PM · On: Incidents and Allegations

Whoa what the hell?! This ought to be an interesting story

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 10:09 PM · On: Vegan Cardboard and Paint Flecks

LoL...watching those two interact is hilarious. I am also wondering what Edward is doing to piss Emmett off. This is just way to funny.



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:53 PM · On: Rudolph, Ladybugs and the Christmas Cactus

Oh dear lord they left teenage boys to paint Bella's room! What was Charlie thinking...lol I hoped they behaved themselves.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:27 PM · On: Bracelets and Black Eyes

LoL...oh boy Edward putting the smackdown on Mike was AWESOME!! Gotta love that boy that's for damn sure.

Ohh Bella's visiting her mama for the holidays...that should be interesting.



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 09:08 PM · On: Edward

OH yeah...Jessica killing Mike sounds like a fantastic idea! That was a great chapter!!



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Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2010 08:48 PM · On: Blow Up in the Little Big City

Holy Hell...why can't that jackass Newton take a hint! Dear god I'm gonna beat his ass as well for leaving Bella in Port Angeles by herself at night no less!! NO wait! Lets tell Charlie!! Oh he has a gun and everything.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:24 PM · On: Pyromania and Other Fun Topics of Conversation

Aww this an interesting thing to see Edward openin up little by little to Bella even if Bella doesn't understand it.

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 11:09 PM · On: Questions, Anger, and Answers

All right..we have some of the dirt scooped on the Cullens...but yeah...Jessica definalty needs help

Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2010 10:53 PM · On: Playboy Bunnies and the Dichotomy of Apples

LOL...raising a few eyebrows now aren't we...

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