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Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Bachelor Party, Cullen Style

That was great. Emmett cracks me up!

Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Bachelor Party, Cullen Style

Still here and loving your view of Edward's thoughts :)

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Bachelor Party, Cullen Style

oh my God this is wonderful

Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Engaged

I am excited to reead BD from Edward's POV!  I would imagine already having the basic storyline in place would make it easier to write from Edward's POV?

I am looking forward to reading more.  I especially liked discovering the reason that Bella's truck died hahaha :)

I loved reading about Edward hunting with his brothers.  You do quite well at capturing their personality with the scenes you write.

Author's Response:

It is and isn't at the same time. Easier because the plot is already there... but harder because Edward's voice is very complex and you have to continuously check the book for continuity. But so far it's been fun and challenging. Thanks for the review! I hope you enjoy the other chapters.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 03:10 PM · On: Engaged

I know that I want to read this...I hope you continue

Reviewer: Titch22 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Engaged

Great story. You captured all the characters well and I love Edwards take on the car. So cute that it was Roselie that was to blame for the truck not working. lol I hope you write more soon

Reviewer: MeggieBeth (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:44 AM · On: Engaged

I love this story... hope more is coming soon!

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 02:53 AM · On: Engaged

EPOV is so wonderful.  I hope you take this through the whole of Breaking Dawn - if you can do that you'll be one of my heros :)

Great job so far!

Reviewer: keerplunk2809 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Engaged

oohh... this is so good!!! i hope that you continue through all breaking dawn!!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Engaged

I hope you continue this.  Great first chapter!

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Engaged

I really enjoyed this - loved MS and always wished I could peak into E's mind during BD! Thanks, looking forward to further chapters!

Reviewer: quailingquazar (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Engaged

This is really good so far, do you intend to complete the story as told by Edward?

Im anxious!


Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Engaged

Yes, yes!  I can't believe you're taking on ALL of BD in Edward's perspective.  What a job!  But so excited to see someone do it.  Mostly we just see snipits and missing moments (still good).  Great start!

Reviewer: mommycamille (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 09:02 AM · On: Engaged

Great job - loved Rosalie's comment about the car!  That made me laugh out loud.   Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: lolipoper (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Engaged

Wow.  I can't wait for more!  I think you've captured Edward's voice so perfectly.

Reviewer: amylouwho (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:39 AM · On: Engaged

I like this.  Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: spooky sister (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Engaged

Oh I LOVE this! Can't wait to read more!

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