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Reviewer: gabthebomb1 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

I love your use of the word "dear" in italics. HA!

Are you going to continue this?

xx

Reviewer: hihi (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

R U GONNA FINISH THIS?????? I REALLY LIKE IT AND I WANNA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Hollywood_678 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2009 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

I think you've really captured exactly what the characters would be saying and feeling. Fab job, I'd love to read more but it looks like you've stopped writing :o(

Reviewer: Heaven-Tonight (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 12:16 AM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

WOW! good story so far (hint: please write more)

=]

Reviewer: Bitten and Smitten (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

I liked it, a lot. It really made me smile. I could imagine Alice saying everything. Well done, you did a really good job!

Reviewer: CiAnna27889 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Okay, I'm hooked! This is going in my favorites and I'm looking forward to more. Hummm, what could this costume be?

Reviewer: pink_sapphire (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Ah, the suspense! I love the relationship between Alice and Bella! What a funny and cute start to the story!

Reviewer: Jacque (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

So, you really need to post the next chapter quickly. I need to know what Bella is being made to wear (poor girl).

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Some more PLEASE =D

Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Great start to the story! I love when Alice gives Bella such a hard time. It's out of love! :)

Can't wait to read more. :)

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

She can't resist or object to something that's going to put a chink in Edward's prude-armor!

Please go on!

Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Great start! I am looking forward to reading more!

Reviewer: Eudora Scott (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:49 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Great beginning. But i NEED to know what is it!!^-^

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Argghhh. I have too many guesses going on in my head wondering what kind of costume Alice is putting on Bella! Next chapter-hurry!

Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:32 PM · On: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll

Great first chapter. I cannot wait to read how this plays out! Keep em coming!

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