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Reviews For La Lune
Reviewer: Kendra (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Such a great story so far.  Keep writing!

Reviewer: madame09 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 9

love the story!
update asap!

Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 9

When r u going to update, really anxious how meeting william is going to go!!!

Reviewer: karenbush2007 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2011 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 9

Still waiting to meet William!!!!

Reviewer: Sugargirl (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2010 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 5

Oh no! Busted :). Luckily they're the coolest parents ever.

I can't tell you how much I'm loving this story, it's wonderfully written and so fun and romantic!

Reviewer: Elysia23 (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2010 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 9

Don't suppose this story will be continued?? Pretty please? lol.

Reviewer: grlanachronsm (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 9

Ooh! I love this. The progression of their sexual relationship is slow and steady and so believable! You must continue this because it is just too good.

But, I have a question, are you planning to keep this in canon with the books? Mostly concerning Reneesme? Just curious, is all.

Reviewer: Leenie (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:36 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hope you are going to continue this!!

Reviewer: littlehill (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2009 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 9

Oh I cant wait thanks for your story

Reviewer: lizzierichards (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 9

Hi, just finished reading this story from the first chapter. I noticed that you haven't updated in a while. This story is so good! Please post more soon!!!!

Reviewer: bb123 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2009 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 9

loved that write more please.

Reviewer: bwen (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 9

I haven't been able to stop reading your story, it's amazing you have captured the characters exactly! Along with the lemons, there is a great plot fleshed out with great dialogue and surroundings.

I hope you plan to continue this story, I have found it to be absolutely fascinating, the romance and humour that I have come to associate with the characters is there in full force.

I truly hope that we will find out about the mysterious William and what he holds in store for Bella and Edward!!!

Reviewer: sanson (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2009 07:44 PM · On: Chapter 9

Beautifully written and...last updated in March!? Please, please, please update soon. I love that you have made things sexy but kept things in character for the two. Neither Bella nor Edward would be raunchy.

Reviewer: Carlisle060 (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 9

anxious to find out what's going to happen next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!!!!

i cnt wait :)

Reviewer: Allegra (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2009 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

Good lord...such a good story...

 

I loved how Bella was usually the one who pulled away

 

And there were some hilarious moments

 

The reviews are right...you have GOT to continue the story

Reviewer: Bart (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 9

Sweet story!  Please continue!

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 9

 Very nice. I like the progession of the Bella and Edward's relationship and their erotic experiment that Edward is so into :)

The talk with Carlise was interesting and Emmett is a riot.

Update very soon.

Reviewer: LittleMissLuLu (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 9

Loved it!

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 9

Aw man, you got to finish this story!  This is one of the few stories out there where I actually believe this may have been their behavior.  You keep it lust-y but innocent.  It's more seductive than any smut out there.  Even if there's only a chapter or two left you have to finish it. 

I love the whole scene with Emmett!  I love the parents walking in on a make-out session, so awesome!  It's funny, sexy, and interesting!  I so interested to find out who this William is!

PLEASE UPDATE!

Reviewer: Ivory Angel (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 9

I'm loving this story so far! so happy that you have written them true to their characters in the original books and that reading it makes it easy to believe that this is how they could have spent their time in between eclipse and breaking dawn, hope you finish it soon!!

Reviewer: Ilse (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 9

Ah please, i want to know what happens, I love your story and I hope you update soon again. But if you don't continue with the story can you please let me know, so I won't wait for something that won't happen

thanks

Reviewer: Luna Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 9

OMG i never get bored of this chapter but yet i want to read the next one....

 

Love your Work

 

Luna Cullen xx

Reviewer: alkatraz69 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 9

UUUMM....you totally have to finish this please....I'm on the edge of my seat here!! Great Stuff!!! I feel like it totally sinks in with the book....great transistion....love it!!

Reviewer: murmureetoile (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 9

Great story!! Who is really this William...? I'm curious!

Continue!

Reviewer: louemrog (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 9

Really enjoying this story, more please!

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