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Reviews For A Lesson in Fate
Reviewer: Rylee Skye (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMGFOMGFOMGFOMGFOMGFOMGFOMGOMGF

 

you better put the next chapter up before i have an anuerysm!

~Rylee

Reviewer: MrsCullen1987 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks

You drive me insane!!!  I just finished " A lesson in release", ending up here, captured again by your brilliant writing skills and imagination...

I totally neglect my life, I have to read on and on and on - just the way it was with the SM-books.. Thank you for bringing this feeling back!!!!  In a better way even... :)

It`s so weird how you play with my feelings, I can`t decide on which side I am... But I sooo love the Diary-thing...!!! Such a great idea..

I`m really looking forward to the rest of this story!!

Lots of love from Germany

Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMFG!!! that was a hell of an ending !! the wedding was soo beautiful and romantic and private and cuute! I can't wait to read the next chapter yay.

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 7: Confession

Not that I'm bloodthirsty or anything but what is so difficult to understand? Jasper's background makes him think the way he does. He perceived her as a threat....and it's unfair for Bella to compare Edward and Jasper at that point in time. They voted, Jasper respected the outcome. It's not like he strategized even after they had voted against it.

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories

yikes. Edward is being sneaky just as Jasper was. Ugh.  Bella is in soo much trouble.

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Chapter 4: Down By The River

well, Alice's bright idea sucks and would benefit her and Adrian to the fullest but yeah, heaven and hell indeed for Edward, Bella and Jasper.

Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 2: Motorcycles

Jasper doesn't deserve this. Bella tries too hard to pacify Edward, ain't gonna work. Jasper should be her priority, not Edward. Just because they cheated doesn't mean they need to defend their relationship forever. I cried for Edward in the first fic but I realize that he lost Bella because he is who he is. Unless he changes. Even if Jasper and Bella never got together, I think, eventually, he still would have lost her.

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

awwwwww *squee*

Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Oh m,y goodness! What a cliffy! Awesome chapter and can't wait to read about Bella's reaction!

Reviewer: scouting-for-rach (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You

nooooooo :(

I so wanted Jasper and Bella to be together :(:(:(

Owell looks like it's not gonna happen :(

Am I an idiot for crying about that LOL?

:(

-Rach x

Reviewer: dnabgeek (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

i seriously squealed when i read this... can't wait to see what bella has to say.... and i hope she doesn't complicate things... agian....

Reviewer: scouting-for-rach (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

CRYS AT THIS CHAPTER :(:(:(

I hope Edward and Bella won't get back together properly :(...

Wow never thought I'd say that, but I love Jasper so much :(...

KK time to read the rest, but for a good review, I loved the last story and I love this story, although it made me cry when the whole thing with the volturi came up and the wedding ring :(

-Rach x

Reviewer: GataMoreninha (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:21 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMG Where is the rest of the chapter????????

That was mean, posting half the weeding...

Post soon!!

Reviewer: BellaDawn (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Oh how could you!!  Here you've left me sqeauling and NEEDING another chapter!!!  I also what to let you know that, this is one excellent story!  I'm so glad that you've explored the flaws in both Edward & Bella as well as the flaws in their relationship.  I'm just glad that they are learning from the mistakes they made in the past.  And I must say, that I am so in love with this fiesty Edward that you have created.  It's adorable.  And just like a typical male.  Get a little ass, and they ALL turn into monsters!  Haha!  Update soon, please!  My sanity depends on it!

Reviewer: SheriePattinson (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMGOMGOMG!!! That is such a tease!!!! I seriously love this story and i am soo addicted to it..

 

I think you should send the Naked Cullen Boys to Sydney Australia So i can hang out with my favourite men.. Mainly Edward!!

Reviewer: Janes Rage (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Aww! What an adorable wedding. I love how the relationship between Edward and Adrian has grown so much. I'm all giddy

Reviewer: Telulah (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMGoodness!!  I can't wait for the next chapter!

I love you story.. you are definitely a very talented writer and I hope to read more from you =)

Reviewer: jenlovesedward (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

That was perfect.  Oh I cannot wait for more.  I am positively breathless. 

 

Oh and on a sexier note tell Jasper I am next in line for a lap dance and maybe some special attention from Edward if he is free.  Hey I don;t mind taking an example from Edwards Release and having them both join me. *wink*

 

Thanks again for a wonderful story.  I am addicted and will be waiting in anticipation for the next installment.

Reviewer: sweetpea1118 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Wow, wow, wow!!! Loving this more with every chapter. Please don't keep us waiting long!!!

Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 01:31 AM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OMG now THAT IS A CLIFFHANGER!!!! I can't believe Edward is proposing!!! I have a feeling she will say no though...

Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:31 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Aw man!!!!!!  I love the "I'm a man" paragraph!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

OH NO YOU DIDNT JUST LEAVE IT THERE!!!!!!!!!

and Wedding Bells...Awwww

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

NOOOOOOOOOOO Clifhangers are evil!!! AKKK please update soon! I HAVE TO KNOW IF BELLA SAYS YES!!!

On a side note --- BEAUTIFUL. Absolutely stunning. A complete dream wedding. = )

Reviewer: emnem (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

!!!

Awesome.

Update soon!

Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 06:21 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last

Ahh yes, that makes sense. Throughout this whole chapter I kept thinking about how it should be Edward and Bella getting married...

I wonder how she'll respond?

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