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Reviewer: spazzticprada (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
I love this story. I'm super sad to see it end!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Wow. Beautiful fantastic wonderful story. You had me in tears, you had me in stitches, you had me on the edge of my seat, and you had me holding my breath and reading so fast I'd skip lines and have to go back. Truly fantastic. I cannot wait for the girl's POV and alternate endings. And maybe another installment? *hinthintnudgenudge*
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 42: Nona
*sniff* They're seperating? *sniff* That's so sad! *sniff*
'Was there a man alive who wasn’t lusting after Bella?!
“Welcome to my world, brother,” Edward muttered quietly, reading my thoughts.'
hehe Loved this.
Well, I love the ability you gave Bella. Very neat. Very original.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 41: Honesty and Understanding
I love how you can make me laugh in the midst of a heartfail. hehe Hmmm...wonder what Bella's gonna eat?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 40: Morta
Oh god oh god oh god....Jasper, you idiot!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 39: My Name is Adrian Michael Peters
Oh. Oh god. Oh, what's gonna happen? What's Jasper gonna do? Damn him, he over reacts when he sees they're married, doesn't he?
Poor Adrian. He was a shoein for the Heisman (or whatever it's called). And now? God, I hope everything ends up all right.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 38: After All
Oh, that was simply perfection. You know, both of those made me think of my wedding day. Down the isle to Cannon D, dancing to At Last, and smooshing cake in my husband's face. He got some up my nose. There are lovely pictures of him cleaning me up. hehe
But, oh, Jasper! He still had hope, poor thing. And the Volturi will prob want her changed right away, huh?
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 37: At Last
HOLY FUCKING CRAP!!!!
Beautiful chapter, dearest. So sweet. I'd love to write more, but my brain's gone blank from that ending. hehe
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Squeeeee!!!! OMG That just rocked but I so want a trilogy!!! This has potential with kelly Bellas ability Adrian ETC! You opened the can of worms to late to put the lid back on now!!! Post again soon as alwasy swoon worthy!
Reviewer: banana526 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Yay! Are you planning another spin-off? I hope so!!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 36: Ohio State vs. Michigan
"I’m coming after you with a .45 and a shovel, understand?”
*dies* Too funny. I love your writing, darling, and I love these characters that you've developed so beautifully. What are you going to write for us next?
I hope to be caught up with this fic by tomorrow (I have a half hour before work then three hours after with nothing to do but read. Joy). I just hope it has a happy ending for all involved. I'm surprised, I've grown attached to Felix and Heidi.
Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Loved the chapter especially the lion and lamb lol. I knew Kelly was a smart woman. She's more than a match for Felix. I am happy that Jasper is finding companionship with Heidi. Can't wait to hear from the women.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Chapter 35: This is Halloween
Oh dear Christ. Jasper's costume. *pants* Ohmigod. What I would pay to see Jackson done up in that diddy. And as long as I'm shelling out the money, to have him done up in that diddy in my living room. While my hubs is away for the week. *mind wanders*
*cough* Anywho, wonderful chapter. Wonder how Heidi will take to the whole singer idea. Several mines were avoided in that chapter, can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 34: We've Only Just Begun
Okay, I was wrong. While that chapter wasn't as difficult for me to read as the last one, I still had to break it up. Thank god for Twitter, right? hehe
Great job, bb. I'm glad they've hashed things over. Can't wait to see where this goes.
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 33: Love, Life, Everything
That was a really hard chapter for me to read. I cried so hard during that point in NM, and it wasn't any easier reading it this way. Now that the worst of it is out of the way (in my mind, him leaving was the worst, the aftermath was livable), it should be easier to read. Doubt it'll be easier for them to deal with, though.
Great chapter, darling.
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
Loved the chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 32: Hello Again
"I briefly wondered, as I did often, if Jesus minded when women did that."
God, I just about died laughing at this! hehe
Wonderful chapter, darling. It was interesting, getting all the guy's POVs. I'm still wondering what they're gonna do to shake Heidi and Felix when they go to England, but I'll get there in time.
Reviewer: chasityc (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
OMG.. this was a great chapter.. i love the way you are leaving this story with a bit from all the groups.. thanx so much for writing
chasity
Reviewer: Sciencemom (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 42: Nona
I loved the explaination for Bella's power. I also liked the way everything seemed to fall into place for Jasper, Bella and Edward- too bad the family cannot all stay together though. As far as Caius, well, way to take care of that mean old vampire!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:39 AM · On: Chapter 31: Welcome to Manhood
"I will take a step back and be your friend, your brother, as I promised you I would be. But know this, Bella. When the threat of the Volturi is gone, I will fight for you.”
Is it wrong that this line makes me so tingly inside? hehe
Dear god, the thought of Edward, doing that. My oh my. And that he said "fuck" during sex. hehe Get's me every time. Can't wait to see the trip to England. Won't the Volturi come with them? Although, maybe they can keep Felix and Heidi occupied long enough....hmm...
Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
That was so wonderful!!! I loved hearing from all the guy's POV's. Can't wait for the girl's. I hope it will explain how they handled bella's change to her family. I think this story would make for a great trilogy...even if it's a short one. I can't wait to read more of your future work. I have got alot of my friends hooked on this story line...so gotta go text them to let them know there's an update!!! THX
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 30: Duet
Oh crap, just had a thought and wanted to get it down before I lost it: Is Jasper gonna leave to join the Volturi? God, I hope not.....
Oh god, is he eating Kelly? Hmm....Let's see: We have 8 main characters at the moment, yes? There's Alice and Adrian, Bella and Edward, Jasper and Heidi, and Felix and Kelly. Oh my, lookie there. They match up sooo nicely. I wonder if that was done on purpose? hehe
Shower sex! *groans* Makes me wish I had a built in bench in my shower. The tub can be kinda hard on the knees. *cough* TMI? Sorry. hehe
So, Heidi is Jasper's singer, huh? And vice versa? Well, we know what this family does with singers. As long as Jasper's happy, I'm happy, so that's all good. hehe
Reviewer: Bonafide Deviant (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
I am so SAD to see this story coming to an end!!!!! I have no idea what a sequal would entail, but I have a sincere hope that you will continue to entertain me with your wonderful tales!!!! Once again, like always, I am reading this at work. I see the alert in my email and head directly for Twilighted!!!!! Most other stories can wait until I am off the clock, but never yours! That's why you don't receive a lot of reviews from me, but I had to sneak in one now! Thank you for these stories, I have truly enjoyed my time reading them!!!
Reviewer: btvsna (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You
Okay, first, the mutual attraction between Jasper and Heidi. Hmmm...interesting. He can't be with Kelly, obviously (too weird), but Heidi....it'll be interesting to see where that goes.
You know, as I was reading NM I got the impression that Felix lusted after more than Bella's blood. Glad to see I wasn't alone in that. And I'm glad you didn't make Felix and Heidi all bad, either.
The sex! Dear god, the sex. That was, well, it was perfection. It was hot and sweet all together and just wonderful.
Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:57 AM · On: Epilogue: Guys' POV
this...
this..
is.
TOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
perfect
gdi.. YOU ROCK MY SOCKS. *whee*
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