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Reviews For A Lesson in Fate
Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 32: Hello Again

Hmm, it sounds like Heidi and Jasper may hook up, no? Maybe once this all blows over and they are done playing babysitter. Great chapter!

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 28: Decima

I like that Edward's becoming more comfortable with Bella. It's nice. Now to deal with the volturi

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 27: The Tale of Two Weddings

I love Adrian's point of view, he's awesome! Great chapter hun!

Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

This chapter is excellent.

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: When I Think About You

So he's finally learned to take things into his own hands. Hehe

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 01:12 PM · On: Chapter 22: How am I doing so far?

Man, this must be crazy hard on Edward. Great chapter

Reviewer: Chrisstars1 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 05:40 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

I must be more than a little creepy! I lvoed the change seen! But then again i love it when my husband bites me!



Author's Response: If you're creepy for loving it, what does that make me for writing it? LOL! Glad you enjoyed it! ~Lillie

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

Aw, that was so sweet, with the change, Charlie's acceptance and everything. And the way you kept Bella's power the same is one hell of a cliffhanger, given the way ALiF went. Please tell me the alt chapters aren't ending there...

One thing (totally un-ALiF related), I couldn't get into text novel to read Manhunt. At all. It was coming up with a completely blank, white page.



Author's Response: Thanks bb! I know they were having some server issues yesterday (figures, right?) Try again and let me know if you get in. http://www.textnovel.com/stories_list_detail.php?story_id=1521 Much love, Lillie

Reviewer: lskmom (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 07:05 PM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

Oh, it is fun to be team jasper again....even though...sheesh..poor Edward.

I love the image of Jasper sharing her pain...being with an empath really is so much hotter than a mind reader anyday.

I am dying to know what her superpower will be...the same as before or different?

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

Alternate Endings make me happy.

Reviewer: LisaF29 (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

Love the new alt endings! While I loved the story as it was, I admit I was orginally disappointed that Bella didnt end up with Jasper, so I am glad you are giving some of us a peek at what it would have been like if they had. Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

Wow swoon that was one hell of a chapter!  Is there going to be a third story there seems to be alot of room now for you to go on!!!!  I can't wait for the next update!  Swoon love the chap!

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2009 04:49 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 19

As much as I am anti-Jasper/Bella, this has to be one of the best chapters I have read so far. I do love your Jasper POV, you add such life to him. And the change for Bella was perfect. = )

Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 18

OK, I have to say that I love this story, even if its hurting my head with its non - E&B ness AGAIN but that is ok. I am an equal-oportunist (although I did skip back to see the happy ending from before just to reassure myself.)

Ummm send the Cullendales to Pittsburgh again! We need some lovin here!

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Chapter 21: Looking Forward to Regret

Why dont you drive a stake through poor edwards heart or shoot himwith a silver bullet or something,this is  going to be slow inhuman torture and I wont be surprised if he ends up offering himself to the Volturi to work for them or for them to kill him,in exchange for letting Bella live,he cannot lve like this,in a charade love affair,and survive.This is just cruel.And Bellas a bitch anyway,after what she put  Esward thru with Jacob,we all forgave her,wasnt her fault,she didnt know Edward loved her and would be back,yadayada,this time she knew from day 1 what she was doing with Jasper,does she realize she threw away love for sex yet?She is right,she doesnt deserve Edward and never did.I only want them truly back together for him,not for her,at all.He was right in what he said,her stupid little human mind would forget and move on,he just didnt know how true those words were or that she would risk her life to save him then choose to kill him slowly instead.

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2009 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 7: Confession

That "Stay with me" song is beautiful,its a pity its not in NM.Grr,heres me seeing why I love Edward more than Jasper,yet again.What is she thinking?Edward has only ever loved her,Jas had human girls,vampiregirls,decades with Alice now her,why does she even feel special to him?

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories

What,so you plan on making me cry every chapter now?Poor Edward,has he not suffered enough?And we KNOW Jasper would get over losing her,he is so over Alice,his wonderful precious cant live without,no need for words,Alice,just like that,why would losing Bella be any worse for him?I kind of hope Edward finds another girl,I am detesting Bellas choices so much at the moment.Edward is so much more worthy of her love than Jas...and I like Jas,really,just not with Bella.Gah!Read on....

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 3: Blessings

Oh no,Jasper gets to change Bella?Does that give him first claim to her?I suppose not,seeing Carlisle changed Rose.Also,we are not going with the idea vampires mate for life,that there can only be one mate,or Jasper never would have left Alice......so why did Edward say there will never be anyone else for him?I never understood that idea,seeing Tanya certainly had plenty of "mates"lol.Is it different for Edward because Bella is his singer,I wonder?In that case,will it mean Alice will remain with Adrian forever???Still loving the diary...

Reviewer: twilynzi (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2009 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks

So far,this sequel is great but the whole diary and hearing Edwards thoughts about Bellas thoughts...brilliant!I hope you keep it up for the entire diary!Maybe Edward will be able to understand her better and know her heart,if they do get back together,maybe they will now have a better chance of forever.God,I cant let go of the hope you get them back with each other,where they should be.Heck,I even want Jasper and Alice back together,I am brainwashed!

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 18

Have the Cullendales hit Sydney? I can't remember...

Wonderful chapter, as always.

Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: catvet1999 (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 18

Still haven't seen the boys here in Atlanta....I have loved these stories since Lesson in Release.  Keep 'em coming (in EVERY sense of the word).

Reviewer: lavishone (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 18

I liked the alternate ending almost as well as the original.  You have a way of communicating the thoughts and feelings of Edward/Jasper/Bella which is so honest and true.

Thanks for sharing your story.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Alt Ending Chapter 18

wow awsome chapter i luved it

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 19: As One

Well thats one bright light in all of this mess. Adrian and Alice. They'll make it through this.

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: September 25, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Hmm, I cheated and skipped ahead so I'm already heartbroken by where this is going. But I do love this story so I'm gonna finish it.

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