Reviewer: margaretthedevil (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:47 PM · On: Chapter 7: Confession
Am I the only one who still wants Jasper AND Alice together? @_@!?! And Jasper seems really cold in this chapter to both Bella and Alice. Still don't seem convinced that he really loves her...as I'm sure she isn't either as he did a whole 360 from wanting to kill her to protect Alice and his family to loving her? And I thought it was funny and ironic how Alice and Jasper were so nonchalent about discussing the killing Bella thing and them taking a "vote" in Midnight Sun.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks
I love the alternating perspectives. I LOVE him having Bella's diary and the entries are so well written. And I can help but feel bad for Edawrd...:( XD
Reviewer: AbbyHale (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Great chapter!!! Can't wait to read the next one, like always!
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:30 PM · On: Prologue
So interested to see where you take this story!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 7: Confession
Well, I suppose he had to come clean eventually. Great chappy!
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 7: Confession
Ah, the first tiny fisure has surfaced. Perhaps Jasper isn't quite as open as he thinks he is. And my beautiful perfect tortured Edward just earned a brownie point without knowing it. The plot thickens.....
Reviewer: JaspersBella (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 6: Alice and Adrian
Ugh! Am I the only one who loves Jasper and Bella together? I really loved this story, but now I'm starting to worry. I'm hoping the Lesson in Fate means that all along it is Jasper that is going to change Bella and not that it's Fate that Edward and Bella should be together.
Reviewer: xxIsabellaCullenxx (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2009 09:06 AM · On: Chapter 6: Alice and Adrian
Ohh, this fic is getting more entertaining by the chapter. Now this is going to be good, to Alice not tell about her visions... lets see what kind of mess is going to happen! I'm loving this more by the updates also, lol. Make me love it more, please!?
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Oh Edward. Somehow, Jasper is going to find out about this... maybe he'll smell Edward, maybe Alice will see and tell.
On another note, though I love that they're having such a great time together, and it is good to see Bella/Edward healing.
Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Pick Up Trucks
ok...I flat HATED the ending to your last story (I just can't see Bella with anyone else!) - but your writing is so good, I'm giving this one a shot and hoping Edward ends up redeeming himself :)
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Squeal to bad I can't leave a 100 reviews just at the chance at being the lucky one. But I digress Edward would not be as forgoing as Emmett hehehe!!! Look forward to the next chapter hope you post again soon!!! I am praying that somehwhere deep down inside E and B get back together sorry Jasper!! But, well I am me
Reviewer: creamandroses (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
what are the titles of the other 2 songs?
Author's Response: Please Forgive Me by David Gray and White Flag by Dido
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
This chapter made me cry! I need them to get back together!
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Hmm... Wonder how long it'll take for Bella to realize she should be with Edward, not Jasper. :)
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
I have to say it: PLEASE let this be the beginning of them getting back together. I've tried to keep an open mind, but I'm stuck in my ways, I guess :)
Reviewer: alice18431863 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
update soon please
xoxo,
Alice
Reviewer: FanpireGirl (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
WOOT! Kansas CIty, finally somewhere close enough for me to get to! *starts packing bags* I'm coming, boys!
On a serious note, I loved this chapter. It made me giggly and I got all warm and fuzzy inside...which I don't understand, because when it comes to this story, until today, I was all Jasper and Bella...but now I think I just might be Bella and Edward. Maybe.
hehe. I'm too confused. My brain is turning to fondue because my mind keeps drifting to that free lap dance from one of those Cullen boys...delicious ;-)
Reviewer: carson_maverick_girl (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
I'm totally loving this story!
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Loved the chapter! I like how Edward is actually learning things from the diary. Maybe he won't screw it up this time if he makes a move to get Bella back!
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Great update, loved it!
Reviewer: brooklyn (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
Congrats on the Nomination for the Eddie/Bellie Awards. I'll have to go vote for you. I loved your last story and I love this one. You are awsome! I can't wait for an update. I always drop what I'm doing to read your updates.
Reviewer: robbsweetangel (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
This chapter was great. I thought it was funny when all the sad love songs came on talk about a embarrassing moment for Edward. You can tell there is so much love between these two. I can't wait for their next evening together. I know these two will find a way back to each other in the end they are soulmates. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
As always, another great chapter. My poor Edward. His age and human life experiences finally caught up with him and now he is trying to redeem himself (or grow up).
Reviewer: windchime (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories
I love this story, you have me on tenterhooks. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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