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Reviews For A Lesson in Fate
Reviewer: Janes Rage (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Argh! Oh the drama! The Volturi always have to come in, messing up a good thing. Poor friggin Jasper. He can't seem to catch a break anymore. And to be a fly on the wall when Edward introduced Kelly to everyone... eye stares from Bella, I'm sure. Great update!

Reviewer: just_me (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Is it bad that I absolutely love and absolutely HATE the twist? I mean, it's a good one - I didn't see it coming, but DAMN, SKIPPY, the timing SUCKETH MUCHLY

Well done.

Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:56 AM · On: Prologue

Oh goodness! Is this the moment I've been waiting for?? The moment where Edward and Bella begin to get back together?? And jasper get's left behind?? Please God let it be!!! Gotta say that I love this twist!!

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

I was wondering about the italians.  This is a great twist.  I am still hooked to your story. 

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

I actually want Jasper to die. So this makes me happy :)

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

You really know how to throw a wrench in the works.  I didn't see that coming.  I wonder how this will affect Bella's relationship with Edward.

Reviewer: slew201 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

I love your story. I think it is amazing...but i must say i am a total team edward girl and what him to win her back so badly!!!

Reviewer: sweetierosy (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 5: Music and Memories

Awesome chapter!  I love Edwards angst!  So brooding!

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

YAY!!  I am team Edward all the way.  Even though he was a complete ass in the last story, he's been nothing but a good friend to Bella in this story.  I am anticipating that the next chapter will be very good as well.

Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

All I can say is WOW!!!!

This story is totally engrossing, gripping and has taken my neglect of my household chores to a new level.

So, so, soooo wanting more, curiosity at how you will continue is absolutely killing me!

Sigh....looking forward to next chapter/s...Soon? I hope?!

Reviewer: maria111 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

all i have to do say is OMG!!i started reading this story just last night and i was very happy that there was a new chapter today wohoo i like the scene when bella was jealous with kelly also it was an excellent change of things,amazing suprice,when jasper proposed to bella and then BOOM the phone rang and Volturi is coming to town!

Please dont be mad with me if i say i support Team edward all right?

Excellent writing,i didnt stopped a second to have interesting for the story waiting for the new chapter :D

Reviewer: randigiles (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

id say if feel sorry for jasper here, but I don't...(I usually enjoy team Jasper, and Emmett for that matter, however this story has me going team Edward all the way) Edds and Bells are talking through things like they should have in the first place.

Reviewer: Mora-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Nice twisted chapter! :-)

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

So the plot thickens.  :)  Can't wait to see what happens next!

And I love Hiding in Plain Sight - such a good story.

Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Ok that was a low blow even for jasper. I wonder.... are Bella and Edward going to realize that they are meant to be together forever after this little bump in the road.? Cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: kellybug (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Prologue

Okay, I rarely leave reviews (bad, bad kellybug) but here we go.

First, I was PISSED at the end of "A Lesson in Release" because Jasper and Bella ended up together. I also felt a sort of appreciation because you were willing to write a story that upset the entire heart of Twilight. This is fanfiction after all, and I tend to like the stories that take risks. Kudos to you for that.

Kudos also go to you for how masterfully you are playing both sides of this story. With every update, I search for validation of which direction you are really moving in: Jasper or Edward. Every time I think I know, you mess everything up again. I would like to be hopeful about the developments in this chapter regarding Edward and Bella, but I have learned not to be certain about ANYTHING in this story. I like that, and I keep reading update after update because of it.

I don't think Jasper is an asshole in this story; I think he is reacting like a man who is completely in love and wants Bella to be completely in love with him. Bella can't just forget about Edward...she loved him with her whole heart and soul. Edward...well Edward has no choice in his love for Bella because as soon as her love changed his life, he was destined to love her forever whether or not she reciprocated. And he screwed up by not trusting himself or her during their relationship. At least the long talks involving Bella's diary have helped them begin to understand the dynamics in their relationship.

I'm not going to lie. I want Bella and Edward to end up together, especially because they are developing an understanding of themselves and each other that would fill in the missing pieces of their relationship before. I also want Jasper to be happy because I, too, love Jasper.

I will keep reading because you have sucked me in completely and because I have no idea where in the hell this story is going. This is one of the very few ff that have utterly thrown me off track time and time again, and I am addicted. KEEP WRITING!!! This story rules.

Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

LOVE hiding in plain sight. Great story. I love your story too, and I hope this is going where I think it is! I'm so excited to see what's next. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

yippee!  I think this story just might be heading my way finally (I hope, I hope!)  God, I hate Jasper in this story...he's such a selfish @#$~!  Thanks for the quick update - please keep them coming!

Reviewer: SubtlePen (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

sweet jeebus.  jasper's going to have to be sedated for 2 wks, or longer if HxF stay longer...  poor E is going to need some serious willpower to avoid hard core attepmts at reconciliation with B.  I predict she pops his cherry before HxF arrive.  ya know, just so we can add more guilt, cheating and angst... 



Reviewer: lavish1 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:52 PM · On: Prologue

Hadn't read previous story- but really enjoyed torturing Edward!!! Very fun, enjoyable, this note is short..want to read next chapter!! :)

Reviewer: scimomyyy (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Umm, I can honestly say I wasn't expecting this in the slightest. Interesting twist to be sure. I will be waiting anxiously to see where you go with this. You told the Team Jaspers to calm down, but what about the Team Edwards???? :) Great job. Can't wait for the next post!

Reviewer: Cyartia (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

30 seconds from proposing? Ouch. Poor Jasper.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

OOOOhhhh. Evil twists! I am so excited, I still want more of Bella and Edward discussing past mistakes, I'm assuming they'll have lots of time for that living together. I really liked both of them realizing they didn't talk enough. I still want a happy ending for Jasper too...Just looking forward to next chapter.

Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

ahhhhhhh please let edward and bella get back together. I usually like jasper/bella stories but your edward is just so sweet, and forgiving, and loving, and SO deserving of Bella's love!

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 17: Soothe My Soul

Oooooo, poor Jasper. Although (of course) I'm hoping that this is the turning point in both relationships that brings them back to canon.

Looking forward to reading more, and soon!

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