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Reviews For A Lesson in Fate
Reviewer: Bonafide Deviant (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Send The Naked Cullen Boys to Macon, GA!  Hell, send them to Atlanta, Savannah, anywhere I can get to and I'll damn well be there!!!!

Yet again, I am sneaking and reading this at work.  Argh!  I can never properly review and I can never seem to find a moment's peace to do it once I get home. 

So frustrating!  Just know I love the story and I love you for writing it and sharing it with us!!!!  Bless you, you freakin' genius!!!!

Keep the updates acomin'!

 

 

Reviewer: ncchris (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Heart breaking -- I really want B & J to end up together, but alas, Romeo and Juliet probably will seal the deal...poor Jasper! I'm not quite ready to give up on him though. Just keep updating, OK? This story is like "my own personal brand of heroin". LOL

Reviewer: cfmom (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:15 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

“What…wait a minute. Your first orgasm? As in, ever? Of any kind?” I turned my head away from her and nodded, embarrassed. “You’ve honestly never…touched yourself or anything?”

“No. I was raised to believe that pleasuring yourself was not proper; that it was immoral.”

I am completely in love with that exchange. Not only does it reveal so much to Bella about Edward that she had never let herself accept, but it also makes Bella's betrayal so much more cutting. I believe she always knew on some level that her indiscretions with Jasper were so much more painful as Edward didn't just touch her - he didn't touch period.

Of course, this brings me right back around to being really pissed off at Jasper. There is no way he wasn't aware of Edward's complete abstinence. It makes Jasper's "love" for Bella really selfish and one-sided in my head. He took advantage of Bella's needs to satisfy his own. Grrr.

 

~Lisa

 

Reviewer: AliKatt (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

OMG!!! That was so good!  When Bella breaks up with Jasper, he and Edward will be on even ground.  I have a sinking felling this is going to be like we are watching a tennis match...can't wait.  I'm so looking forward to the Vorturi to show up.  We need some more Em soon too.

Reviewer: jessnab (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Let's go break Jasper's heart ! Karma is a bitch

Reviewer: JulieUK (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Prologue

I am sooo loving the story and checking for updates on a regular basis...I much prefer it to a Lesson in Release although they are both excellently written... I have been Team Jasper in this one from the very beginning and would be pretty annoyed if he ended up without the girl..But just other ppl on here I feel that Bella doesn't really deserve any of them at the moment...the only right thing to do would have been to stay with Jasper...although I do appreciate that she is supposed to have loved Edward all along which pretty much makes her a liar...But anyway apart from that I love what u've done with the guys' characters they are all amazing including Adrian...Love'em all...pls update soon this is by far my favourite story on here. Well done!!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

“I’m thinking that I’m so glad I was able to do that for you. I’m thinking that I wish I had been awake to see your face when you climaxed for the first time.  I'm very proud of Bella for not making Edward fell guilty.  This love triangle is getting more complicated although I can think of worse things than being in love with 2 georgeous, sexy vampires and having them love me back....fades into impossibel fantasy. 

Reviewer: DevineZ (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

oh wow this is getting SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good..

I dont know if I want Bella and Edward or Bella and Jasper.. wow.. good stuff.

Reviewer: letmesign (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

As always, great chapter! It's still so conflicted and heartwrenching, but I have a feeling it's going to be like that for awhile. After all, it pretty much has been since like chapter 3 of Lesson in Release. ha! We all knew what we were signing on for.

Anyway, loved it. :)

Reviewer: karentwilighted (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

I've been rooting for Edward all along so obviously I'm thinking Bella breaking up with Jasper and admitting she loves Edward is good turn of events. She does seem totally wishy washy though - never stopped loving Edward but fell in love with Jasper anyway. The fact that she's been fucking Jasper all this time while still loving Edward, knowing he's all alone again and in pain has lost her a lot of my respect. As much as I want Edward happy, at this point I'm not sure she deserves either of them.

Reviewer: Wallace (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Would Bella really be so honest with Edward without the threat of the Volturi?  Talk amongst yourselves...

Reviewer: Lily Stargazer (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 3: Blessings

I absolutely love this fic! Gets me thru my boring days and has a mesmerizing quality.

Reviewer: sbr0275 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

great chapter!! but poor jasper :( please update asap. love it . thanks

Reviewer: AlliYoyo (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Please, please, please tell me this isn't going to end badly for poor Jazz! I know that Bella still loves Edward, this the way this is going it's beginning to almost look as though she was using Jasper. I know that wasn't the case, that she loves him too, but it looks like Kelly has a point.

I've worked out that I'm both Team Edward and Team Jasper, but as I've said before, I'm definitely Team Jasper for your stories. And I want Bella and Jazz to have a happy ending.

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Sniffle!!!  I mean I want her to be with Edward its where she belongs and all this insight into Edward and the realization of how bad he was messing things up is obvius that I just want to see it even more.

But Jasper is sweet loning and caring and doesn't deserve to be alone and hurting find him someone please!  Just not Bella LOL ;)

I look forward to the next chapter post again soon!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

I like where this is going so far, hoping Bella follows through with breaking up with Jasper, he is just  making me mad lately and I love Edward. He loves and deserves Bella more

Looking forward to more! :)

Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:09 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

I am so glad that she admitted that she still loves jasper. I personally would like for kelly and jasper to get together.  No but seriously. I love your story. I check daily for updates needless to say I'm an adict.

Reviewer: jedishelly1 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Fantastic update - it's great to see Bella coming to her senses and admitting that her feelings for Edward are as strong - if not stronger - than ever.  She is in a really horrible situation though, torn between 2 amazing men...

Reviewer: jasperluv (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

what else !!!

poor J

Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

I knew as soon as I saw the title of this chapter that I would like it.  Finally, Bella admits it!!

Reviewer: coookies_n_cream (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:53 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

I knew as soon as I saw the title of this chapter that I would like it.  Finally, Bella admits it!!

Reviewer: scimomyyy (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Thanks for another great chapter! I hope Edward stays Mr. Understanding. That will get him far with Bella.

 

You've got me completely hooked! Thanks for all the updates. You're awesome!

 

Reviewer: malice (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

OOhhh.  I'm so into this story right now.  I'm dying to see the blow out with Jasper since I feel like I really love this new, enlighted Edward.

Keep it coming!  And thanks!

Reviewer: PositivelyDazzled (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

:O For once I really want Jasper and Bella to be together... Ugh.. I don't really like the direction this story is headed.... Or where it seems like it's headed..  (but that definitely doesn't mean that I don't love the story ;P).
I'm almost on my knees begging for Jasper & Bella to be together ;)

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 24: Confessions Part I

Best chapter so far!

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