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Reviewer: Christina Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Eeeeeeeeeeek!! I'm thrilled about this chapter for so many reasons!

Mostly because my darling Edward got deflowered in such a beautiful way :) Thanks so much for such an intimate, romantic experience for both of them! I completely adored it!

And then, thank you for sending the NCB's to South Africa! I'm ecstatic that I get a chance to play with them! I live in Johannesburg and will assure that they'll be spending some quality time over here :) I think I may not even share :P

Do you have a lot of South African readers? I'm very interested to know...

I really like the direction this story has taken, Lillie. I freak every time a chapter gets updated! (And thanks for updating so frequently, you're spoiling us!)

xoxo

Love ya to pieces!

Elana (aka Christina Cullen)

Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Chapter 28: Decima

OH MY GOD!!!! Jasper is related to Kelly, that is so weird. I definitely did not see that one coming. Guess him and Kelly might not end up together. 

Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

HMMMM the plot thickens. Jasper seems to have an attraction to Heidi, (especially interesting that she has a certain smell to him)... wonder what that might lead to.

I am so happy Bella and Edward finally made love to each other.

Reviewer: Bdayornite (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I love your first story and I spent all day reading the second.
As a team Jasper fan I'm sad =( Jasper/bella <3

Anyway, I loveee your writing.
You had me going from happy to sad and back again with each chapter.
I'm hooked =D

Reviewer: Elektra1369 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

My favorite chapter so far!

Reviewer: Liz-Cullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I spent the past day and a half reading a lesson in release and a lesson in fate. I must say, your stories are completely amazing.

I honestly prefer this one, as I'm totally team Edward.

...and I'm glad Edward finally got some, ha.

Keep up the good work. xx



Author's Response:

WOW!  Thank you so much!  I am humbled and honored, truly!   Much love, Lillie

Reviewer: pinkjewel (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 09:36 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

i am definitley team edward, even though this series has made me love jasper but i would love to hear a chapter or just a few paragraphs from bella's pov, just to get an idea of what's really going on.



Author's Response:

I don't planning on writing Bella's POV until the epilogue.  I know it might cause some Bella hating not being able to get her take on things, but I think right now it's far more interesting NOT knowing what she is thinking.  Much love, Lillie

Reviewer: weewander (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Thank god!!!  Finally, Edward gets some.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: EBCullen (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 07:32 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Hey Collmom, I actually located a shirt that says "Oh Hale Yes" on it!  Time to update my wardrobe lol.  I have the feeling we are going to be holding a funeral service for our sweet Jasper's heart by the end of this story.  :(

 

Team Jasper.....Oh Hale Yes!

Reviewer: purplemilk27 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I love that you wrote this really romantic, lovey dovey, sex scene but that you were able to lighten the mood a little with the 'Edward, you can move now' line.  Absolutely fantastic. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!  ~Lillie

Reviewer: Janes Rage (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

LMAO @ at Edward being a tittie man! That was really fantastic. The poor thing forgot that he had to actually move... PRICELESS. I wonder what will come of Jasper and Heidi... for some reason I sense I connection in the air. Exciting chapter!

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Team Jasper. Oh Hale Yes!

Hahahaha. That's really funny. I love it. I'm having an Alice-ision and I can see it on a T-Shirt....

Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

It was the best de-virgin of Edward I had ever read. I was really amused on how Bella had to tell Edward that he could move and Edward being embarrass that he forgot about it... LMAO

Author's Response:

Really?  The best?  THANKS!  Love, Lillie

Reviewer: sugypunk (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I loved this chapter!  The part where Jasper suggests pink for the color, then Edward blue, had me thinking about the end of Sleeping Beauty where the fairies are fighting over the color of her dress.  Lol... yeah, I spend way too much time with 4 year olds!  Then green was picked, and I had to laugh.  I just had to mention that.  :-)  Keep up the great work!



Author's Response:

I just watched that with my DD8 shortly after I wrote this chapter.  I thought the same thing!  LOL  She picked green and brown for a reason...   ~Lillie

Reviewer: EBCullen (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Did I miss the sad reflection to mourn the slaughtering of our poor Jasper's heart?!  The Chapter was well written but I can't help but focus only on how much Jasper is suffering :(

 

Team Jasper.....Oh Hale Yes!

Reviewer: BaileyMac (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Edward is becoming a horny little perv...and I have a feeling Jasper's not going to appreciate their 'closeness'...

Reviewer: emmy84 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

:( :( :(



Author's Response:

I'm guessing you're Team Jasper...sorry, love.   ~ Lillie

Reviewer: mrsn (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Yah!!!  He likes it, he loves it, he wants some more of it!  :)

 

Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

Although you wrote this scene beautifully (virgins are SO needy!), I am sad for my sweet Jasper.

Team Jasper will meet in a few minutes for sad reflexion and to share a moment of silence...



Author's Response:

I know it might not seem like it at the moment, but I do love my Jasper!  :)

Reviewer: AppLeOfMyyEyee93 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I think our little Virginward-no-longer is quickly becoming a bit of a Slutward...



Author's Response:

Slutward....mmmmm......

Reviewer: jacobsdream (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

awww.  Heidi and Jasper, really?  So long as he's not alone, it's all good.

Reviewer: k a hall (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I'm so glad that Edward has finally figured out that he isn't an out of control freak. Heidi and Felix are already playing out in a different way than what I expected. I'm trying to figure out how Heidi ends up with Jasper without them finding out about Adrian and Alice. Can't wait to find out.

Reviewer: jcb (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

so steamy.... loved this chapter!

Reviewer: emnem (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

I love you story!!  Keep up the great work!!

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 29: Tangled Up in You

finally cashed in his v-chip. finally!

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