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Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow
AHHHHA! She does know something is going on! I wonder if she has already heard the story from Jacob!! She has to know what with his skin and how his eyes must change obviously!
Author's Response: She suspects something, but being her father's daughter, choses not to push the issue because she feels safe with Edward. She's choosing to live in blissful ignorance. Thanks for reading, k8.
Reviewer: Autumnmissa (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I started to scream and jump up and down when I realized that there were 2 CHAPTERS POSTED!!!! SWEET!!!! Thank you very much, this one was awesome, as to be expected. It is funny to see the 17 year-old in Edward to emerge! And Bella's responses...swoon. More please...even though I am off to the next chapter. Again thank you!
Author's Response: I have an incredible beta. Shabbyapple is awesome! I like my Edward and Bella together. Thanks for reading, AM!
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Great Chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:27 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
hehehehehehehe *giggles a lot* I love it
Author's Response: Thanks, Wicked! I'm glad it made you giggle. It did me too as I was writing it.
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I absolutly love his ending monologue!!! The fact that Edward finally embraces his inner teenager (finally) is soooo refreshing!
Author's Response: Thanks, Padme. I thought it was about time for him to "act his biological age" too! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: lovelikethemovies (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
And in response to that, a huge, resounding 'awww'!
Author's Response: Thanks lltm! I appreciate the "awww"! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: rachaelprincess (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Woohoo! So happy to read another chapter :)
"My thoughts exactly" - I loved that line.
Author's Response: Thanks, rprincess (cool name). I'm glad you liked the chapter and the line. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Edward's monologue was great, you better show the conversation between Ed and Emmett! Love ya babe
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is up, so you will get to see what the family is thinking about everything. I'm thrilled you liked the monologue. I really liked writing it. Love you too, dear!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Really, really sweet chapter. Edward is so cute and funny. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my Edward. I do too. Chapter 6 is already validated. I'm beyond thrilled that things are going so quickly. But I think I'll submit another chapter on another story before doing one for this one--if I can get one done that I am happy with. Thanks for reading, Sunfeathers.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
so cute! happy, horny edward is adorable! and I like that he isn't all timid and afraid to break her...that gets old quick :)
Author's Response: Thanks asrial. I haven't seen your name before, so welcome to my stories. I have 4 others, if you like this one.
My Edward has had 17 years to think about and prepare for Bella, so he's not so insecure about things, including touching/kissing her.
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Loved it, of course!!! This scene was just too perfect for these two. They are SO adorable and I look forward to more of this! Update soon, please :D lol
Author's Response: Thanks demeterloves2. I'm really happy with how it turned out and I'm so glad you like it. I have sent chapter 6 to my beta already and the teasers for it and chapter 7 are in the Fanfic Twilight section of forums.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
My favorite chapter so far.
You have some fantastic lines in this chapter. Here a few of my favs:
The gentleman in me said yes, but the horny, seventeen-year-old boy in me said no, and right now, he was in charge.
I’d really, really like to inspect your tonsils with my tongue... GO EDWARD!
Is that a chorus of angels I hear?
Excellent job. Please be kind and update soon.
Author's Response: Chapter 6 is already submitted to my beta, and there are teaser quotes to it and chapter 7 in the Forums: Twilight section.
As far as my lines go, I have so much fun writing one-liners. But, I have to admit that I am the world's worst joke teller! I can write witty things, but I have the worst comedic timing in the world. Can't tell a joke to save my life.
Thanks for reading. If you like my lines in this story, check out my other 4, especially Socially Awkward Vampires. It's got a lot of funny lines in it.
Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:20 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Another fantastic chapter. Gah! LOVE all the kissing. Why did my first boyfriends kiss like horses? lol
Author's Response: "Why did my first boyfriends kiss like horses?" Hahahahahahahahaha! I've got tears in my eyes from that, e.w.! Have you kissed a horse before for comparison?--lol! Just teasing. As I said, my first kisses were so bad, I dont' remember them. Either that, or the first one and all subsequent ones with the love of my life have been so good that I forgot all others--that's probably more of the truth. He still curls my toes (blushes).
Glad you like it. Thanks for brightening my day with your reviews.
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
OMG That was great. I love Edward's monologue ending the best!!
Fan-tab-u-lous!!! Can't wait for more!!
Jace
Author's Response: I love the ending of this chapter too. It was my favorite thing I've written thus far with the exception of the scene in Socially Awkward Vampires where Edward uses Shakespeare to propose to Bella. I think they are tied. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks always for reading.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
So cute. Great job on this chapter. Another favorite of mine.
Author's Response: Thanks Re-Re. I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
I can see why this chapter is your favorite. Mine too!! :)
LOVED the kiss. Swoon. If only all first kisses could be even half as good.
Edward's thoughts about buying Alice a country and Emmett in drag had me laughing like a little girl.
Love the chemistry you're building between these two. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks e.w.! Gosh! I am so honored that you are reviewing my story. Dangerous Affections is AMAZING! I love it. One of my fav's. Can't wait for an update. That was quite a cliffie you left us with last chapter! Just had to gush and brag on you a bit.
My first kiss, I don't even remember. Now, my first kiss with the man I am now married to, I definitely remember. Definitely swoon worthy. He can still make my heart hammer in my chest, even after 15 years of marriage. He's so much like Emmett--baby-faced, dimpled, big, shameless and hilarious.
Glad I made you laugh with my little comments and that you like the chemistry between my characters. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
This was amazing! I like that Edward is less prudish in this! cant wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad you like my less prudish Teenward. He's fun to write. Thanks--oh, Chapter 6: Afterglow is already to my beta.
Reviewer: Cherrie (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
oooo, edward is soo cute. i love how he has had so much time to practice his control with bella, so that he doesn't want to kill her anymore. and that he lets his felings and hormones get the best of him. can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, Cherrie. Glad you like my Teenward. You are so right--he has had a lot of time to prepare for Bella, so the blood lust is not as strong as the other kind of lust--hehe! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Yeah, I agree, the ending monologue was sweet and wonderful. It's great to see him happy and complete. *smile* It was great to see them acting like teenagers and making out in the back of the car.
Author's Response: I'm so pleased you thought it was cute. I like happy Teenward much more than Emoward, though Emoward may make a future appearance. Thanks as always for reading, Sheeijan!
Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
i love it. =) i love how edward is being more of a teenage boy and not so much of a prude!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my less prudish Teenward. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: SpyketheKlown (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Awwwww! This chapter was so cute lol :)
I love seeing Edward acting like just a normal, hormone-driven, teenage boy.
Author's Response: Me too! I like Teenward--lol! He's awesome. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I love this chapter too. I love how giddy Edward is! Great stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks. I like giddy Edward too!
Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
This was even BETTER than 4!! I loved how she bolted into the backseat - too funny for a girl that had just fainted from her first kiss! I loved it!!! Off to find the forum...
Karen
Author's Response: Well, the kiss made her faint because she forgot to breathe and because she realized where she was and became overwhelmed. But she definitely liked the kiss, so I don't blame her. Heck, I'd jump in the backseat with Edward--no problem!
Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
Loved both chapters. His internal monologues in this chapter were much more boyish, but I think the last two lines sum up why. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks. I really find Edward's vampire character intriguing. On one hand, he's lived through tons of history. He has so much "worldly experience", and yet, he is trapped in a seventeen-year-old's body, with the hormones and all the stuff that goes with it. He's feeling much more human with Bella, at least in my story. Thanks for reading. When is the next Blood Crystal update--LOVE your story.
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