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Reviewer: reviewgrl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

i totally love this story! update soon



Author's Response:

Thanks, reviewgrl.  Chapter 13 is up.

Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

Once again, another amazing chapter in one of my favorite stories.

I can't wait for the big reveal and I'm sure that its going to be a good one. Don't get yourself nuts over it but you're probably your own worse critic. I know we'll love it, so post it soon. I can't wait!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your kindness, Re-Re. 

I'm not worried about the chapter being bad.  I actually am very pleased with it.  However, I am concerned about how you all will react.  Just trust me--it will be worth it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

I'M SO EXCITED!!!  I'm ready to read your next chapter!

I'm glad that you were able to get closure, and I hope you have a good night :)



Author's Response:

Thanks Lynnlin.  I slept more peacefully last night than I have in several nights.  Thanks for all the kind words and sympathy.

Chapter 13 is up.  I'm really nervous about this one.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

ROCK!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Let's just hope you think the same on chapter 13.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

I loved how Esme and Carlisle gave her the Cullen crest and phone. Very them!

Ooooh I am so excited! I cant wait, you arent going to make us wait long right? I am bouncing up and down in my seat. I love your Edward and Bella so much! :D



Author's Response:

I thought giving her a crest was like the ultimate way of saying she was a part of the family. 

Chapter 13 just posted.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

*laughs* Poor Edward always the center of his siblings teasing. Now I just hope that Bella won't freak and tell Edward to stay away when he tells her the WHOLE truth.



Author's Response:

Yeah.  Edward gets picked on.  I think he's actually enjoying it somewhat enjoying it now.  Thanks for reading.  Chapter 13 is posted.

Reviewer: kimberly128 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

Great chapter, but I'm worried about the next chapter. I hope Bella doesn't run. She didn't in the books.



Author's Response:

I can't say anything.  Just trust me, please.  I sincerely appreciate your reading.

Reviewer: Lourdes (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 06:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

great chapter!

and the night isn't over yet :)

 

 



Author's Response:

Nope.  It isn't.  I just hope you like chapter 13.  Thanks, Lourdes.

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

well this was great - loved the line about his mouth getting dry but his pants swelling (Very funny).

OK your notes are a bit scary - looks like poop is going to hit the perverbial fan! Yikes! Oh well...I trust there is a plan, but I suspect the reveal will not go as Eddie hopes! Too bad...this was such a positive fun story...but I will trust you!

I was thinking that when I read this story in particular that it is too bad real men don't act this way, being so caring loving and thoughtful - even when they are in love (Now don't beat me up! I just wonder sometimes how the stories would be written if they were written by men, instead of women! BUT this is our fantasy, right? SO onward and Upward!)

Waiting for the reveal (nervously!)

 

Nicely written btw!

 



Author's Response:

Well--I actually do know of a very few men who completely dote on their wives.  Mine treats me very well, but he's goofy like Emmett.  He keeps me laughing.

There is an author, Alexander McCall Smith, who writes a woman's POV pretty darn well.  I love his books, and they are a quick read.  He's my only non-fantasy author that I read right now, except for classic authors.  And the men he writes sort of dote on their wives.  It's interesting.

Sorry to make you nervous.  I'm nervous myself.  I can't say anymore until you all read it.  I'll get chapter 13 up today.  It's got a cliffie ending, so you've been warned.

Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

Wow! The next chapter's the big one, eh? I bet it'll be great, I know it! I love this chapter, Edward was just so funny. I love how human he is, it's like he's a normal teenage boy with his first girlfriend. Love it!

Author's Response:

That's exactly what I am going for.  He's a boy that happens to be a vampire and not the other way around.  I wanted that whole sweetness of first love.  Thanks Ciara!

Yep--the next chapter has a nasty cliffie ending.  Sorry--once an addict, always an addict--but I'm not apologizing--lol!

Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

OOOooooOOOOooo

UPDATE!



Author's Response:

Submitted 12 last night.

Reviewer: Laura Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Love this story and really loved Carlisle's gesture with the locket.



Author's Response:

Thanks Laura.

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

<3 Carlisle and the crest... ever so important.

I bet Edward is getting all worked up for nothing - Bella is going to love him, vampire and all.  And when she finds out that she's his singer, and that the most satisfying physical experience he can have with her right now would be to suck her blood, she'll respect him even more for protecting her instead.

Love it!!!



Author's Response:

I just hope that you all can trust where I am going with this.  Don't mean to make you nervous.  God knows I am.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: bellas shrink (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

This is great...she clearly knows something is up, and she loves him and isn't afraid of them...hopefully THIS Edward won't be a moron and leave her mid relationship! LOL



Author's Response:

Gosh!  I have so much of the story already written, so I can't say anything.  Sorry.  I'm glad that you like it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:53 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: demeterloves2 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Your story just gets better and better! And I love that Carlisle is giving Bella a crest! It's so sweet and perfect!

I can't wait for her Birthday and, of course, for the reveal! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.  I like the crest too!

Everyone is so excited about the reveal.  I'm so nervous now. 

Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Suggie01 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

I love this story!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Suggieo.  If you haven't done so yet, try my other stories.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Thank you for the update. I really enjoyed how Bella makes the family happier, the convulsive laughter during a board game, how they are all so excited about her birthday party .



Author's Response:

Thanks, Siamecho.  I'm trying to get everyone to see that she is a true part of the Cullen family--not just because they say so, but because she interacts with them. 

Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Wonderful chapter!  Love the tender moment between Edward/Bella and later with the thoughtful conversation between Carlisle/Edward.  Perfect way to conclude this chapter with Bella saying her ILU and question to Edward during her sleeptalking.  Can't wait for the next chapter :)



Author's Response:

You sited so many things that you liked.  That makes me so happy!  I'm thrilled that you like what I am doing.  Thanks for the kind words and for reading.  Try my other stories if you like this one.

Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

great chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Gah! Another great one. Can't wait for the party. How will she react? Will she be all boring and I hate it when people spend money on me crap or will she realize they all care about her? And, ugh, will she get a paper cut on the wrapping paper causing her future brother in law to try and take her head off? Ah! I'm nervous but excited all at the same time. :)

Obviously, she knows something's way off, even to the point that he might not be human, hence her "human moment" comment. But I'm sure she's not even remotely thinking vampire. I know I personally wouldn't. Because really, in SM's world, nothing that Edward does/says would make one think vampire unless you see him actually drinking blood.

Love how everyone is so affected by Bella's presence. And the Cullen crest? How friggin sweet is that. :)



Author's Response:

Since you are so sweet and one of my favorite authors (I loves yous), I'll spill one thing.  There is no paper cut.  There is no "Jasper moment".  That's all I'm saying on the subject.  I can't give any more details.

SM's vampires aren't traditional Stoker vamps.  Because of his novels, we have a "stereotype" of vampires.  That's what I like about the SM vamps.  She chose to break with tradition, forever changing the way we look at monsters.  Hers are 100% more alluring then the coffin-sleeping, blu-blu-bloodsuckers of Stoker.

Bella knows something is up, but I think she's waiting on him to tell her.  No matter what she's feeling at this point, she obiviously not feeling threatened. 

Thanks for the comments.

 

Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen

If that last chapter made me giddy, this one just made me a swooning mess!!  I love your Edward!  He is just... perfect.  His inner monologue is fantastic.  I just love it.

Reviewer: Lynnlin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Really good so far :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Lynnlin.

Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare

This chapter make me happy.  Seriously, I'm all giddy now.  LOVE IT!!!

Reviewer: lovely_penguin (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High

I am just adoring this story!  And so incredibly well written.  I'm enjoying catching up!

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