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Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Love the forest scene!!! I just can't wait for him to reveal all of it to her!
Author's Response: Thanks! They are going to talk, that's for sure.
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
YEAH!
can't wait for this family chat.
update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Thanks for reading. I'm reworking chapter 15, so it might be a while.
Reviewer: roadkill2105 (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
OH NO!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Ok I really love this story... I have like 26 others that I am reading right now but this one just takes the cake...
I find myself waiting and very happy when the next chapter is up. Thank you for wading through everything that is happening to you to please us... Whether you know it or not... it makes me feel special that you do this for us crack fiends. *smile*
Thank you!
Author's Response: My dear Wicked friend--this has been the greatest therapy for me. It has kept me from completely losing it and going to pieces. So I should be thanking you all for helping me through it by your sympathetic words of kindness and your sweet reviews. Thank you--all of you. I'm glad you read my story.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Terrific chapter! I really liked the "dramatic forest scene." A lot. It was kind of the reverse of Edward's staying away from Bella in Twilight and I loved how she offered herself to him, knowing he might want her for her blood, because she loves him so much. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I like to twist the story's elements a bit. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
Oh, I didn't expect that at all! I thought Bella was going to accept the news very calmly, and how did she find out, anyway? The rest of the chapter was so happy and lovely and romantic--I loved it. Can't wait for them to get this resolved!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
I loved this chapter. I usually love this story without any exceptions...except i'm a bit miffed about one thing: does the book about the "cold ones" tell bella about their supernatural hearing? because it looks like bella found that out, too.
please update soon!
Author's Response: The book has a list of attributes of "The Cold Ones". Their hearing is one of them. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Ireally liked the Cullens' gifts to Bella. I wonder that she doesn't seem a little more surprised to be so completed welcomed by the family--with Carlisle calling her his daughter, even. I'm biting my fingernails for the next chapter!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 05:12 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
YAY
I'm SO glad that he's going to let her in, and I'm so PROUD of Bella for opening up like that. Yay for them!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: loveroftwilight (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
much better :) update soon!
Author's Response: I'm going to completely reword chapter 15. I think I want to go a different direction. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Ok... you're forgiven for chapter 13, which-by the way- was fantastic. I actually love that Bella was freaked out. That would seem to be the rational response right?
Very well written. thanks for the back to back updates. DO IT AGAIN PLEASE!
Author's Response: Thanks. I thought it would be fun to let Bella be a normal human for once.
Chapter 15 is being completely reworked--as in basically gutted. After all the responses, I am seeing the story going in a different direction. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
GOOD! Finally! sigh....
Author's Response: Glad you are happy. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Re-Re (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
The forrest scene was great! It was very emotional and got me all choked up. When she told him to "kiss her or kill her" and pulled her hair over to the side, I lost it. Yeah, I know, I'm a big baby. LOL
So glad that everything is right again and they are going to talk. Can't wait to read more. And oh, that Mike Newton is such a tool. Just sayin.
Author's Response: You made my night, Re-Re! I'm glad it got you choked up! I cry at Disney movies sometimes, so I'm right there with you in the "big baby" department--lol! That was what I was going for. Glad it got you there.
Yeah, Mike's a jerk. Edward will get him back though--hehe! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: oneday (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks.
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
thank you for the update! I loved the 'dramatic forest scene'. I wonder if that scene will convince him she wants to be with him forever? She told him he could have her heart or her life after all.
Author's Response: The whole changing issue will be discussed later. I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for reading.
Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 02:58 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
You totally deserved the trust you asked for in the last chapter. Even though the first part of the chapter was filled with tension, it was good. Loved when Bella slapped Mike, lol. That poor boy really does end up being the punching bag for fan fiction though...I think he's usually slapped/punched/verbally abused more than anyone else in fics, lol...not that I mind. Then the dramatic forest scene as you called it was awesome. I don't care that it was dramatic...it was probably my favorite scene in this entire story so far. I could just see that scene playing out in my mind...awesome. Can't wait for more! Thanks for the super-quick updates as always!
Author's Response: Credit for the fast updates needs to be shared with my incredible beta, shabbyapple.
Mike is the punching bag of Twilight fanfic, isn't he? Poor guy. But in my story, he totally deserves it.
Glad you liked the forest scene. I could see it play out in my head too. I felt that scene. It was great to write. Thanks for reading, TJ!
Reviewer: caesiioculi27 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
I really liked the forest scene. Nowwe can get back to Edward and Bella being all romantical!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Miss Poison (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
GREAT chapter. Well done! =)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
I really liked it! I am so glad that she hates him as much as she does! LOL
I am really....REALLY surprised that your Edward was able to keep his hands odd Mike'es neck! I mean...the ass kissed her. Wow, see this Edward has some serious restraint! All the better for lovin! That was really corny HA...sorry!
Wendie
Author's Response: Who are you talking about Bella hating--Edward or Mike?
My Edward lets Bella handle herself a little more than the book Edward. I always thought it was odd how he wanted to give her a "normal human existence" and yet controlled so much of her life. So mine is a bit more human. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: guccisassy (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Phew! That was good! The forest scene was excellent. I have really enjoyed the whole story so far! Thank you!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: smisa (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
yeah!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
*tackles and squeezes you* Thank you thank you thank you. I'm so glad that their together again *smiles and sniffles* the dramatic forest scene was very New Moon-ish backwards-ish. It was great. I can't wait until Bella here's everything.
Fabulous!
Jace
Author's Response: Can't breathe--can't breathe! Whew! Thanks for the massive hug, Jace. I swear you're as strong as Emmett--lol! So glad that you liked it and that it made you deliriously happy. Thanks as always for reading.
Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:50 AM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
OH THANK GOD ALMIGHTY!
Author's Response: Glad to make you happy.
Reviewer: sweeteternity8 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
Great Chapter! She finally knows
Author's Response: Yes she does! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: sick_masochistic_lion (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
You really thought this one through didnt you? Well it is fabulous, really! although i dont like it when Bella and Edward are apart i think this was a reall good way to do it. Cuddos to you! You gave her time to have a normal human reaction for once in her life. i love it when they get together again, it makes me so happy. I cant wait to see what kind of questions Bella will ask him, ill be waiting anxiously
Great job!!!!!
Author's Response: I tried to make Bella a little more normal for once. I want her and Edward to be more like normal teens for once. Glad you like it. Thanks for reading, sml!
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