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Reviewer: everwondering (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I read this on another computer the other day, and I can't remember if I left a review for this chapter. So, this might be a duplicate. lol

Loved the Buffy comments. Ha. And Edward's naughty daydreams that apparently put Bella's comments to shame. Woohoo. :)

 



Author's Response:

You cheer me up, everwondering.  Thanks!

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

OK... so that was good dirty. I really like how subtle it is. It is SOOO IC for everyone involved.

I can't wait to see where the story goes...

BTW, I am glad we can help in some small way...

 

 

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:41 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I am going to say this once because I think you need to hear it. I know that I do when I am writing. This is YOUR story. You write it for you not for the readers. If you want angst (which by the way, is what makes a story exciting) then by all means, add the angst. Please don't let your readers change the direction you had originally planned. I love your story so far. You have done a great job making the Twilight characters your own. I like the angle this story has taken. To have Bella leave Edward was an interesting twist.

I just found this story the other day and I have been reading like a mad woman to get to this point. Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the words of wisdom.  Glad you are enjoying my story.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I love your story!  It's a different take on Twilight, and I like that it's not the same thing over and over.  Great job!  But I agree, please no more angst for a while.  They are supposed to be soulmates, please don't torture them too badly.  They just got back together!  Wonderful job on the sexy scenes, by the way!  Update soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks you and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: cindysark (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I like that he came clean to her about the whole soulmate thing. And I don't mind a little angst!



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: twilighterx33 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

you must update asap! i dont think i can go one much longer without knowing what happens to bella and edward

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: twilighterx33 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

gahhh this is ahhhmazinggggg. okayyy i absolutely adore your version of twilight. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks you.  I'm glad that you like my version of Twilight, but I don't understand why you only gave me two stars.  On Twilighted, 10 on the ratings means 5 stars, 9=4.5, etc.  I mean, give me what you want, but I just thought I'd let you know.  I know this because I didn't realize how the ratings worked and kept rating other authors' stories low.  It was all a misunderstanding.  Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Well thank goodness everything's out in the open. Oh wait, it's not is it?  One tiny thing still out there... yeah...

If we get to vote, I say go the direction YOU want to go.  It's your story and we've enjoyed it so far!



Author's Response:

Are you talking about the whole changing thing?  Just curious.  Thanks for the vote of confidence in me, Sheeijan.

Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Nice make-up chapter!  Now it's time for Cullens vs that-other-lunch-table (i.e. Mike, Lauren & Jessica).  Now THAT will be fun.  And I wonder what would happen if Lauren or Angela or someone noticed and commented on Bella's crest necklace?



Author's Response:

I'm sure they'll let that table have it eventually.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: wendy_beth (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I really like this story! I like how she gets ticked at him when she realizes it's him that ruined her first date! it made me laugh!



Author's Response:

Me too.  My Bella actually stands up to Edward a bit.  She's got more confidence.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: firemoon_dragon (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen

LOL...this chapter was awesome! you rock!!

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Loved the fluff and humor! And in my opinion angst is always welcome too...so long as it is properly resolved eventually! And props to shabbyapple...definitely one of the fastest betas I've ever seen.  You guys make a great duo!



Author's Response:

Thanks TJ.  Yeah--shabby's the best!  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: verlore (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

I'm in love with this story. 

 

The way that you've cultivated their relationship, their interactions,and Edward's internal dialogue is just wonderful.  You've written this story in such a way that it just makes sense, and in a whole lotta ways, I dig this more than Twilight.

 

Especially when Alice & the fam. continuously rein Edward in when he's got some terrible idea... I was always screaming at the pages of Twilight, like "Hey why doesn't someone stop him?!"

 

I'm so thrilled that you've shared it with us, please don't change a thing. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, verlore.

Now I'm even more perplexed.  I've got to sleep on this.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: itunesx221 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

i just read your chapter end notes and i think you shouldnt change anything about the story because of what people write in their comments, i mean this is your story and you should write it how you want

i LOVE this story and cant wait for the next chapters

PLZ DONT TAKE TO LONG LOL



Author's Response:

Thank you for your comment.  I really appreciate it.  And normally, I wouldn't change anything, but, I've been presented with a bit of a challenge.  How can I keep you all coming back for more without all the angst?

I decided against writing a lot of angst again because I'm finding out that is more original, and because it will be a great writing exercise for me.  I like the idea of them facing things together.  It's a bit of a different concept.

Thanks, itunesx.  I appreciate the vote of confidence.

Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 07:24 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I'm always ready for less angst... I'm so glad that Bella and Edward are finally talking all of this through.  I'm very interested in the conversation(s) that will inevitably come about her change.

Although, to be honest, if you get super angsty, I'll still stick with you - this is one of my favorites :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your "vote" about the angst issue. 

The subject of the change...hmmm...it's another curve ball that will bring about her transformation.

I'm reworking the next several chapters so that there will be less angst.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

LOVE this chapter.  I'm glad Edward was committed to being completely truthful with Bella about everything.  In so many other stories he tells half-truths in an attempt to protect her or himself.  So I'm glad in your story he was honest.  

As for angst, I don't mind it, but could it come in a form other than Edward and Bella separating?  That seems to be the way all other stories provide their angst, so it would be refreshing to have a story that has outside drama with Bella and Edward deciding to face it together.  That would be good angst.  But you're the writer, go with your instincts.



Author's Response:

That's the new plan--for them to face challenges together.  Thanks for the compliments and for telling me how you feel.  I appreciate the honesty.

Reviewer: dancingblondie (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

i wish 4 a pony! o and more chapters.



Author's Response:

Sorry--no pony, but I just put in Chapter 16.

Reviewer: FearlessNot (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Angst... whatever happened to "and they lived happily ever after."  Hasn't there been enough angst?

Very nice chapter.  Perfect for Valentines Day.



Author's Response:

Less angst it is!  Thanks for the comments, FearlessNot!

Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses

I think you should go with whatever your imagination tells you.  Obviously people are reading it and they like it.  I know I do...and it is your story.  I think there has been the right amount of fluff and angst to balance each other out so far.  Go with your gut...dont worry about us.  I think its safe to say a lot of us are sucked in whatever you decide.

Reviewer: dadaptl (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Great story!!! I am also for less angst at this point, maybe it would be too much since she already left him. I think that you are very good writer, looking forward for next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments.  Less angst is coming.  They'll have spats, but they are sticking together.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: k8ew8e (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

I like some angst to a story! Not too much but just enough to keep me happy! Loved the chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your vote, k8!

Reviewer: binki (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Please less angst.  I would love it to be just a great love story without so many problems to over come!  It is already a great story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your vote in the matter.  Reworking chapters for less angst as that seems to be the consensus.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: my1edward (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

This chapter was a lot of fun!  I like how you had Edward share so much information with Bella in such a most light-hearted way, and that she largely took it all so much in stride.  I also liked Edward's jealousy of Mike.  More generally, I really love this fic--and for me, less angst=good, but this is your fic, so you have to do what you think is best. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, my1edward.  I appreciate the comments and compliments.

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

so glad to see them back together



Author's Response:

Me too!

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty

Angsty is okay as long as its not them breaking up.  I really love the story. I think its an interesting twist.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, littlebit, and thanks for reading.

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