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Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 20: Snow Angel

I need to know what is going on..., what is evryone hiding from Edward?! I am trying to get some ideas..., but I can't realy think of anything!!!! Put out of my misery..., PLEASE!!!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 19: Road Trippin'

I love that you have Bella standing her ground!!!! She shouldn't lt Edward get away so easily! I am nervous on the issue looming...., hurry, I so curious!!!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

Loved it! Yes!  The speech was excellent!  I have to disagree and say that book Edward would call her "baby" in that situation.  I mean, he has his moments.  He did fist bumps with his brothers and such.  It totally fits in my world!

Beautiful character development as always!  I love how you have them learn from each other!

Wonderful job, Fangs! :D

 

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 18: Twenty-nine Steps

You did...,I'm so sad :(. How are they going to mend it this time....., too many times and you figure it is just going to happen again!! Stop the hurt!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Monster Within

No..., no your not going to...., Please don't do it!!!!

Reviewer: the shrew (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I love it, Fangs!  RL sucks for keeping me from your lovely story!  On spring break now, so I get to catch up!  Woo-hoo! 

They are sooo adorable together.  I cannot wait to read what you have planned for Lauren. 

It's a GREAT cliffhanger.  You write them SO well.  I think this is a great twist and "what if" scenario to study.

I think my fav part was Edward wanting to taste her again, so they work out a system that works for them.  Genius!  What can I say?  I am a dirty girl that LOVES their physical relationship as much as their emotional one! :D



Author's Response:

So good to hear from you, Ms. Shrew.  I thought school might be weighing you down.  Happy spring break!  Ours was week before last.  Glad that you like what I'm doing.  Can't wait to hear what you think about the next chapter.  Miss youz!

Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

Great chapter. Just excellent.

 

~Mia

Reviewer: TeamJasper13 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

I totally understood what you were doing with Bella not seeming too upset about the Charlie situation. Of course though I have to admit that I am excellent at distracting myself from unpleasant things and well if the girl's got Edward Cullen distracting her, who could blame her? Hornyward in the beginning was great! I love it when he gets all carried away by the teenage lusty side of himself. And then the family had to interrupt, lol. That phone conversation was too funny! The meeting with the wolves went how I hoped it would. Almost made me feel sorry for Jake. You did a good job of keeping him in cannon...his feelings from the book. Even his leap before you look attitude....him telling Charlie cause he thought it was the right thing made me think about when he ratted Bella out about the motorcycles in the book. The other wolves teasing Jake about his infatuation with Bella was cute. And Jealous Edward! MMMMMM!!! Love him being jealous and Jasper making fun of him and declaring it! And Charlie called her! YAY! So happy he called at least. That line about Edward thinking Renee would take Bella on Oprah if she found out was hilarious. It seems like certain things are started to wrap themselves up though so I was wondering how much longer you plan on the story being? Or will there be another twist that keeps us going even longer? Well, anyways....loved this chapter as always!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, TJ.  Always good to hear from you.

I'm glad that you understand where I'm going with this and you like it. 

As far as the length of the story, I don't know.  I've already had NM moment.  He's not leaving her again, and there will be no Reneesme in my story--ever.  So, I'm not sure what's going to go on with this.  I'm not sure I can, unless I retell the story from Bella's POV.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Jace Nox (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

That was an awesome chapter!! as usual.  Keep up the great work.  I can't wait to read more!!

Jace

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up

HAHAHAHA!!! I got a kick out of the Harry Potter refrences!!!!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth

YAY!!!!!! Oh, I find it is awesome that you include lines from the book and movie :).

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party

NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will not be content until the next chapter or whichever fixes this!!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen

SQUEAL!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance

Oh the anticipation!!!!! Your torturing me!!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits

more giggling!!! I still cannot wait for Edward to tell Bella what he is. I am nervous for her birthday though..., last time it wasn't so good :).

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In

I love the conversation between Edward, Jasper, and Emmett! To funny!!! It's great!!

Reviewer: ladybri (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet

Another good chapter!!! Of course Edward is protective over her!!!! I giggle to see the naughty side!!!

Reviewer: RomperStomper (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen

I'm sqeeing with delight over this chapter *sigh*

Reviewer: Stephanie Cullen (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

Yes that makes sense now with the whole class thing...you are doing a great job..can't wait for the next chpater..I wish I knew how to write because I have soooo many ideas floating thru my head..lol...review ya later!!

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:41 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

I'm glad Charlie is atleast talking to Bella. The meeting with the wolves was not exactly what I expected and Carlisle and Sam seem OOC.  I'm glad Jacob realizes what he has done...update soon

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:13 PM · On: Chapter 25: Telling

I can not believe Charlie asked her to leave thats insane.  Billy is a asshole & so are Sam.  Edward is being wishy washy again he keeps going from this moment forward we belong together then something happens and he starts with the regrets all over again.  I loved that Lauren got put in her place and I say let Rose kick her ass anyway



Author's Response:

Hi sapphire.  Firstly, Charlie didn't ask Bella to leave.  Carlisle suggested that they take Bella for a while to give Charlie a chance to digest the information.  He agreed.

Billy, Jake, and Sam thought that they were doing the right thing by telling Charlie.  They noticed that Bella looked different and felt that Charlie had a right to know what was going on.  It's sort of like an intervention.  If Bella had a drug problem and they knew about it, they would tell Charlie.  Problem is, they had no idea about the Volturi.

Edward was wishy-washy in the books too.  Now this time, he was blaming himself and thinking that if he never acted on Alice's vision, things would be better for both of them.  However, Bella shows him otherwise, thus calming him down.  He's just doing a bit of self-loathing.

I'm glad you like the whole "telling Lauren off" thing.  To me, she's long overdue for it.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: buckwheat (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

DRAMATIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: JAustenlover (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 26: The Meeting

Love your story! And the 'accidentally becoming a vampire' twist makes it even more interesting.

So glad Edward seems committed now...you had me worried earlier!

Great job with the characters - I love the Entire Cullen family now!

Interesting plot like too. Curious to see if she will be human at graduation.

One of my favorites! Thanks for the updates!



Author's Response:

Thanks JAl!  I'm glad that you like what I'm doing.  Thanks for the review and for reading. 

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful

I say send lauren on a all expense paid trip to Volutra...and what happened to the werewolves couldn't tell anybody anything...doesn't she still smell human and she has a heart beat



Author's Response:

Hey saphire!  Next chapter explains why the wolves said something.  They told because they noticed Bella had the inhuman beauty that the Cullens now possess.  She smells--well--kind a like a cross between herself and Edward.  The wolves would pick up the scent difference.  Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 23: Resolutions

I think the new year was brought in just right.  I love the Buffy marathon and I'm with the "kids"  Esme & Carlisle ewwww (as parental figures having sex)

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