Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 05:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Making Up
When they steamed up the windows it remined of that one scene from "Titanic",only things went a heck of a lot farther!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: TwilightDiva (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 25: Telling
IM KINDA OF CONFUSED ABOUT HTE INTAMICY SCENCE. IT WILL BE NICE IF YOU COULD EXPLAIN IT. HOWEVER VERY VERY VERY GOOD CHAPTER
Author's Response: You know, after reading it, I can see where you could be confused. They haven't done the official deed yet, if that helps. They did other things.
Reviewer: emabuell (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
I am so in love with this story! I CANT wait for more to come! I love the different spin you have put on this. Even though Edward loves her I love that he is more animalistic in this story! more true to his nature. Great Writing!!!
Cheers!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:01 AM · On: Chapter 15: Complete Honesty
Touchdown for Team Edward!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Chapter 14: Truth
OKAY NOW YOU SO ROCK HARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 13: Bella's Party
U SUCK!!!! U SUCK!!!!! U SUCK!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 12: Officially a Cullen
Well the night is young and who knows whats gonna happen.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 11: Acceptance
He need to tell her...ASAP
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 10: Testing Limits
I SO love this chapter!!!!!!!!! It so Yummy!!!!!!!!! I wonder if her reaction will be the same has it was in "Twilight".
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 9: Bella Moves In
i wonder whats in store for Edward now!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 8: Accident Magnet
I AM IN LOVE WITH WITH YOU AND THIS VERY AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 7: Making Out 101
Okay know this sucks!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Afterglow
That was so sweet & amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Chapter 5: Seventeen
I cant wait for future chapters of this friggin awesome Love Story!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Truth or Dare
THAT WAS SO HOTT!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 3: Thwarting Mike
lolw!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: New Arrival at Forks High
Bella proably would have turned Mike down because she was drawn to Edward to much.
Reviewer: SedutiveSwan13 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Glimpses
THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD!!!!!!!
Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Yes, you are a cruel and evil person; BUT I love ya anyway!!!!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
ooohhhhhh...... I always like the "Hmm... maybe I'll wait and see if I get a better offer" response followed by the pounce and 'yes' moment lol
Although with all the maybe/no/no/yes variations it'd be kind of nice to have a flat out "yes" for a change... depends on where your plot is going next I guess hehe
Looking forward to it :)
Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
No... you didn't just leave it there... I've been reading this for days... I love this. I love this different take on the whole story. And if my SO wasn't asleep across the room I think I would have screamed at the computer. LOL
This is great. I have been completely caught up in it from chapter 1 and didn't want it to end. Keep up the great work.
Reviewer: just me (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Awww, I love it. She has to say yes. It's just not right otherwise, she is already changing anyway!
Reviewer: TwilightDiva (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Don't Hate Me Because I'm Beautiful
WOW AMAZING. UR SUCH A GOOD WRITER CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT ONE
Reviewer: Mazzakenzie (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
Awwwwww! So sweet! She better say yes though! haha!
-Mazzy
Reviewer: twilightedme (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 27: A Bit Spoiled
this is so bella! this is a great story and you are killing me with the cliff hangers
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