AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH love it ! I love that there are more additions to the list ... edward taking bella against the door ... that would be one of mine too ... (*blush*) ... awaome work again ! I cant wait for the wedding *eeek* YAY and the honeymoon ! omg im getting myself all worked up!! lol cant wait :)

AHFUCKINGMAZING.

Thanks for the super long Chapter!!!  It was great!  I'm ready for their wedding night!!!!!!!! Can't wait, please write more chapters soon

LMAO! That was not only the very best kind of kink but it was EFFING HI-LARIOUS! That was down right awesome! I loved every minute of it. I hope he adds more to her list and I can't wait to see what gets crossed off next.

My favorite line: Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.'  Fucker.

Wooh! If I smoked, I'd need a cigarette!

Great chapter!!!! Lab table...mmmmmm.  :-)

Um, I almost lost it with your author note at the top... extra batteries? Erm, I don't want to know who is reading this fic with anything that might require extra batteries. HA HA HA HA
I have to say... Swearward or Curseward whatever... IS HOTT!!! Why do I have a such a thing for Edward with a potty mouthJ?

OH... and funniest fucking line in any fic ever...
Jacob would see and I would mouth ‘mine.' Fucker.

This chapter was epic lol! The lab table...honestly upside down....that was genious! I love how the more Bella and Edward explore eachother the more they become sure of theirselves, this story is everything that is missing, it make all of the indecisivness in Edward or Bella in the books have a purpose. I love it!

that was a great chapter. i love how BPOV eended with "pack me a cowboy hat."

that was pretty great. i love this story and i agree with edward in that it just keeps getting better and better as it goes along even though the begining rocked. 

lookin forward to the next update!

~rekcuf

i like the jacob 1. he deserves pain! MAUHAHAHAHAHA! more lke he should just hear her. cause its not the biggest punishment if he gets to see Bella naked.

This update totally made my day!  I loved Bella's reaction when she realized that Edward had found her list...and then Edward's list WOW!

That was H-O-T-T HOT!!!!! You are such a good writer to make these chapters so incredibly erotic, yet so tasteful. It's a gift, my dear! One I am thoroughly enjoying, savoring... YUM! *giggles*

I absolutely love the biology "oral examination". That was amazing. I totally wanted to be her... Neck ache or not! :D And Edward fantasizing was unbelievable. Whoo! *shiver* He is really getting into the making fantasy reality, ever since he found Bella's list. I think he should write his own List and have Bella "mistakenly" find it. Maybe it would cement for her the fact that he's loved and want her since the beginning. It would be a good confidence boost for her.

I also felt very touched about the parts were Bella interacts with her family and the ones where she speaks to all the Cullens. I think it truly cements her as a true part of the Cullen family. It enlightens on the connection, the relationship she has with them, each meaningful and unique. I think this is something that the books miss a little bit, and it was great. You also totally broke my heart when Bella had the thought that because no one had childhood memories, all the Cullens were excited to see her picture album. That just made me so sad, I never thought about it that way. The cons aren't usually stated in such small but meaninful instances. Good with the bad, they say. I truly like how you are delving into those little details that make the difference, and deepen the characters' personalities and bring out a 3D'd character.

All I can say is I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

You never cease to inspire me. Please keep writing, you're doing wonders for my marriage.

...holy shit.

damn.

did I mention damn?