" 'MINE." Fucker"

so hot

ah. freaking. mazing. i just spent approximately 4 hours sitting at my computer reading this fic. and i just realized, its not done yet! i can't wait for you to posttttt cause this story is without a doubt, hands down, THE best story i have ever read EVER. just thought i should say :)

bloody fantastic! could have been longer then aging for the sake of my health, maybe not...

oh my god!

i recently got into an accident and basically fractured one of my rib bones.

this means endless hours confined indoors with nothing to do. this is my very first time reading a fic on this website and when i read the part 'gotta love those removable showerheads' i doubled up in laughter.

which is not such a good idea to do if A) you're sitting at a desk, because your forehead would smack the table  resulting in a mild concussion and B) laughing is not advisable with a fractured rib

suffice to say i was laughing my head off and crying tears of pain at the same time. but ive never been more amused in my entire life.

thank you for that...really!amazing writing babe!

That was cute! Must. Read. More.

That last sentence, "Forever could never be long enough", reminded me of a song by one of my favorite bands that you've never heard of, Hawk Nelson, they have a song called "Is Forever Enough?" and I think it fits, but I don't remember all the lyrics, so it might only be to an extent. Anyway, that was so cute! Time hates me, it's 1 in the morning, I'm gonna go to bed now, this is amazing, it dazzles me frequently actually...

AAAHHHH! That was, well, perfect. OMG, I also definetly love dirty Edward... I look forward to the rest of this story...

AAAHHHH! Hot, not as hot as the last chapter, but hot. When you mentioned the tat I automatically thought her ankle, or maybe shoulder-blade? Anyway, it was hot, great job

Thank you.  I am so happy you will continue this beyond the wedding.  I have learned so much from your writing and am looking forward to passing it all along to some lucky man.  I am concerned, however, about how you will address the actual act of intercourse.  If it as special and intense as Jasper has explained, I cannot imagine how Edward can handle it without killing her.  I had great trouble with your description of mouth fucking ... she was simply too vulnerable to survive it.  But I'm happy she did.  Please post another update soon.  You are gifted.

hahahahahahaha!!! way to go Em!!!!

Oh wow, that was hot! I love it!

Have not stopped reading this since I found it last night.  Good job!  Wish I had better words to describe it.

I am skipping back through this again, rereading favorite parts.  Wonderfully erotic writing.  What I am most struck by, again, is the way in which you portray Edward and Bella's sexual exploration as a path to increasing their love, their understanding of each other.  It's very moving and a very positve view of sexuality.  I remember Edward comment in an early chapter -- Bella is healing him, making him whole.  Great job.