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Reviews For The List
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward

As much as I want the list to be done, really crossing something off every chapter leaves nothing for us to want...sorta....lol....

Oh he stole her panties! He told himself he wanted them....LOL.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Damn she is a vixen! WTG Bella! Crossing things off the list like a wild woman!!!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

OMFG Bella would DIE if she knew Jasper or ANYONE other than Edward had seen her panties.........but DAMN what a brilliant move on her part!

HOLY HALE Alice is a devious and brilliant woman! Blue panties of her own! SMEXY!!!!

 

 

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

The present she left for him.....GENIUS!!!! The list....getting to a higher level of AWESOMENESS!!!

Also...why do I have this feeling he will find the list? I mean...sitting in between the mattresses? Why do I get that princess and the pea feeling? LOL. Hmmm...I'm not saying it's a bad thing...just sayin'.

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

DAYUM!!! Who knew?!? Always thought Alice was a cockblocker...LOL....

Reviewer: bite_me180 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

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Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Alice saves the day!!!! LOLOL. Sweeet! Nice beginning to "The List"!!

Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Finally a release!!! Damn! She was so sexually frustrated I almost needed a release! LMAO!! NICE!!!

Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II

Aww, that's a sweet ending there.

Reviewer: sweet_mama77 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control

"Laura, there are no words..."  but here are a few anyway:  unbelievably steamy, hot, erotic, sexy, and-- my personal favorite-- inspiring!!


Thank you for writing!    :)

Reviewer: Martinibaby1 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

i have seen this fic for awhile now but didn't have the time to start reading it. I'm definitely captured by the way you write -you incorporate a lot of humor in your fic and I like that- and i'm going to read the next chapters as soon as my real life has settled down a little. great idea btw, because honestly, Breaking Down missed some serious hotness and NC-17 stuff! Thanks for providing it. Stars to please Bella during the night.

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

I love a good Jealous Edward!  And the car scene..... ;-)

Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I

Again, not grossed out by the blood.  In fact, I found myself hoping he'd just go for it!  Nice reveal on that tattoo, and I loved Edward's reaction to it.

Shower wank at the end was guuhhhhh.....

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward

Of course not....naked edward in the shower was enough!

Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

When is she going to give him the blood?!?!

i started reading this three days ago, nonstop, and i'm caught up.

damn it!!!!!

well i guess that's when i get for locking myself in my room, glued to my computer. time to see daylight again. haha.

please wright more soon!!!

and poor Rennesme.. the condom beat her out of the pictureee...

and Samantha.. psh...

Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

When is she going to give him the blood?!?!

i started reading this three days ago, nonstop, and i'm caught up.

damn it!!!!!

well i guess that's when i get for locking myself in my room, glued to my computer. time to see daylight again. haha.

please wright more soon!!!

and poor Rennesme.. the condom beat her out of the pictureee...

and Samantha.. psh...

Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans

Loved the male bonding session, and Emmett cracked me up with the 'Edward's gonna get some.'  I thought for a second there we'd get an EPOV of the phone sex, but it's probably for the best that we didn't; I'm not sure I'd survive!

Looking forward to reading the rest of the weekend.  I don't know what I'm going to do when I finally catch up to this story!

Reviewer: daniellemariecullen (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding

WOW!!!!! THAT WAS AMAZING!!! BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!! :)

Reviewer: RazzleA (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: 5, 4, 3, 2, 1

YES NUMBER EIGHT!!!!!!

Reviewer: BaseballGirl (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

OMG, I am absolutely stunned.  I know I should be grossed out by the period blood, but the mental image of Edward there, losing himself completely is just about the hottest thing I've ever seen.  And then add to that the things he said, blurted out so desperately...  The only possible way that little bit could have been any hotter is if it were in EPOV.

I like Bella "banking" some of her blood to give to Edward.  And I like the possibility of Bella being able to be there while he drinks it, but I'm wondering if she'll have the restraint as a newborn not to go for it herself.  Or will Edward share in a big blood orgy?  I'm usually not that dark/Goth, but I've got to admit, that's kind of hot.

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 06:32 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

Number 10 was hot...I can't wait for number 9 though!

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

I love JPOV!  I hope there's more!

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

I love devious bella & alice!  They are a fun pair.  Edward doesn't stand a chance.

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

Wow.  Just wow!  Tree=hot! 

Reviewer: JaspersBrand (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Sneaky alice!  Love her.  I can't wait to see how Edward reacts to the list!

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