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Reviewer: purplespiderscalling (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
all I can say is I love you.
(:
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
The cowgirl outfit was sexier in my head than the picture showed, so I'm going to keep mine. : )
Reviewer: vampirebyheart (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
LOVE IT!!!!!!
UPDATE FAST
Reviewer: well thats me (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
your a legend i love this story! hey is it finished or not?
Reviewer: gentlereader (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Yum!
Reviewer: plinky108 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
love this story i was starting to worrie that you might just stop updating i have a question though there isn't any kids in this story right cuz i read it cuz it's mostly light hearted sex a kid will be a total downer
Reviewer: hotmama (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:39 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Great chapter. Loved your description of the feather pillow - Bella's delight in the feathers and Edward's ability to embrace what they are able to do instead of spiraling into self-loathing was wonderful. Also loved the cowgirl scene!
Reviewer: modernmyth (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
wow, i was so caught up in the plot that i didn't see the authors note coming!!!!
somehow the ending sounds... like a real end... is this a matter of fact or just wrong interpretetion?
Reviewer: irishwitch (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Completely yummy. Sexy and sweet. Loved it.
Reviewer: twilightfan1969 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
GREAT chapter!
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This was Awesome!!!
Reviewer: nannagud (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
hahaha the cowgirl costume is hilarious! I love love love their honeymoon! Cant wait till she's changed and they can have rough crazy sex!
Reviewer: Andilea (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
What a wonderful honeymoon. I wish mine would have been that magical.
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
wow!! sos so great.... i hope you wont and the list so soon! damn ur a good writer!!! hahah
Reviewer: tj33 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
This chapter was just fanfreakingtastic!! I love how Edward was able to let go just a little more with the passing of the days and his fantasy was so sweet.
Reviewer: spanglemaker (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I'm sure you have the ending figured out already, and this would seriously depart from the actual story line, but I sort of wish in the end he would actually lose control and bite her, and that would be what changed her. Because isn't that the ultimate vampire sex fantasy anyway?
Great chapter. You're awesome at this stuff!
Reviewer: jumpandrun (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Fanfuckingtastic. Made my damn day, bb.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Now that is a honeymoon! I am glad that you put in the whole biting thing that Edward had to do in order to keep himself in check. It makes it better IMO because there's still a limitation and that not only makes sense, but there's something to look forward to after Bella's change.
I can't believe Bella had the nerve to go through with the cowgirl outfit. My mind boggled. Of course Edward clearly needs to reciprocate.
Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Only 19 times in 18 days? I'm no vampire but my honeymoon consisted of a LOT more times than that in a lot fewer days!
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:20 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
woo hoo!! Great update!!
Reviewer: fadingembers (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
I love how this chapter started off with Edward as excited as a puppy dog. "Hooray! I'm married! Can be sex tiems nao again?" Great chapter.
Reviewer: fruitcakegirl (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Oh My God! That was so freakin' hot! I was just thinking this morning that I should go back and reread this story and then u post this. Guh!
Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
LOL I liked the house, think Rosalie would mind if i took emmett there for 18 days? Ok so this chapter was...wow..it's the only words I could find.
Reviewer: edwardandbellaforever (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
wow! i mean seriously wow! Loved it, Edward losing more of his control was the best bit! And that photo at the end, phew! Can't wait for that reunion scene in NM, i'll cry cos from the looks of it, it seems perfect... the hug, the kiss... gah, why can't it be November already... make sure you watch the MTV movie awards cos the 1st clip from NM is being shown (i think it may be tonight in America cos its on tomorrow over here in the UK... unless its on at the same time over in the US and UK, i just thought i read somewhere that it was on tonight in the US)
Really loved this chapter... never want this story to end! Damn girl you continue to amaze me!
Reviewer: AwesomeSauce76 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2009 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
Wonderful new chapter!!
Don't feel bad about needing time to update. I have an even worse reason. I always write in private, I HATE hubby knowing what I'm writing because I do not want him reading. And he's been home so often lately, no time to write! Makes me cranky! So you being sick & still writing other things, and then still updating in under 3 weeks is amazing!
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