*gloriously contented sigh* This was, in no less words, an amazingly enticing work of art. The intensity of it all...=J While I desperately yearned for, well, what you know all of us readers were inching closer to our computer screens to read, didn't happen as I had imagined, I deeply admire and respect how things did turn out. I know it must have taken a bit of restraint (something many have been practicing, in this chapter especially), I do recognize that, no matter how much I wanted it, Edward's discipline and caution were very true to his character, and he just wouldn't be himself if he allowed himself to let himself go and dig in (pardon the phrase, unintentional) to his desires. And afterwards: "wrenched open the shower door, cracking the glass around the door handle"--a perfect description for the utter rawness and urgency of the moment. Once again, I am left in awe after reading another selection of your work.

And because I do really, really wish for you to be on the top reviewed list, I've decided to review at the end of each chapter when I read it, no matter how much I might want to press the "Next" link to keep reading more and more!!! ^_^

I enjoyed this chapter so much. For some reason I always love reading about Bella getting to be a true member of the Cullen's family in their house.... if that makes since. The ending of this chapter made me a little sad. But I suppose that is understandable because that is how Bella was most likely feeling. She is moving onto her forever, but leaving other things she loves behind.

I cannot wait to read the next chapters. I hope there are 4 more chapters instead of 2. I know that sounds selfish, but i love your story so much. I can't wait to read your view of Bella's change.... and after... her first hunt... and her gift of her blood. So many good parts left to read about! 

Thanks so much for writing,

Sarah

so much... can't wait....

 

more please!!!

WOW!!! Simply LOVE this! Love how he brings up "his list" when he's trying to distract her a bit or get what he wants! Fantastic update!

amazing and wonderful as always...oh sorry stupendous :)

I am gonna miss this story when is over :(

Great update.  I love this story! 

EEEE! I was so happy to see a new update from you. Made my day.

I loved Bella's goodbye with her dad and Jake. Very sweet. So very bittersweet. It's almost heartbreaking because you're able to feel her torn state. On one hand you want her to be with Edward because he is her forever but on the other hand you want her to stay human and experience life with her loved ones. It's truly heartwrenching and probably one of the reasons why I love the series so.

The emotions are real and raw and you capture everything with such grace and beauty.

Thank you for the update and for every update you've given us.

Love the dynamics you create and just simply love your words.

Cannot wait for what's to come.

~ Much admiration and respect

Loved the chapter...can't wait for Bella to be turned...I am really looking forward to her giving Edward her blood...should be a fun, fun chapter!!

What part of Iowa are you going to be in?  I live in Iowa...hope you have fun...it has been really, really hot the last few days!!!

HOLY HALE!!! I read this not too many minutes after you posted it but was unable to review through my phone...now with the next chapter posted I remembered I needed to review and decided, I should read again. DAMN!!!! So freaking HOTT!!!! I can't wait to jump into the next chapter!

So Good!  I love "bad vampire".

oh i so want more it is not fair i love this story can't wait for it to be complete so i can read it from that start again in one whole piece

 

Love your work

GOOD JOB! Totally worth the wait. I can't wait to see what happens in Alaska!!!