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Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

I cannot even tell you how hard I've been laughing while reading this.  And I'm supposed to work tomorrow, but I cannot stop reading this!  LOL

Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

Oh dear...I CANNOT BELIEVE SHE LEFT HER UNDERWEAR FOR HIM!!!

I seriously cannot stop giggling like an idiot.

Reviewer: Abbabble (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I love Bella's "waiting room" book for Edward. So sweet.  Do we get to see Edward's list?

Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice

It was awful...I was equal parts turned the fuck on and equal parts laughing my ass off.  LOL

Very nice. :)

Reviewer: Cullendriver (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

HURRY, HURRY....can't wait....wonderful, wonderful!

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

A...wet...Edward...wait, what am I doing again...

Reviewer: Illyria (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I LOVE you. Thanks so much for writing this story, I love every bit of it and am looking forward to much more! ^_^  Please keep writing!

~E~

Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Love the notebook!!!  Just about literally lmao at the two hours of his list writing!!!  :D   Love what you did with Jasper.  I always wondered why E didn't know she was suffering in silence by reading Jasper---even with the intense focus he had on her.  Can hardly wait to see what you have happen when she wakes!  Loved how tender, poigiant and touching the chapter was.  It really made E grow.  Nice!!!

As always, thanks for sharing your fabs story and talent with us!!!

Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

Oh dear.  Poor Edward.  See, she just needs to rub one out for herself while he's there....and that'll really get him goin!  LOL

Reviewer: JazzHands (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Just to let you know, I save your new chapters for days when I feel down in the dumps. I get so captivated and wisked away I feel like a different person when I'm done reading. I hope its not too much pressure, but your writing rivals the great Mrs. M. It also is the only au I've read that is better thought out and has less plot holes than the original story. Excellent chapter, cant wait for the next.

Reviewer: kaghanyou (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

O.O poor Edward, Bella is such a tease!

Reviewer: Cullendriver (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change

Holy Mother of Rob!  What an f*ing great chapter!  I love all the details, all the emotions, everything!  Next chapter PLEASE!

Reviewer: revrag (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

This is the first story I've read over here...I'm always on FF...but I must say...I LOVE THIS!  LOL

I'm looking forward to the rest of your story. :)

Reviewer: luxa (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

that book was pure genius of bella. perfect way to distract edward from wallowing in guilt and self pity. but now bella's waking up too early. what about the rest of the book? reading it after she wakes up just won't be the same. poor jasper's hurting so much though!  can''t wait to see what your newborn bella is like:)

Reviewer: hotedward (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

wow ur amazing writer..i keep on reading all the chapters wahehhe:D

 

i cant wait for ur nex chapter..with love..tnx

Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III

Fuck Laura.  It's been AGES since I've caught up with this story.  AGES!  And I almost forgot how unbelievably erotic and just fucking... FUCKHOT your writing is.

I don't know if I can handle more than a couple chapters at a time without COMBUSTING.

 

Damn.  There are very few people on here that can write lemons as you do.  VERY FEW.

And not just LEMONS, but completely AWESOME storytelling.  FUCK! I forgot how much I fucking LOVE this story!

Reviewer: A-Style (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Ahhh! What happens?! Boo to this cliffhanger! [I can't decide if I like this one or last chapter's less.]

On a completely unrelated note, I want Edward's list! It'd better be all kinds of long, too - since you wrote it that way, but more to make up for those cliffies =P

Reviewer: Lilpxidst (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

I'm reviewing again, why? because I  came back to read it for the second time & I missed something I wanted to tell you...Jasper!!!!! How could SM miss the obvious...Jasper would feel that Bella was in pain during the transformation? I missed it too, but you didn't let that slip by. You are BRILLIANT,  you don't miss a beat. I have decided that once you've finished this incredibly wonderful story, I will reread it all the way thru...It deserves that! I love it, did I tell you I love it? I Do!

Reviewer: 80sChick00 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Awesome chapter.  Bella's letters were sweet, funny, & sexy - great idea.  I also liked how Jasper helped keep her calm during the change; I never thought of that possiblity.

Can't decide what I am more excited to read about: Bella's transformtion...or Edward's list.  Okay, truthfully, I am DYING to read Edward's list!!  Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: passionmama (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Beautifully written!!! The expression of love had me in tears. Looking forward to her waking up.

Reviewer: baileygirl (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

WOW. I loved it. I loved the details like the stories she wrote for Edward to read. I loved how all the family was there throughout the whole ordeal.  I loved that Jasper took on so much for her. It was just an absoute excellent chapter. I'm in awe.  I think this has been my favorite chapter so far. And that's saying a lot because I'm a total smut whore. heh heh heh ;p

Reviewer: angel1babe86 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

so conflicted in whether i should love you or despise you for cutting it off there. lol... What am I kidding.... it's always love. You are amazing!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

So extremely well done, Laura.  SM can only dream of being half the writer you actually are.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR DUMPING THE STUPID GOWN!

I don't feel strongly about that or anything. ;)

Reviewer: Marijee (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

Edward was ready to start beating himself up for what he did, thank the gods that Jasper was there to straighten him out. Love Jasper!! He stayed to help Bella even though her pain was draining him emotionally. Love his selflessness throughout her transformation.

“I brushed my hand over the cover reverently, replaying with perfectly clarity the memory of the moment she gave it to me - the way she looked and smelled and sounded and felt.”
Oh and the book that Bella wrote for Edward. She knew so well what he would be going through and is easing his pain and anxiety. Bella makes Edward laugh and love her even more!

"I'm holding you to these words, Bella. Do you hear me? Come back to me just as soon as you can, my love. And I'll be yours forever too."

“‘Midnight will never come'. And she was right, because she was my midnight sun - no matter what, she would always light up the darkness for me.” So lovely how you expressed this!! The Volvo; Cinderella’s magic carriage, Edward Prince Charming. So sweet!!

The Book is so ingenious and it helps Edward so much! Love Bella demanding he write down all the places he wants to visit, books, movies…she keeps him busy and amused. Loved her thoughts on his hair, and his hands, and her hands would be more sensitive to feel his hair. Her comments on her new family and friends. He needs to write his “LIST” oh and he writes and writes!!! LOL

“I'm okay and I love you.” the constant assurance from Bella.

So brilliant how you did this!! Can’t tell you how moved I am by the Book and how it you had it flow through Bella’s transformation. I think this was one of your best chapters!! Thank you for writing!

Reviewer: ldybug1701 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change

That was such a moving chapter.  I am crying.  Bella knows just what to say to Edward.  I was surprized he broke down and wrote his list in the book she wrote.

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