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Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
LOL Emmett!!!
Reviewer: cindyc (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
100
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
A wet Edward definitely deserves a review! Yum.
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I'm trying the theory of reviewing whenever anything particularly gets me in a chapter, seeing as I've only just started this story, and I LOVE the image of Bella's knickers sitting waiting for Edward on his bed! Lol
Reviewer: RiaMaria (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Gotta love Alice!
Reviewer: Loreli DeLovely (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 03:26 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
you effing rock. I don't really have to words to say how much I loved this story, it was dirty and ranuchy and lovely and reverent and just effing amazing. ....and you inspired me in my own writting (I write original fiction as well on fictionpress.com) but you also inpsired me in my marriage of 15 years. My husband unknowingly owes you a big fat thanks. I wish you much sucess with your original works and look forward to reading ANYTHING you write.
I had totally forgotten about Bella's gift, and actually squealed out loud when I realized what was about to happen!
Reviewer: sweetmarie (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2009 02:10 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
wow
Reviewer: JadeRain (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:48 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
OMG This Book Fricked Rocked I loved It I will read it over and over it will be in my favs thank u for writing
Reviewer: selysia (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:44 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
Oh, I'm so sorry it's over! What a wonderful way to end the journey... chapter 25 made me weepy and chapter 26 made me hungry for more.
Looking forward to the epilogue you mentioned, and thanks again for sharing your work - you're a truly talented author.
Reviewer: JBelle (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Such a great story. I love it.
Reviewer: Cynthiam (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
I'm so bad about reading all these stories and never writing reviews, but I just had to let you know that the end of this chapter made me cry! Absolutely so tender and beautiful. What tugs at my heart is that I don't feel like Stephenie Meyer's Edward every really made peace with changing Bella and you've made the ultimate act of love in your story and even though he still had concerns, he recognized what she needed and wanted and respected her wishes enough to do it the way she wanted and make it something incredibly tender. I'm reading this story for the second time and it's because of this chapter and the next one. The binder for Edward to read was brilliant!
Reviewer: esmesheart (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I wanted to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. it made me fall in love with Edward all over again and in a million diffrent ways. I laughed and cried and just felt happy when I read your story. i even emialed each chapter to my friends so they could read it!!! It was excellent from start to finish!! And the sex!!! Holy mother it was awesome. The balcony scene at the Aerie was excellent!! Edward in leather and the bar stool!!!! and the spanking!!! LOVED IT ALL!! But my favorite part had to be when Bella made Edward say "motherfucker"!!! CLASSIC!!!! I will never say or hear that word the same again!!! And how you kept the sweet, loving moments between Edward and Bella...I was speechless half the time!! The IPOD with her heartbeat!!! The diary for him to read while she changed. And the way he dropped to his knees before the table that held her blood in the goblet..just the raw emotion of it all!! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU. Please write another story!! PLEASE!!
Reviewer: sweetmarie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
wow that chapter left my mouth wide open lol
Reviewer: Genevieve Blanc (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:59 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Well you have done an awesome job. I will look for you in Barnes and Noble girl! I have to say being a happy ending type girl, so Christmas night was my favorite. But with your story it was so hard to actually have a favorite section. I will now have to go back and re-read your entire story. Good luck and by all means write the Edward list I'll be waiting..............
Reviewer: sweetmarie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
edward in the shower was hot loved it lol
Reviewer: Strangie (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 01:14 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Outstanding! Absolutely bloody outstanding!
I was supposed to be working from home today but instead of doing my work, I spent all day reading this. It was fantastic!!! (and I may get fired).
I hadn't been going to read it because I thought from the story description, that it was just going to be a vague plot as an excuse for a bit of Twiporn. Boy, was I wrong... well, not about the Twiporn clearly, loads of it (yay) but the story itself was excellent. I didn't want it to end.
Well done! I'm a fan.
Elaine
Reviewer: RPSpellbound (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 12:44 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
This has been an amazing read from start to finish for me. Just wanted to tell you how much I've enjoyed it. The thing I liked the best was you were able to keep so closely to the true (sm) voices/personalities of Edward & Bella, while still exploring their sexuality. I never doubted while reading it that it could be them doing those things or acting that way, the way I have felt sometimes when reading other stories. I especially loved the way you handled Bella's change & afterward. I was brought to tears several times reading the Epilogue...even now still wiping them...One part that really got me was the Cullen crest gift & photos of Charlie. The other parts, Edward drinking Bella's blood...that was so bittersweet. It was something he had never even considered possible, which made it even better. I've read this story very slowly, cause I'm also reading about 25 other stories (very slowly, lol) so now I'm actually thinking of going back and reading it all at once. Good luck with your novel! I'm sure you will be successful, your writing skills are very evident at first glance and will be to any publisher I'm sure. And I hope you still have time for that sequel...I'll be waiting!
Reviewer: jtorres235 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:11 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Outstanding! Love it! so many emotion I cant even describe it =)
Reviewer: Janners (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 02:04 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Dare I say it??? Much more satisfying that Breaking Dawn! Thank you for this story!!
Reviewer: EM2119 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Yeah, normally I am one of those who read all the chapters and review at the last one, but since you've asked so nicely I'll review right here and now =)
I like it so far. The fantasies made me laugh and I'm kinda curious if Edwards gonna find out she did that. I'm going to keep reading for sure!
Reviewer: Kiewie (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
"You are in so much trouble, Bella Cullen." I chuckled at her and she gasped.
I didn't even noticed he said Cullen!! It's fantastic :D
Reviewer: Kiewie (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I can totaly understand her.. and the thing in the shower realy works :$ ;)
Reviewer: babygal1 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
i cant believe this is over...nooo!!!i've been on this like my life depends on it.Edward umm ummm ummm...lol!!!WOW.you're really talented Laura,good luck!!please please write the sequel.really lookin forward to that.xoxo
Reviewer: cindyc (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
wow! 50
Reviewer: blb1000 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
THANK YOU Laura! I just found The List and devoured it within one 12 hour stretch. Simply intoxicating.
This is the way I wanted Edward & Bella's story to end (or not end). I love the way you developeed the characters more fully by showing us more of their "human" desires. Thank you for leaving out the half-breed baby and other plot ploints that were not satisfying.
If you have not already written & posted Edward's List, I look forward to it with anticipated pleasure. Beth (Medford, Oregon)
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