you do a wonderful job of bringing edward and bella to life. i couldn't be happier to share a passion for twilight with such a wonderful storyteller. thank you for sharing.

Wow, Bella rescuing Edward really literally brought a tear to my eye. That was so romantic. I am pretty new to the world of twilight fan-fic, and it has been so exciting for me to find this and other well written twilight fics. It sort of alleviates that pang you feel as you read, "the end" at the end of breaking dawn. Plus, it's nice to not have to imagine the naughty bits all by myself. Thank you!!!

I haven't been reviewing, b/c all I could really say is wow, that really turns me on, which seems a bit akward.... but I did want to say good job not screwing up your puncuation/spelling/grammar constantly. I honestly appreciate it, it's very distracting when people do that.

Maybe I have been reading too many nc-17 fics, but I haven't found the characters to be too terribly ooc. I think it's safe to assume that 4 weeks before the wedding there would would be some serious tension, even if it is between the lines in the actual books:) I am seriously enjoying this story:) I must admit it would suck to have no privacy with those meddling vampires around, but I guess Edward would be worth it;)

i mean, seriously...wow. 

It must be really hard to have some privacy in the Cullen's house. I don't see how they could live with each other, but then again its human nature. We all have needs. Bella is really stepping her game up. I was shocked that she had actually left her panties on his bed. Lol @ Jasper seeking out what the smell was.

I must say that this story has me hooked! it took me two days to read it and I hardly slept at all, just because I wanted to read more! :-D but I don't mind, i slept at work :-D Your story is one of the best i have read on this site and it is my first that I have favourited. You are an amazing and talented writer and I look forward to reading some more of your work. I love the way that you kept me wanting to read more and the way you wrote sometimes made me think that Stephanie Meyer herself had written it, or that you had written Twilight ;-p

Keep up the great work! You're one of the best authors who's work i've read

Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  Oh how I wish I had written Twilight! (Don't we all???  If for no other reason than we'd get to meet Rob in person...really, keep the money, just so long as I'd get to meet Rob....) ;)

Laura - I just wanted to say how wonderful your stories are, they're so much more creative, detailed and well thought-through than any other fanfic i've found.  Thank you so much for writing these!! x

All I can say is WOW!   Glad to see you went to Iowa for the workshop. Good luck on your novel!  Just from reading this it's easy to see your talent.  I loved it.  The way you used POV without going over every scene twice was exceptional.  Thank you! 

this is a brilliant story you have to turn it into a book . it will become a big seller.

I loved her recording her heartbeat most of all. That was a stroke of tender brilliance on your part!

I loved that Edward just called Jake 'fucker' !! ROFLMAO

I've held off making comments to every chapter because I just want to keep reading (!) but I have to say:

YES, MR CULLEN!!

OMFG!!!   I'm lost for words...

The dance floor, thank god Bella didn't become clumsy with those high heels :)

The rest stop...Edward finally letting himself totally go and enjoy every sexy part of Bella...excuse me but I have to go and change now.

Love it!!!