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Reviewer: kronky (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
I've been liking this story so far. It's a bit smutty for my taste but good. I was sort of turned off by the whole Dr. Cullen and officer fantasies, though. All I could think about was Carlise and Charlie because their careers are based in these professions. Maybe, my head is in the gutter but I thought it was werid that Bella would get so excited about Edward playing the roles that her father figures are in for a sexual fantasy.
Reviewer: jacoblover101 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
that was so sweet the last part i really liked it
Reviewer: Satteliteheart (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
lmao--love this story so far--too funny-- bella with a power shower--classic. cant wait to get stuck into the next few chapters!! :D
Reviewer: PippiLongstocking (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I like what I've read so far - you've got Bella's voice down well.
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:53 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
That was pretty cool with the sun situation.
Reviewer: SpankCarrot (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I've heard nothing but good things about this fic, so I decided to read it :) Actually, The List is the only reason why I even made a Twilighted account lol. And I've got to say, it's pretty good so far :D
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I loved the fact that music brought them up closer, who knew playing the piano together could be so beautiful.
As a pianist myself, I'll guess I have to try it.
Reviewer: eternally addicted (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
better get to amking that list just a bit longer. lol
Reviewer: eternally addicted (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Giggling at ALice's timing. Wonder if she saw soemthing happeneing that she felt she needed to interrupt?
Reviewer: justtwilight (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 26: Alive and Awake
thank you so much for the awesome time i have had reading this whole story it was fantastic !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: eternally addicted (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hmm Bella has discovered the removable shower head. Wonder what she will come up with next. I'm off to read some more and see.
Reviewer: SayWhaV (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Soooo she wants him to drink her blood and thats...erotic? Bellas one crazy 'itch.hahahah
Reviewer: SayWhaV (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
dayum!! Glad I have come outta the hidding space under my rock. I am new to ff and I heard the Twigasm girls talk about the story. *squee* bring it on!
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wow.... he knew Bella could be like that. This is preety good.
Reviewer: Mashknight (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Jajajaja.... poor Bella having Alice knowing everything.
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Stupid stupid Bella....I would never have accepted that dare!! Would have been impossible especially after the "sexcapades" they've been playing out. Poor Edward...his control has GOT to break....
Would it be overwhelming to suggest that this particular story never end? hehe
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
*giggle* Edward - phone sex! *giggles again* I am trying to picture SM's Edward doing this and it makes me...you guessed it *giggle*. I really like your Edward!!!
Another great chapter!
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
I love how you switch back and forth from their different POV's. As I'am reading Bella's, I am wondering what is going through Edward's head...and you always answer that. Fan-freakin-tastic!
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OH. MY. GAWD. HAWT!!! WOW girl, you can write!!! Keep those chapters coming...*pardon the pun*
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Hmmm....I wonder who changes their underwear more Bella or I? hehe
Good luck getting your work published...I will keep my fingers crossed for you. Your writing is amazing!!!!!! I am definitely recommended this one to a few "Edward Obsessors"!
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
For the love of all that is HOLY!!!! HOLY HAWT!!! You have incredible ideas...I simply cannot stop reading this at night. I am getting cranky in the morning, maybe I should try to sleep more than four hours but DAMN this is too hot. I don't want it to ever end.
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I love Alice, I'am glad you include other members of the Cullen family...my favorites are Alice, Jasper and Emmett. Awesome!
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
**** GAAAWWDDD **** I love the foul-mouthed Edward! Glad to see he's not so uptight. I love the control issue Edward's having!! I'am having my own...hehe
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Edward doing nasty things....me loves it! Great writing as always.
Reviewer: tflame74 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Fantastic...I can't wait to read the next chapter! I love the atmosphere you've created, so incredibly hot. I'd have a list 1, 2, 3 or 10 miles long if Edward was real! hehe
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