Reviewer: meggypoo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Every man needs is Red Wings, and this is the only way Edward can get them. Very nicely done.
Reviewer: dance23 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
any idea when edward's list is coming along.. ur killing me here
Reviewer: hottwimom (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Laura, WOW!!!! All I can think is Stephanie who???? That was beautiful and amazing and as far as I'm concerned, a better way for the series to end!!! Much lass complicated! I just got into fanfic recently. I devoured your story in 48 hours and I'm left wanting more. It was very enjoyable to read!!!! Thanks for sharing with us!!!
Author's Response: :) Thanks so much!
Reviewer: meggypoo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
OMG!! HOT!!!
Reviewer: whodunit43 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
i realized that those scum where talking about our women. haha fucking hillarious this is some goood shot and its soooooo Haaawwt. <3 <3 AWESOME, thankyou x
Reviewer: tarajb (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
FANTASTIC!....I don't know what else to say...FANTASTIC!
Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
omg!
Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Disagree with the OOC = jst keep going as your doing - I trust your judgement - dont rely on us too much.
Yeah a bathroom for edward is never mentioned and neither is his cock. He never showers. The teasers for the storyline flow very well and I want to kep reading.
Just remember I assume only women are reading this - and I am interested in Edwwrd's fantasties for Bella but I am not interested in any males fantasties for Bella - and panties is a real male fantasy. You have to decide your audience reckon becuase if this starts going off in male fantasties for bella I am outta here.
I am hetro female by the way.
Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Great story!!! I loved everything about it!!
Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I love the way still keep bits of Bella and Edward in your storyline. This is the very first fan fiction I have ever read and I am impressed. Its important to me as a devoted fan of Rob and Edward that you continue with those b its eg. for the love of all thats holy, eggs, theres lots of waist holding and chest in Stephanie's books. Also climbing thru windows. Thanks it was great
Reviewer: hottwimom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That was hot!!! Please keep it up!!!!
Reviewer: memphismom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Great start!!!
Reviewer: MandaLynn99 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I love how you've written Rose in this chapter. Not cold like she's usually portrayed. It's nice to see all the girls like that.
Reviewer: MandaLynn99 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:10 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
OMG, I cracked up at Emmett's text! I love how your mind works, girl!
Reviewer: hottwimom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I like the thought of Edward in the shower with the cold, wet tile against my back...wow...brings a whole new meaning to taking a cold shower!
Reviewer: MandaLynn99 (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I laughed out loud at the "la la la" with Alice. Thanks for the small chuckles you've insterted; I can't wait to read the rest!
Reviewer: eternally addicted (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 02:48 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Awesome and amazing story. I loved it!!!
Reviewer: crystal91390 (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I definitely love the moment when Edward found out about the tatoo =)
Reviewer: ktstato (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Excellence in its finest hour...thank you!
Reviewer: eternally addicted (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
That was fucking awesome!!! I can't wait to see what her revenge on Emmett is and what Edward has planned for the weekend.
I am not sure if I missed it reading or if yo uhaven't said yet, but where is her tatoo?
Reviewer: LaTuaCantante (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 09:39 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Amazing!!
Reviewer: Edwards_singer (Signed) · Date: January 01, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I haven't reviewed after every chapter, but I have to tell you that this story is great. I have laughed out loud, I have gotten misty-eyed, and I think I may have even moaned a time or two. ; )
I can't wait for the rest of the story. It has been an enjoyment to read. Great job!
Reviewer: limebug07 (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 06:29 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Aww! Every time I read this chapter my heart aches when Edward's screaming "no" in his head but he bites Bella anyway. Talk about self-sacraficing love!
<3
Reviewer: Silkie (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
OK first things first. I'm bawling crying. That was exceptionally well written. Thank you so much for sharing your amazing gift.
Secondly, You are sooooo lucky you didn't give in to temptation. You would have been hunted down and shot by the 10K+ reviewers of this story!!
Third, Happy New Year and I look forward to reading more of your writing during 2010.
Author's Response: Yes, you're probably right. But it still might've been fun! I still get reviews from people asking me to please write the joke! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: SilentSpring (Signed) · Date: December 31, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
*sighs happily* I truly adore how you continue to make a story we all love so much yours without losing the....essence of it.
You're truly amazing.
♥SS
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