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Reviewer: LaRosada (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

This is my favorite story on Twilighted. I was devastated when it ended, and I have decided to read it again. Also, you are my absolute favorite author on Twilighted!!!

That said (groupie rant, over) I will make an effort to review every chapter as I re-read the story. :-)

I love this chapter, mostly because I am an insomniac and I can relate to the frustration. I find myself awake at all hours of the night while my boyfriend is alseep.

Author's Response:

Welcome back!

Reviewer: pamirvine85 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

my favourite out of all the stories I read...  I have read alot and have not reviewed any... My sister and I both read it and both loved it and cried at the end... thanks so much

Reviewer: Agrael (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 08:44 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

I waited till I finished the story... WOW!




I am speechless...

Reviewer: ladyinwaiting002 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

I'm new to Twilighted, so I just came across your story. I can tell this one will have me laughing! The making Mike Newton jealous behind the counter image was just great. What a better use of Mike Newton and his store! I'm glad Bella was able to get her release in the end. The poor girl! Hopefully in your story Edward lets loose a little. That wouldn't be bad for Bella or the reader! My mind is in the gutter, I can't help it. :) I'm looking forward to continuing to read this.

Reviewer: ladyvamp74 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 05:46 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Wow! This was an excellent first read. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: ticatara (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 07:09 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

great story.  you had me wanting more with every chapter and fullfilled every expectation to the hill.  your a great story teller and should continue.

Reviewer: Sakura81 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II

Wow! Lot's happening in this chapter. I like how Bella quickly protects Edward in the park...and then calms him down in the theatre.../Overall, I liked that they are having a nice weekend together and are growing closer--who knew they could even grow closer! And I can't wait to see what Bella's revenge on Emmet is.

Reviewer: Sakura81 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans

Great chapter....I thought the guy bonding time was hilarious! Looking forward to what happens in Edward & Bella's weekend away..

Reviewer: Cullens_Swan (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 05:18 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

ok...i am seriously turned-on by this......
Your writing skills are incredible!

Reviewer: jaja02 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

This is my first time in this sight but i can tell that this will be a great story

Reviewer: Snicket (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions

In chapter one, Bella admitted that she wasnt a giggling person. Yet she giggels a lot, and for some reason i find it disturbing; Bella giggling. She doesnt seem like a person that giggles a lot, or, at all. Otherwise its a great story:)

Reviewer: Sakura81 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2010 12:06 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

OMG! That was so HOT! 

Reviewer: Sakura81 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Woah!!! This is great! I got through chapter 5 without reviewing and HAD to come back and say something! I love it! This first chapter is a great start because I think it really portrays the frustration that Bella in the books would have been feeling but just didn't verbalize too explicitly. I like that you incorporated things that the characters would say like Bella saying "Holy Crow", yet also added a few slight changes--but as I read to 5..I don't necessarily think they are too OOC. I love the little twists and differences.  I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: meggypoo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing

Every man needs is Red Wings, and this is the only way Edward can get them.  Very nicely done.

Reviewer: dance23 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:22 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

any idea when edward's list is coming along.. ur killing me here


Reviewer: hottwimom (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:02 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Laura, WOW!!!! All I can think is Stephanie who???? That was beautiful and amazing and as far as I'm concerned, a better way for the series to end!!! Much lass complicated! I just got into fanfic recently. I devoured your story in 48 hours and I'm left wanting more. It was very enjoyable to read!!!! Thanks for sharing with us!!!

Author's Response:

:)  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: meggypoo (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

OMG!! HOT!!!

Reviewer: whodunit43 (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans

i realized that those scum where talking about our women. haha fucking hillarious this is some goood shot and its soooooo Haaawwt. <3 <3 AWESOME, thankyou x

Reviewer: tarajb (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 08:57 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

FANTASTIC!....I don't know what else to say...FANTASTIC!

Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected


Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences

Disagree with the OOC = jst keep going as your doing - I trust your judgement - dont rely on us too much.


Yeah a bathroom for edward is never mentioned and neither is his cock.  He never showers.  The teasers for the storyline flow very well and I want to kep reading.


Just remember I assume only women are reading this - and I am interested in Edwwrd's fantasties for Bella but I am not interested in any males fantasties for Bella - and panties is a real male fantasy.  You have to decide your audience  reckon becuase if this starts going off in male fantasties for bella I am outta here.

I am hetro female by the way.

Reviewer: Yaribella (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:59 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows

Great story!!! I loved everything about it!!

Reviewer: MrsMichellePattinson (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2010 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted

I love the way still keep bits of Bella and Edward in your storyline.  This is the very first fan fiction I have ever read and I am impressed.  Its important to me as a devoted fan of Rob and Edward that you continue with those b its eg. for the love of all thats holy, eggs, theres lots of waist holding and chest in Stephanie's books. Also climbing thru windows.  Thanks it was great

Reviewer: hottwimom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected

That was hot!!! Please keep it up!!!!

Reviewer: memphismom (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2010 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated

Great start!!!  

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