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Reviewer: TheDarkSheWolf (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Ummm... It got a little akward when Edward thought about Bella giving oral sex. The other thing is that Edward should have been a little more reluctant to give it to her. But all in all, itwas good. 4/5
Reviewer: TheDarkSheWolf (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
DID EDWARD MASTERBATE HIMSELF?!?!?!?!?! HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That's nice!
Reviewer: TheDarkSheWolf (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS THE BEST!!!!!!
Reviewer: TheDarkSheWolf (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2010 07:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
That's nice.=) I like it.
Reviewer: my-bronze-haired-angel (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 19: 7 Days
I can't wait to see what Bella does when she see's what Edward added to the list!
Reviewer: daveydaydreams (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 05:04 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
amazing story. i just found it and read it over the course of three days. i was laughing and crying all in the same chapter. it was sincerely beautiful, and i love the ending you created for the characters. [more than i am 'just ok' with the ending s. meyer gave them.]
again, beautiful. amazing. fantastic. thank you for sharing this with us.
Author's Response: So glad you liked it!
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:17 AM · On: Chapter 14: Advice and Plans
Im soo excited for the next chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
AHHHH!!!!!! A M A Z I N G
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
OH MY FING GOD.
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
uuhhhh. speechless. amazing.
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Holy ****!!! how do u come up with this? amazing
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:12 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
AMAZING.
Reviewer: Suvisasav (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
ome. im speechless. like.. ome.
Reviewer: justanotherrobslut (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Bothered by the blood talk? Hell, they are vampires: it comes with the territory. I love how you are dealing with the menstruation issue. SM should thank you. This is great.
Reviewer: trinity70x0 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 03:04 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Wow...just wow!
Reviewer: justanotherrobslut (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
SM ought to thank you.
Reviewer: eclipseloversexyedward (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2010 12:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
I love to see the man untwined. He is only a mirror image of what Bella is. They both need it, they both WANT it. Make Edwrad more aggresive, we all need it.
Reviewer: justanotherrobslut (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Pretty darned good. Am proceeding on to the next. I love it that Alice pops up. I like the way you mimic SM's style, but I think you write better.
Reviewer: my-bronze-haired-angel (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
Oh my gosh the last part was really funny! I love this story your a great writer!!!!!
Reviewer: andnarcissus (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2010 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
Every man deserves his red wings...lol...Good job. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: andersse (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 11:10 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
You are a very talented writer. I think you improve on the original story! You combine sexiness, romance, and suspense so well. I hope your novel is published. This is the most well-written fan fic I've read yet.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind review!
Reviewer: andnarcissus (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
The beauty of Bella and Edward sharing thier sexual desires almost, but not quite, outshines the love shown in your story. It makes one long for something so satisfying. Good job. It's wonderful.
Also, this is my first ever review. You deserve it.
Author's Response: I appreciate that--thanks!
Reviewer: Faint (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Very good start here, immediately caught my interest but still didn't seem like the story moved too fast. It was easy to read too, and the length was good, not too long but too short either.
Can't wait to read some more...
Reviewer: twi-sessed (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Chapter 22: The Honeymoon
That was so awesome. I'm sure you've been asked a million times, bit where can i get the cowgirl costume? i'm sure my husband of 19 years would like that.
Author's Response: I don't remember what site I found it on :(--sorry. I think I just searched for a sexy cowgirl costume and found it pretty quickly though. If I ever come across the site again, I'll let you know. Thanks!
Reviewer: Cullen Eclisped (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2010 04:41 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
WOW Laura,
This was truly a treasure. Thank you for all your hard work. I very much enjoyed your versions of Edward and Bella. I am looking forward to reading more of your FanFic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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