ome. im speechless. like.. ome.

Wow...just wow!

I love to see the man untwined. He is only a mirror image of what Bella is. They both need it, they both WANT it. Make Edwrad more aggresive, we all need it.

Oh my gosh the last part was really funny! I love this story your a great writer!!!!!

You are a very talented writer. I think you improve on the original story! You combine sexiness, romance, and suspense so well. I hope your novel is published. This is the most well-written fan fic I've read yet.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your kind review!

Very good start here, immediately caught my interest but still didn't seem like the story moved too fast. It was easy to read too, and the length was good, not too long but too short either.

Can't wait to read some more...

WOW Laura,

This was truly a treasure.  Thank you for all your hard work.  I very much enjoyed your versions of Edward and Bella.  I am looking forward to reading more of your FanFic.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

That was so awesome. I'm sure you've been asked a million times, bit where can i get the cowgirl costume? i'm sure my husband of 19 years would like that.

I agree with Bella: Damn! This is fun! I have to say you are doing a great job with the characterizations and the dialogue. They feel like the characters I loved from the books, but with their sexiness revealed and kicked up a notch. #17 on the list is spot on! And, your writing has humor sprinkled throughout... so far a very enjoyable read.

its hard to review when you dont want to stop reading.so thats gud cant i cant wait to see what happends.

Took me roughly five nights to finish this. And took around four hours each night dedicated to reading this all, maybe five hours. You here, have an amazing story. Normally I am not for ones that are based around one big thing, but this story was funny, fluffy and everything good in a story. It was definately worth reading. Thanks for posting!

Author's Response:

So glad you liked!

I just finished reading your story and all I can say is...wow! I loved everything about it. Even the ending was perfect, though I'm sad that it ended. This will definitely stay in my list of favorites and be read multiple times. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

P.S. I loved the birthday part! Especially the photo album and Cullen crest ideas.

Happy Birthday!  This is only review number two for me, I'm a poor reviewer, but hopefully knowing I've never reviewed anyother fanfiction stories besides yours lets you know how much I enjoyed your story. 

I have mixed feelings about the change in plot.  I miss Renaesme.  I loved that Belle got to experience that.  It would be interesting if she still could somehow???

Your interpretation of their intimacy was really good. I loved how you brought a deeper level of trust between them.  I also loved your choice in having them at the cottage for their honeymoon, I loved how Jacob imprinted on Samantha, and the way he acted at the wedding.  I loved how you added respect to Bella's character in the way she got to choose her car, the way Edward made sure she was not "dolled" up before waking up.  I loved the extra confidence you gave to Bella.  The panties on his bed was great! 

Overall, I feel I know Edward and Bella more now, and understand them a little better now.  Even the changes you made, I still felt they were the characters I met in SM books.  Thank you for letting me get to read more about my loving Bella and Edward.  

Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoughtful review--I appreciate it!  Sorry you missed Renesmee, I just never liked her as a character.  But I know a lot of people do.  So glad you enjoyed overall!