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Reviewer: Love_Dynasty (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
Extremely hot!!!!
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Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 9: Games
Wow,I can't wait to move on to the next chapter...what does she have planned for him? Fascinating....
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 08:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Very nicely done...
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
No, this chapter is perfect as it is...no need to cross off items in every chapter...you're still making me laugh...and I realize that this is the very first fanfic I read where Edward is actually a vampire...so there you go. I love your story.
Bethany
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 01:16 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Number 10 was AWESOME!!!!
Reviewer: mlouison (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 01:09 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
i think it is unlikely that bella would ever do this
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Poor Edward...I am so sorry to see him torturing himself so....just fuck her already!!!!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wow, you are definitely master of your craft...you weave words in such a way that it leaves me wanting more and more, and more!!!
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Fantastic! I just love it! Laughed out loud every five seconds.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2010 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Fantastic! I just love it! Laughed out loud every five seconds.
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Your story is hilarious, I love it! I laughed my ass off the whole time I was reading this chapter! Great job!
Bethany
Reviewer: bethanyforever2010 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hi, I heard about this story from friends on the forum and it sounded really good so here I am reading. I always review every chapter even if it's just a few words...
So far, I love it! I can understand where Bella is coming from....sexual frustration is a nasty thing. Looking forward to reading the whole story.
Thanks for entertaining!
Bethany
Reviewer: Twilighter001 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Oh of course Alice knows everything! (She is my favorite character, I must say! Well, tied with Edward <3 )
So far your story is great! I'm sure it will get even better as it goes on!
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I don't think Edward is going to be too eager to try #17.
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:54 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Well, it wasn't technically what she wanted to have happen against the tree, but at least she got her happy ending with Edward there this time.
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
So, is Alice going to be a cock-blocer or an accomplice?
Reviewer: Nickey Cullen (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Can't say I am a big fan of a chapter that contains an orgasm, but no Edward. But I will read on and hope for bigger and better (and harder and colder) things. ;)
Reviewer: Twixles (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Wow!! I am truly stunned at how well written that whole story was! It was both highly erotic as well as emotional and touching!
Thanks so much for writing it!!
Rach
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Yipes, a rest stop, so very not what I expect Edward to do, but I loved it! Very hot!
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Yowsa! What a writer you are. I can see the general progression in their relationhsip. i'm glad that it's slow adn they are learning together.
Reviewer: purelyamuse (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Rrrrrr. Hot!
Reviewer: colorguardgirl18 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 10:53 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
NOOOO!!!!!!!!!!! I don't want it to be over!!! :'( It was amazing, so yeah. :)
10/10 :)
Reviewer: Hijinks (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2010 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Reviewer: colorguardgirl18 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
Oh. My. Gosh. You almost got me crying with those 'diary' entries. They were so amazingly sweet! :') I love when 'Bella' said she wanted to go to New Orleans right after she just finished talking about out of the country places. Sorry, I live in Louisiana, and well, it was just kind of cool. Lol. Well, on to the loveeee about to happenin' in the next chappie! :D
Reviewer: colorguardgirl18 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2010 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
This was truly an AMAZING chapter. I think my favorite thus far. Cudos to you! :) Can't wait for what's to 'come'. ;]
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