Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 02:07 AM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
so hot, yet soooo beautiful!
you can feel the love!
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2010 12:07 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
WOW!!
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Oh, hells yeah! I like that Jasper sniffed it out first and Alice was ready. I loved Edward's reaction and am looking forward to what he says to Bella about it.
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Wow, Bella is a testament to taking things into one's own hands to get in done. I love her new found confidence, especially leaving her panties on Edward's bed. I hope we get to hear his reaction.
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 12: Words and Letters
ohh noo naughty emmett! still love it though hehe
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OK, very hot! Especially when Edward commanded Bella to keep her hands above her head. He has totally thought of these things before and is receptive to her signals. Love it!
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Edward has to know something about the noteboook. At the very least he heard Alice's words to Bella about hiding it.
Reviewer: kiwi vampire (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:44 PM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
Incredible, I love this story One of my Favourites!!!
Reviewer: london spam (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I lliked all of it, but especially the idea of Edward in front and the cold tile behind, with Bella's mind drifting to a threesome with two Edwards! Also, I liked how she used the water turning cold to actually play into the fantasy. I wonder what Edward's reaction to hearing that might be...
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:26 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
i have no words.... just mmmm
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 11:13 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Hell Yeah!! thats all i can say... i cant stop reading... you definatley have a way with words! WOW
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:55 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
OH MY GOD!!!!!!
LOVE IT!!!!!!
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
hot!!
love that he was being dense on purpose...
Reviewer: ilovetwi (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
very nice!! simple but very effective!!
Reviewer: phoenixfan1 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
Charlie's speech made me cry! It was so beautiful!!!
Reviewer: samiam77 (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2010 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 11: Music
this just gets better and hotter with each chapter!!!!
Reviewer: meg23287 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I just wanna say this is one of the best if not the best story i have ever read,and i'm only on 10 !!
Reviewer: greylee (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Ha ha ha, now I am all giggles.
Reviewer: greylee (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Definitely liking it so far!!! I was half expecting him to be waiting for her when she got back to her room and something developing from that. It was great.
Reviewer: nix2828 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 25: The Book and the Change
this chapter is one of the most moving pieces of literature i've ever read.
i'm a huge fan of jasper in the books, and i always wished there was more about his relationship with bella, and this chapter is exactly what i imagined it would be like, having him be there while shes changing is brilliance on your part and ive got to say....i shed a tear!!
thank you for a fabulous story....i can't wait to finish!
Nix
Reviewer: liv408 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
It sure does.... Whoa
Reviewer: liv408 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
XD Ar Alice
Reviewer: meg23287 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 02:59 AM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
YOU ARE GOOD!! Amazing
Reviewer: samiam77 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2010 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
this story is starting out great!
Reviewer: meg23287 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2010 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Number 10 really does deserve a review. Wow that is all i can say wow
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