this frickin chapter was just epic to astronomical proportions!!! so much in it and so much awesome stuff!! the goodbyes to her dad and her friends and the moving into the new beautiful grandeur house and more things crossed off the list and fucking edward leather clad!! OMFG!!!*huge sigh* i want a vampire bf...no scratch i want edward cullen vampire husband!! whoa talk about a fantasy!!lol!!and then the things they did for her as a family to experience human things and then the beautiful he talked to her about...OMG *swoon* how loving and romantic and endearing and just plain fucking empowering is that!! and then i just love the changing her while they made love you know he got to do it without a condom and then he got to bite her and drink her blood while he orgasmed!!!OMFEC!! where in the world do you come up with this stuff!! you are one incredibly amazingly talented lady  your writing is beyond description!! and i for one get to enjoy the fruit of your labour!! niiiiiiiiccccccceeeeeee!

o wow hahaha i love your edward bless him

awww that was such a touching chapter! rather sad that's for sure!! it's amazing how much bella loves and is committed to edward and their destiny together..haha obviously more than even edward! but i do understand why he would like her to stay human for a bit longer!! anyways there was some really hot stuff in this chapter and of course some rather funny moments!! emmett again... and it seems so sad that they hardly got to spend much time in their cute little cottage!! well written chapter very interesting and captivating!!

written so damn well

lol alice really stole the scence there! kudos for her! the structure of the story is great. good detailed descriptions.

ohhhhhhhhh shiiiiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttttttt!! that was fucking awesome!!!!!! i had to refrain myself from gripping the frickin monitor to hard and stop squrming in my seat!!! you are one hot tamali with the lemons lady and of course nothing beats edwards dirty talk and i love his epov's always! what an epic honeymoon that was and i take it that edward is totally at peace with his sexual self huh!! loved it you fucking rock!

Haha, nice one Alice! See, I knew that no matter how gentleman-like he wanted to be, there is only so much a man can do. Of course he smelled it, and of course he wanted it! Very sexy! Love the forhead to forhead thing; gets me every single time!

is it possible to give a higher rating than 10? I love it, thankyou for writing this.

hi,

i just wanted to say how much i loved this entire story, i laughed, i cried (the idea of the book was beautiful) and i got very hot and flustered! you're an excellent writer.

x

OMFG!! what more can i fucking say....that was just the epitome of an excellent wedding night and yes!!! finally they got to have all of each other! now i really need to either go change my panties or cold shower...probably both!lol!

haha i wondered if he'd ever stumble onto that list! his reaction was so funny! i'm glad he dispensed with the dare cos you know that would be too much torture..idk for me or edward and bella! lol! it was great reading about what the guys were really thinking about bellas tattoo and the affect it had on them...haha..especially emmett! so funny! i also like the new addition that edward made to the list! be interesting to see bellas reaction when she sees it! great chapter!

well yeah you're right about the cars but i love the cars he got bella and his cars as well eccentric as they may be!! they rock!! anyways i enjoyed the chapter and loved their little prank with emmett! also that they got to see her tattoo and were very impressed with it! it was such a classic idea..i love it and yes only edward has the privilege of having his mark on his 'mate'!! niiiiccceee!! i'm so glad the wedding is getting closer!! i can't wait! excellent writing. btw why was esme all dirty?!! hmmm!?