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Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
O.M.G..... !!!!!!! Ugh... Yes, please, more, more, more!!!! :)hehehe
LOVE this story.. please update soooooooooon!
Reviewer: CarmenGS (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
OH.MY.GOD.
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 10:38 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
I never thought a period could be so hot!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
what a great game, I can't wait to see Edward's turn.
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
Didn't Edward already taste Bella's blood when he saved her from James' venom? Or is it different in your story?
Author's Response: Yes, of course, that's why she said "this time" she wanted it to happen in a way that would be pleasurable for him. He was so tortured by what he had to do to save her that time that he derived no pleasure from tasting her blood. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: vampiremama (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
You gotta love Alice, even when she is cockblocking.
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
awesome.
Reviewer: mrsjjjcullen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
all i can say .. is OMG ... i spent an entire sunday reading all of your chapters .. i just couldn't stop reading... and i'm DYING to read more ... you have a serious talent ....... i can't wait to see what happens next :)
Reviewer: silverfaire (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
Awesome chapter!!!
Reviewer: robsgirl (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
oh hell no. I have read the rest of this story and you leave it here? St Peter on a popsicle stick. You made something gross into something so totally hot, I need my own shower.
Hurry with the next chapter!!
Reviewer: lucy the divaqueen (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
i actually liked that you touched on the subject of bella's period. it always made me laugh that stephanie meyer ignored that. what did bella do, lock herself away for four days out of a month?
Reviewer: jjane (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
you're unbelievable, can't wait to read more...
Reviewer: samhalsoph (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Now that I finished all 15 chapters, I just want to thank you for writing Edward and Bella's real story. Your writing is amazing, I love how you kept them in character, and the list is great. I will be waiting for the rest of the weekend. This keeps getting better and better. I will have to hang out on the forum boards while I am waiting for chapter 16. See you there.
PS- I will absolutely chip in with you and go Rob Pat stalking in Vancouver!!!
Reviewer: samhalsoph (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Now that I finished all 15 chapters, I just want to thank you for writing Edward and Bella's real story. Your writing is amazing, I love how you kept them in character, and the list is great. I will be waiting for the rest of the weekend. This keeps getting better and better. I will have to hang out on the forum boards while I am waiting for chapter 16. See you there.
PS- I will absolutely chip in with you and go Rob Pat stalking in Vancouver!!!
Reviewer: girlys75 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Please ! When can we get the next chapter ?
I can't wait !
Isabelle
Reviewer: 9twilightlover9 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
wow. amazing please update soon
Reviewer: firedarkeyes (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Reviewer: sstreger (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
woahhhh hot hot hot! i love the bloodplay is that weird?! i think it's because i know he likes it so much! Really love this story though and I hope they do the biology table at some point I am most intrigued by that one....
Reviewer: IslandWoman221 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Oh, my God! Very big LOL moments!! Alice and Jasper was perfect! Tight writing, definitly has me panting for more!!! Thanks so much. [wicked grin and laugh] I think my husband will want to thank you later--even if he doesn't know it!!! Levity just seems to heighten lustiness so nicely!
Reviewer: robsgirl (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
holy mother of God. If I wore panties I'd need a fresh pair.
Reviewer: msdenisetexas (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 07:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
That was...awesome.. Thre are no words.. I CAN NOT wait for the next Chapter!!!
Reviewer: saphire1113 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:40 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Ok I didn't think I was quesy about the menstaration, but I guess I am, because say there is nomore (although come on 3 days)I wish. Anyway good chapter and I'm looking forward to more and I like Bella's punishments. She may just have her own island by the end of this ;-)
Reviewer: VampSK (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
wow, this story just keeps getting better and better! :)
Reviewer: TheMrsCullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2009 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
hehe. i want more.
Author's Response: I promise to update in a few days! And how could I not reward you for leaving my 1900th review!!!!!!??
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