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Reviewer: amberlady22 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
I love this fic! This chapter is by far the best one you've written...please keep up the good work!
Reviewer: bommarkm (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: GeneralGem (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
oh wow, wat a Wonderful chapter, love the deeper connection between them, please update.
Wonderful Writer(which u r) = Wonderful writing!!!!! :):):)
Reviewer: blueeyedbella (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
AHA!! you said awesomesauce in your chapter notes! you are now my bestfriend!! i like "invented" that saying. which means i say it like ALL THE TIME!! :D love you and your writing keep at it! update soon. <3
Author's Response: Is that where that great word came from? It's so funny that I can't help myself! I bow to your word coinage!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Games
OME, such a cliffhanger!
I love how you capture and express the tentative and playful side of their relationship as well as the smoldering sensual side. I love bold Bella!
Reviewer: chitownprinsezz (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Good story I hope to see more Edward and Bella are the best couple of all time no lie
Reviewer: kkelleher27 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:37 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
wow. i just spent hours reading this entire story. you are an amazin writer! i can't wait for more!
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I just discovered your story today and I'm enthralled. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!! I hope it comes soon!!!!
Reviewer: irishjo (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
Brilliant writing!!!
Reviewer: MidnightKat (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
I love how you have managed to capture the depth and purity of Edward and Bella's relationship. It is really one of the things that sets this story apart from others. Things don't feel rushed. The relationship seems to be one of devotion, concern, trust and most of all love - with alot of lust thrown in to leave us all panting and wanting more. Thank You!! You have done a wonderful job so far..... I am really looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Okay, now that was my favorite chapter now. AMAZING!
Reviewer: WeePixie (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 04:00 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
You're absolutly phenominal at writing out emotions. You just caused me to send a rather personal text to my fiancee lol
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
Sneaky Edward, is he starting a collection or what? I'm so glad Bella has Alice to help her figure out that brooding guilt-ridden god of a fiance of hers!As always, another great chapter.
Reviewer: ImInLoveWithaFictionalVampire (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
It's funny how hott something can still be when all clothes are still on the body, lol
Reviewer: jackbauer (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
So um, just want you to know I'm reading your story, but I dont ever know how to review citrusy chapters... and so well.... um... looking forward to moving along the list. Whew... I need a fan.
Author's Response: Your review made me smile! Thanks for reading my story--I've enjoyed yours!
Reviewer: Luna_daydreamer (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
awwww how sweet~!!! i love it..more please >.<
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Best chapter so far, fantastic! Bella's got a dirty mouth too, me likes! And dominating Edward gives me shivers, thank you!
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
ah. ma. zing. i used to read fanfic all the time, but now that twilights kind of in a rut, with no more books and the movie not till november, i dont keep up with it. this story, however, i check back on regularly.
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
That was HOT!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
I hope Edward goes to his room before comes to Bella's after hunting because I am dying to see his reaction to his "punishment." Very clever little minx, she is turning into. And there is something so very sensual about him drinking her blood, I love your Bella for admitting it, wanting it and fantasizing about it. And yes, more dirty mouthed Edward, please!
Reviewer: Jakesnessie (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
ahh! i cant read it now, i have to print it off bc my computer was bugged, but i love it already!!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Awesome chapter.
Love the dirty mouth on Edward, Please Laura, I want some more!
Reviewer: terriberryc (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
I'm loving your story, hooked already!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Chapter 16: The Weekend, Part II
Wow Bella was so quick on her feet I felt like she deserved to be able to save Edward this time! Such a good chapter, I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: xooxsss (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2009 12:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: The Weekend, Part I
HOT DAMN good chapter!
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