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Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
HOLY HELL. That. Was. HOT.
Just... wow. Hot. I need a minute... or a smoke. Wait, I don't smoke. Ok a drink then... Oh hell, screw it, I need a cold shower after that!
Reviewer: hitchy (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
As per your request I'm reviewing more than the last chapter! LOL!
I love the concept of this story. Chapter one was a great tease... can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: LoveMe123 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
GGGGRRRRRR!!! You're such a tease!! But a hell of a story writer!! Good going... Keep it up!
Reviewer: SvassGudinna (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 21: The Wedding
That was so beautifully written. You captured the moment, the built-up was perfect and the climax supurb. Great job!
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
yeah 10.....
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Love it, however to help with our own sweet thoughts, I wouldn't mind a general lenght of Edward, but untill then i'll just think of him as an 8 with a 41/2 width..... :)
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I love Alice playing an intsagator in this way.... wonderful
Reviewer: hot99z (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I think this is the first story I've come across that allows her to show what a realistic girl would do with all that pent up frustration... huuraah for u
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 24: Countdown to a Change
Amazing, I know you have long since finished this, but I am new to it and this is such a fantastic story. Am really moved by it, I loved the way you write things in different formats, long lists, short thoughts etc,very interesting to read!
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
He stole her panties! Haha way to go Edward!
Reviewer: Midnight Sunshine (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 23: Good-Byes
absolutely love the line when Edward says God isn't here bella but I am... stroke of GENIUS!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
That was sooo cute - well I don`t know what to say and that`s not often!
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
LOVE number ten! This Edward is better than SM's, in a very, very dirty way ;)
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
You are SO right. A wet Edward deserves a review! That was seriously... steamy ;) Love Jasper's reaction, looks like Bella is gonna drive every vampire in the house crazy.. Wonder when it's Carlisle's turn?
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Oh, the mystery of the blue lace panty... and Edward gets wet ... so go on!
In Germany you can buy some kind of blue bras and panies of Chantell (sexy underwaer from France) and you get 25 % off at the moment - that fits to our chapter:)
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
That was seriously hot ;) Why couldn't SM make Eddiboy more like this?
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:33 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Hahaha I love Alice's last line! Ooh that had me laughing for quite some time ;D
Reviewer: lisaslovestories (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2010 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
I agree with you, people should definitly review earlier chapters as well, so that's what I'm going to do now that I have started reading this :)
Really looking forward to whatever kinkyness Bella will come up with, just hoping Eddiboy will be there too..
Loved the first chapter!
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: Additions
OMG - the idea with the panty was great - I also loved EPOV! But number 17 on her list will be difficult and dangerous, too.
Ella Mausi
I´ll read on - but not today
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
Oh, a sweet chapter!
The heart in the tree is very nice! And how will Bella continue with her list?
Go on!
Ella Mausi
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Yes, her smell is different - that`s a brillant idea!
But why does`t Alice say somsthing about Bellas "new" smell?
Ella Mausi
Reviewer: cnh7 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:38 AM · On: Chapter 28: 2nd Epilogue; Fandom Gives Back Outtake
AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: Ella Mausi (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hey, I just started to read the first chapter and I will go on reading...
Might Bella will have a nice dream?
Ella Mausi
Reviewer: mariann17 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 08:19 AM · On: Chapter 13: Teasing
In answer to your question, good reaction.
Reviewer: cnh7 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2010 07:31 AM · On: Epiclogue: A Million Tomorrows
No Words, it was awesome!!!
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