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Reviewer: breakingdusk (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 11:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That wuz breathtaking...I absolutely luved it. It just keeps getting better and better.
Reviewer: Krrristi (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:58 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
aww they are too cute. and so fucking hot! damn...
Reviewer: weewander (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Whooooo! Go Edward, Go Bella!!! I swear they're going to burst into flames. This is some of the best erotica ever, you really enrapture me and leave me wanting more. I am definitely going to have to revisit Victoria and the Aerie soon, you make me miss the area soooo much. I love your story, the fact that you've mentioned Canada in it just sends me over the moon! Thanks.
Reviewer: Brits23 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
*drops dead*
Reviewer: none (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
they both have more willpower than anyone I know :} great chapter!
Author's Response: Okay, this is totally true!
Reviewer: mojo (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
fabulous story... great work with the lemons, best lemonaid ever!
Reviewer: Stacey Joyce (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OMG!!! I absolutely LOVED that the symphony played Bella's lullaby!! You wrote the emotion beautifully!!
And waking her up in the middle of the night...well of course that was extremely hot!!
Reviewer: MasochisticLion (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
damn! that was..WOW!!
Reviewer: doowee (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
i love it!!!!!!
i hope u update soonefr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Laura, Laura, Laura...
You could have written the last part of this chapter just for me.
OH. MY. FUCKING. GOD.
I think I love you.
Author's Response: :):):) Liked that part, didya? Love you too, bb.
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh Lordy.*I'M* going to combust before their wedding night. Heehee. That was one hot chapter! So guuhhh-ood.
Reviewer: an_edward_chick (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I had just finished the 3 chapter sad and tearful update for WA and wrote in my review that I was off to find some fluff and/or smut to bring my spirits up. Low and behold you had updated. This was exactly what I needed. HOT doesn't even do this chapter justice. You've outdone yourself.
Author's Response: Ha! Yes, this story is definitely the antidote to the heartcrushing angst that is WA. I read it yesterday too and was like, holy hell, somebody grab me my Prozac! So glad I was able to raise your spirits!
Reviewer: jasper_rox (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
very nice. you should have her write a complete list and show it to him! or maybe describe how HE relieves his pent up libido! either way, sexy.
Reviewer: Stellarrose (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Oh....my...God.......that final scene was one of the hottest, most sensual and arousing I've ever read! It would be a minor miracle for them to be able to NOT consumate it at that point. Talk about sexed up!!
Whew!!!
Reviewer: Twilight_obessesed (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was great i loved it cant wait to see what happens next
Reviewer: Midnight Belle (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
this chapter was great. it was hot and sweet! I loved it.
Reviewer: isabellatrix (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Best. Chapter. Ever. You are seriously a freaking genius. Your story isn't just pure smut. It truly is a love story, with some of the more...exciting...details left in. You know, like Breaking Dawn would have been without all the fade to black bullshit. I love how for the most part Edward is in character, but how Bella just absolutely breaks his resolve and brings out the animalistic side in him. That is so hot on so many levels. THANK YOU, please update soon! ;) You rock!
Author's Response: Thanks for all the multiple reviews! I'm glad you see that this is about more than just smut--I've tried very hard to make it a love story first and foremost! Thanks!
Reviewer: celticstorm08 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Great update! Looks like Bella and Edward weren't going out after all... ;p
Reviewer: hvolt11 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
That was so fucking hot.
I love the way you write them. Such love, and passion. I love how Edward is realizing they can be equals, and its okay to want things too.
I seriously think my brain short-circuited with this chapter.
Reviewer: Belledward (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
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That...
was the hottest shit.
It has rendered me speechless.
Dammit, Edward! I want to be used too! Myyyy turn!
Reviewer: bailey30 (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
still loving it!!
Reviewer: CollMom (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
OMG. Excuse me while I try to learn how to breathe normally again...
Reviewer: Eidelweiss (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
You never cease to amaze me. That was absolutely wonderful. CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jesyka_haha (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
Um...what did I think. I don't know if I can even think anymore. My brain is now mush. Your words have made me completely inchoherent. And I say...thank you! I started reading this about three days ago and I can't stop myself from rereading it. You truly have a way with words. Keep writing, I can't wait to read about the honeymoon.
Author's Response: Reread away baby! You wrote my 2600th review! That's insane! Thanks so much!
Reviewer: Gypsylady (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 17: The Weekend, Part III
I think, impossible though it may seem, that I just fell in love with Edward Cullen even more. And it's all thanks to you.
This chapter was delicious. I felt every emotion so clearly that I never wanted it to end. It was achingly seductive, and amusing, and sweet, and heart-tugging and oh so hot. So much in one chapter! I even teared up.
Yummy, yummy, yummy.
Thanks again.
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