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Reviewer: lalinda1236 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Ok so overall this was an awesome story i read all the chapters and i have to say that i was automatically stuck to the computer lol... but the only thing that dissapointed me is that we don't get to read about their weeding night =( can't wait to hear about that.. will be checking for updates daily. Again thanks for keeping me so entertained
Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
My favorite fanifc....ever. You are a gifted writer, for sure!!!!
Reviewer: melb229 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Okay...you are seriously an amazing writer and are fulfilling my Twilight fantasies like no other. The books are amazing, but you are taking this to a whole other level that's like human blood to us thirsty vampires :) Thank you!!!! Now, when are you going to post the next chapter?? I've been waiting and waiting and waiting. Begging here!!
Reviewer: sarahfry77 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
All I can say is........WOW! I am new to this website (and fanfiction in general) and I can't get enough! I love your story! I read all the chapters in like two days and am ready for the next one. And I must say it certainly has been inspirational on the homefront as well (my husband thanks you!). Please update again soon, I need my next fix!
Reviewer: tricky (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
That was so great - you are a gifted writer!
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
do you think they will be adding this story to the "abstinence only education in schools"??????
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:46 AM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Love how the "scent of a woman" was not only Edward's undoing, but aroused Jasper as well - "fun for the whole family"???? OK, so this whole story has been so erotic and tantalizing - and unbelievably HOT!!
Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
Good Lawd, Laura!!!
Started with this on Friday after chat (around midnight or so - ) couldn't put it down - how come no one made me read this until now??????
Reviewer: twifans (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
completed....oh hale no! what!!! we still have days...no laura no that's not right
Reviewer: sofaking (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
"This woman is going to be the death of me. This woman is going to be my WIFE. This woman is making me the luckiest man that ever existed. I need this woman in ways I never expected and never wanted to admit I needed and in every way a man needs a woman. This woman. This woman. THIS WOMAN."
funniest shit ever.
Reviewer: sofaking (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
this story is dope. please continue.
Reviewer: Melliegirl13 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Wow. This story is amazing. I love it! I just read it all and I have to say that it is one of my favorite stories. You are an amazing writer. I can't wait to see what you have in store for the next chapter. Keep up the great work and update soon please :D
Reviewer: Edwardsfavoritebrunette (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Wonderful, wonderful, wonderful!
I'm not quite done with this chapter, but I had a question:
When Bella caught Edward's cum in her hands in the car, asked him for her sweater, then opened her hands like a sign for a book, was it like the hands holding the apple on Twilight? I haven't read the other reviews, so someone might have already answered this, sorry!
Forever,
Edward's Favorite Brunette
Author's Response: I did have that imagine in mind, yes, although you're the only one who caught it!
Reviewer: Akckitty (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
loved it.
haha I loved how you put BS...it gave me a few giggles. those are bad name intials though, ahaha.
to bad they didn't go farther :(
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 11: Music
All i can say at this point is that...OMFG!!!thats all, oh and i just wanted to say that... MORE i want more ; P
Reviewer: Akckitty (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
hahaa awesome. I knew that Alice would have found out that notebook...she sees everything.
Great Job! :)
Reviewer: Akckitty (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
this is going to be really good, I can tell :)
Reviewer: girliegirl (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
loved it. loved the prank that was to funny.
Reviewer: sweetness4683 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Awesome story so far! Can't wait for the rest! Emmett's gag was priceless! I laughed out loud a lot! Thanks!
Happy writing!
Reviewer: KAsweets4 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Absolutely captivating. I couldn't get enough. I lost sleep over it (in a good way)! Thank you! I can't wait for the rest of the story to unfold...lol
Reviewer: Babbylin (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 02:12 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
love it love it love it love it......i cnt say tht enough....great!!1, love the car choice too...i was laughing so hard at the payback against Em, good stuff...well i hope u update soon, im looking forward to it
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
omg... that was so....hmm... HOT... if rob is reading this OMG... i hope that he enjoyed it..hahah....
Reviewer: bryantjess (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I like that she got to pick out the car... it always bugged me that she didn't get to pick out the cars... even if she said she didn't care about it. She still should have been involved in the dicision. Great story! Thanks!
Jess
Reviewer: schaapje98 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Nice chapter!! Bravo. Is this the last one?
Reviewer: rosela (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
this is a great story...hot and the same time its so funny...i love when bella blushes..
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