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Reviewer: hahaEdward (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Awesome story. Couldn't review any other chapters because I was too eager to read what was next. So steamy - ungh! f-ing ungh!
Thank you for:
making Bella accept a gift without griping
making Edward RELAX
giving Jasper some attention
letting Alice be nasty
giving Emmett some of his own shit back!
LOVED IT ALL
Do you send email updates when you post a new chapter? If so, please let me know. Thanks. ryba.l@sbcglobal.net
Reviewer: RichelleCullen (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
You knew I'd want to be Reviewer Number 3400. teehee
Looking forward to the next chapter. Were you able to shush Edward??
Author's Response: I didn't know it, but I was hoping!!! Next chapter will hopefully be finished in an hour or two! Yes, I shushed Edward successfully! XD
Reviewer: lrbassmom (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
THIS is going to be fun!!!
Reviewer: lrbassmom (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Hot! Just wished the real Twilight had included some sort of release.
Reviewer: Mystique Ayir Shadow (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I like that you added this chapter in here. It holds true to Edward that he over-thinks everything. Plus I love Alice and her wit. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Mystique Ayir Shadow (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 7: Awkward
I like that you added this chapter in here. It holds true to Edward that he over-thinks everything. Plus I love Alice and her wit. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: roxinfox23 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I totally agree with you on you AN the car portion of BD was totally not Bella. Why would Edward give her a Ferrari... I would think he would get her the "little blue Audi" or something vintage... that's more her speed not his! Great story btw!
Reviewer: AndreaTangerine (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Update soon plz! Loved this chapter! YAAAAAAAAAAAY!
Reviewer: Mystique Ayir Shadow (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 5: Consequences
Very HOT! I must say I love the way you write them. There are differences from SM's (of course) but I believe you capture the characters very well. I've always wondered what the intimate moments would be like in words. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Bella liked the cold water of the shower nozzle so she might like my suggestion. Feel free to use it.
One hot summer day with no airconditioning, my husband tried to cool me down with a popsicle. Very exciting at first, but ended up painful. If you think brainfreeze hurts... He had fun trying to warm me back up (and the popsicle tasted good).
Author's Response: My, my. This is deliciously naughty. I've tucked this one away for safe keeping! Thanks!
Reviewer: StarryStarryNight (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I love this story and can't wait for another update!! I especially love the strength of the relationship between Bella and Edward. You really bring out a importance in the core of their relationship which is so important!!
Reviewer: Chassy369 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2009 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I've come in late to this story but wow it got me hooked!
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: soccer25eb (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 3: Accomplice
I really liked how you involved alice, alot of stories i have read dont ever include alice.
Reviewer: soccer25eb (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 2: Brainstorming, Interrupted
awesome chapter!!! I would have never thought about 'the smell', but it is so true. Nice job with thinking up all tne little details.
Reviewer: twilightbloom (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Okay, this is gonna be a kind of long review...
I just found this story (courtesy of the Perk Pak!) and have read most of it in the last two days. I love it! I really like the way you've taken so much basic canon material and "fleshed it out" to make it more realistic (and I truly LOVE your smut!!). I think what I love the most is that you've delved into what it means to explore that intersection that love, trust and lust really is that goes into making that deep committment that is marriage. Your Bella and Edwward are totally in character but not over-idealized. I really appreciate that. Lots of other fics focus on the sex (not that I'm complaining) but do it at the expense of the story itself; your story doesn't fall into that trap and that's one of the reasons I like it so well. It's a well-though out story line that includes so many aspects of relationship and doesn't shy away from the reality that sex (espcecially between human and vampire) is an unknown that has to be negotiated carefully but can still be HOT...I only wish that I had had the kind of wisdom to think these issues through LOL. And BTW, I agree with you about the car; I was always bothered by the dynamic of Bella's "before" and "after" car. I think you did a fine job and it's a rockin' car! Now that I'm all caught up, I can't wait for your next update!
I've been reading some of your other fics and I love your work!!
Reviewer: abitobsessive (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 6: Unexpected
Oh. Dear. God.
Reviewer: momoffour (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Please, please, please, please, please, please!!!!!! We need another story!!! I'm dying over here. I just found this last night and I have been reading non stop and just finished. When can we expect another chapter??? You are such a great writer!!
Reviewer: SmugUnicorn (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:58 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I started reading this story 3 days ago & now see why it's the number 1 Most Favourite Storys on Twilighted. LOVE IT. Can't wait for more chapters. Are you going to take it all the way to the Honeymoon? Can't wait for that. I think this story is very well written, it show they have a connection besides sex & I think the sex brings them closer together. Absolutely love it. Thanks.
Reviewer: closettwilighter (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 1: Frustrated
Please, oh Please! Oh Please!!!! Update! I'm dying here!
Laura, c'mon baby! I need it soooo badly!
Author's Response: I'll be submitting the next chapter today (Tuesday)!
Reviewer: Mamma4ever (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 10: Control
OME!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS HAWT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: vamptramp16 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8: Slight Change of Plans
Wow.......Nicely done!
Reviewer: absmw1618 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
great chapter, i love this story. cant wait for more :)
Reviewer: Susan Hails (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
Absolutly love this story, when will you be posting more?
Reviewer: Mom of 2 in WI (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 18: 13 Days
I love that she had input and also had a cute reason for choosing it. I don't like that caveman attitude either and Bella sure wouldn't put up with it!
Reviewer: BethyBoo (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 10: Control
I loved it! Your story is awesome.... although I was a little disapointed she didn't give him a lapdance first! ;)
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